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It's All Relative 35-B

Nov 05, 2011 17:23

It’s All Relative 35-B
Author: hawkbehere (hawkbehere@yahoo.com)
Rated: PG

A/N: If you’ve forgotten who Peter Sagong is, he’s Miranda and Andy’s FBI friend.

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mayireadtoday November 5 2011, 18:22:41 UTC

I feel really bad for Isabelle because it looks like she had a true dissociate state or psychotic break or whatever it was (I've seen too much Criminal Minds). I hope she gets a happy ending somehow somewhere.

hawkbehere November 7 2011, 07:45:21 UTC

Well, she probably will. Most of my characters tend to get happy endings--it's a failing of mine. Thank you for reading and for taking the time to write.

poppinswannabe November 5 2011, 18:28:26 UTC

Whoa. That was an amazingly awesome chapter!! Loved every word! I especially enjoyed how Miranda actually thought she could keep the whole wedding trip a secret! Ha! Not with that many people! I'm surprised she's not taking the Dr with her! Just as a precaution! Lol!

Great chapter as always!
Thanks for writing!
Nikki

hawkbehere November 7 2011, 07:48:44 UTC

Isn't that the truth? I think she's hedging her bets with the people she's taking. If they'd wanted to shoot or poison her, they've all already had ample opportunity. It strikes me as a very Miranda thing to do--as much as she denigrates the intelligence of others on occasion, she can't command that people NOT have common sense, no matter what she thinks.

Thank YOU for writing--and for reading.

jfreda November 5 2011, 18:36:20 UTC

What a pair of chapters. I laughed out loud at the stroppy camel and the pleasure increased as I continued reading. I'm so glad to see you and your deft touch back in action.

hawkbehere November 7 2011, 07:49:45 UTC

Why, thank you jfreda. I'm glad to be back. Thanks for reading--and for writing.

kdsusa3 November 5 2011, 18:42:28 UTC

Ahhhhhhh....You have made my month. Great to see that you have come back. The work itself is brilliant as always, and I love how your characters interact with each other. Not to mention the humor and other emotions that are present throughout. Lovely darlin', simply lovely. Thank you.

hawkbehere November 7 2011, 07:55:45 UTC

Ah...the leaf!!

Thank you for reading. I'm glad you're enjoying the interaction between my cast of 1000s. They're a gabby bunch. I've learned my lesson with this story about OCs, or rather, my penchant for them. I'm happy the story's still holding together for you and I always love hearing from you. Thanks again.

Yay! wilmarth13 November 5 2011, 19:30:53 UTC

I love it. This many chapters in and the catalyst, the horrible person who hurt Miranda is suddenly not at all what she seemed. Kudos to you and holy wow for all the psychological mind f***s that you've implemented throughout these updates. I always read through your chapters and think just how damn smart you are, the nifty words and the obvious life experience (or at the very least a differing perspective from my own) make me truly think. Also, I love that Isabelle is a history nerd.

Good stuff, I could go on and on but I'll leave it with I'm glad to see you back with this and I look forward to catching up with you. To that end, I think I'll go write an email.

Jess

Re: Yay! hawkbehere November 7 2011, 08:30:15 UTC

Yes, the catalyst is back. I always planned for her to come back and she showed up this time. And Jess, since you actually know me, you know that any rumours that I have even two spare neurons to rub together are vastly exaggerated. Thank you for reading and for writing, sweetie, and I'll answer your email after my breakfast. I'm on cuppa coffee three!