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It's All Relative Chapter 33

Sep 25, 2010 08:13

It’s All Relative 33
Author: hawkbehere (hawkbehere2@yahoo.com)
Rated: PG, for language
Disclaimer: The majority of these characters are not mine. No copyright infringement intended.

A/N: Micro-burst domestic hospital chapter. All mistakes are mine. All my love and massive thanks to Rosemary for reading. Love to Anne, Jessica, xenavirgin, law_nerd and ( Read more... )

Comments 32

flyhiwithme2 September 26 2010, 12:15:26 UTC

Wow. This was an awesome peek into the life and love of Andy and Miranda. You weave such emotionally moving words with their biting teasing. I'm just lovin' it!
I almost feel embarrassed being a fly on their wall, but I'm living with it.

hawkbehere September 27 2010, 18:52:11 UTC

Thank you, flyhi. Live with it? If I could just shut these other people around them up--that would be the whole story and it'd be finished!

I do appreciate your writing.

pure_ecstasy6 September 26 2010, 15:48:16 UTC

I really enjoy your writing. =D

hawkbehere September 27 2010, 18:54:00 UTC

I greatly appreciate your writing to tell me so. Thank you very much.

Trying to pop in to say... pzexile September 27 2010, 10:53:20 UTC

how much I adore your Miranda.

It is fascinating how little by little you reveal the many facets of Miranda's personality and character, that always has me agog for the next installment.

I loved how a pain free Miranda could not resist teasing Andy about fashion, but then showed her how touched she really was by what Andy was trying to express to her, by saying, “I will wear blue, my love. For you.”

A chapter indeed for romantics!

Thank you.

Re: Trying to pop in to say... hawkbehere September 27 2010, 19:00:08 UTC

As you well know, PZ, I'm no romantic. I'm completely hard-boiled.

But I'm so glad you enjoyed it.

Holy Mary, mother of God, I wish I were on the way to Tesco right now, over the river and past the cygnet.

Thank you.

Me.

gin781 September 30 2010, 20:55:54 UTC

These last few chapters and really the whole story is amazing. I have been busy with school and am on a 2 week break. Finally able to catch up on some of my favorite stories. This one is one of them. I'm looking forward to reading more.

Gin

hawkbehere October 5 2010, 02:25:57 UTC

Looking forward to posting more. Perhaps tomorrow, actually. Thank you gin. I know you've been reading a long time and I do appreciate it.

A break tuesboomer October 4 2010, 23:07:34 UTC

Beautiful. Loved this, "gay-or gayish." So out of character, that 'gayish' hedging due to the meds. Very subtle. I had been working my way through the journal of someone who is very prolific............ and very troubled. By Sat. night I was saying, "man I really need a break from this, I need to read some Hawk!" I checked and there it was, this update.

Re: A break hawkbehere October 5 2010, 03:09:06 UTC

I know right? Poor Miranda. Completely bitchy and then suddenly romantic Miranda. Go figure.

I hope you're enjoying your journey through that gloomy journal, but always feel free to come over to the easy side of the street, so to speak (laughing gently). I'm less prolific than anyone on Earth but I do love my characters. As I suppose you have gathered from reading..

More quite soon. Thank you so much for reading! I really so appreciate your thoughtful comments.