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hazelayes

Follow up to "The Meanest Thing"story

May 23, 2006 12:46

Not the only

(a follow-on from the Meanest Thing)

by Hazelayes

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st_crispins May 23 2006, 13:15:45 UTC

This was really nice and you definitely captured the banter.

I'm afraid in the flurry of end of semester grading I missed the original story at mfuwss, but I'll try to catch up ASAP.

Feedback, thank you! hazelayes May 23 2006, 13:47:34 UTC

I'm very glad you liked it :D I hope you think the same of the first part, posted 11th May, 2006.

periwinkle27 January 10 2007, 00:21:43 UTC

I don't know why I never commented on this portion. I love the plips and pings, and this: Napoleon's shoulders hunched involuntarily

It sets the mood nicely.

Lovely banter, well written

Another portion anyone? hazelayes January 10 2007, 10:05:59 UTC

Hey, thanks for the blast from the past!

It seems so long ago now that I wrote this it's almost like someone else's story. Thank you so much for unearthing it again and commenting. I suppose if I feel that detached from it, now is the time to revise and rework. Are you doing anything at the moment... she asks nonchalantly. ;)