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Team Epilogue: 14. Drunk as a house elf.

Apr 19, 2009 06:50

Title: Don't Drink and Shag
Team: Epilogue
Author: nolagal
Prompt: 14. Drunk as a house elf.
Wordcount: ~4,100
Rating: R
Warnings: Voyeurism, magical bonding.
Summary: Ron knew Harry was drunk at the Beltane festival, but when Draco Malfoy joins Harry in drowning his sorrows, the impossible becomes possible and Ron witnesses it all.
Author's Note: ( Read more... )

r, fic, prompt: 14. drunk as a house elf, team epilogue, round ii

Comments 54

monster_o_love April 19 2009, 21:09:37 UTC

Awwww, what a sweet story!!! Ron so did get off on watching Harry & Draco, but hey, who could blame him? Loved when Harry said he wouldn't have minded if Lucius had been the one who wanted to 'thank' him!! hee hee!!!! And I LOVED the adorably fluffy ending!!! Good job!!

nolagal April 20 2009, 00:18:08 UTC

It's total fluff (and chaos) Thanks so much for your fantastic comment!

sugareey April 19 2009, 21:27:19 UTC

HEE. This just made me laugh so much. I love how well you embraced the prompt, and used Beltane as another too!

And really, I loved how this was from Ron's PoV. It sounded like him and the flashbacks worked really well. And Narcissa hitting on Harry? LOL. So awesome.

Nice work with this! =D

nolagal April 20 2009, 00:18:41 UTC

Ron had to tell the story, I don't know why but he just did! *grins* Thanks so much!

theodoraleft April 19 2009, 22:22:37 UTC

Brilliant! ditto all previous comments, especially Lucius' creepy cane, and I just love the idea of Narcissa flirting with Harry. And tell me, is Hermione pregnant now...?

nolagal April 20 2009, 00:19:33 UTC

I don't know if Hermione's pregnant. I'm sure she has charts and notes on the probability though! (and Ron would just ignore it all)
Thanks so much!

smirking_muse April 20 2009, 00:03:47 UTC

First of all, Ron was fabulous. I loved the way he stood up for Harry so loyally to all their friends, even when talking about his relationship with Ginny (which must have been a tough situation for him, since he's her older brother and all). I also found the fact that both Harry and Draco's ex-(or soon to be ex)wives were partying with younger men to be quite hilarious ( ... )

nolagal April 20 2009, 00:22:01 UTC

I didn't even realize how much cougarism happened in the fic until you pointed it out! Maybe it's worse in the wizarding world since everyone lives so long? In my mind, Ron made up most of the Lucius stuff just to embellish his story!
I think Ron liked watching more than he let on!
Thanks so much for your great comment.

drusillas_rain April 20 2009, 00:13:34 UTC

hee ^_^ cute!

nolagal April 20 2009, 00:22:16 UTC

thanks so much for reading and commenting!