Team Epilogue: 9. Reparo in time saves nine.

Apr 30, 2009 14:27

Title: Reality is Broken
Team: Epilogue
Author: acromantular
Prompt: 9. Reparo in time saves nine.
Wordcount: ~2500
Rating: very NC-17
Warnings: Adultery, spanking, very mild bondage, rimming.
Summary: What must Harry break to have what he loves?
Author's Note: Thank you to my beta, E, who somehow manages to read my handwritten scribbles, and to my fantastic ( Read more... )

nc-17, prompt: 9. reparo in time saves nine, fic, team epilogue, round ii

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monster_o_love May 3 2009, 10:09:12 UTC
So Very Hot!!! The fact that they are both in love with each other and yet continue so long with their marriages (despite the smoking hot sex!) makes me rather sad though. I love that although Draco is generally the bottom in this relationship, they are still both depicted as such incredibly strong personalities, it seems very in character. Fabulous story, luv, I very much enjoyed it!!!

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acromantular May 9 2009, 15:02:16 UTC
Eeeee, thanks! Writing that much sex made me more than a bit edgy, so glad to hear it worked.
Unfortunately, prolonged infidelity is a frequent side-effect of Epilogue-compliance; I think it made them sad, too. And Draco is going to be a pushy SOB whether he's a top or bottom. :)

So glad you liked it! ♥

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misconstrue May 3 2009, 13:16:55 UTC
... oh my goodness, that just about broke my heart because there was SO MUCH HOPE and love and sweetness and then the last chapter threw it all into a tizzy. god i hope harry just man's up!

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acromantular May 9 2009, 15:06:22 UTC
After that I doubt Harry will have much of a choice! While Ginny has clearly resolved to take the high road (whatever that means in this situation) and Harry seems poised to do something, it's still ambiguous, so let me just say I'm a big fan of happy endings. :)

Thank you for reading and commenting - I'm so glad you liked it!

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katerina_black May 3 2009, 23:20:55 UTC
Very nice. Adultery isn't my thing, but I enjoyed this anyway. :)

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acromantular May 9 2009, 15:10:02 UTC
Sorry about the adultery - it's hard to avoid in Epilogue compliant fic. But awesome to hear you still liked it, and thanks for reading outside your comfort zone!

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lily_fayline May 6 2009, 11:53:55 UTC
The end hit me hard, very powerful! Loved it, the accent on the sex, the pacing, the nine-part division, and of course the characterisations. Full marks!

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acromantular May 9 2009, 15:15:33 UTC
Awesome! The ending basically wrote itself first thing, then the rest filled in behind. With such an awesome prompt, I really wanted to stick with 9 parts - keeping it short was hard! I'm so glad to hear that the format worked, and that you liked it.
Thanks so much for reading and commenting! ♥

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nolagal May 9 2009, 05:04:15 UTC
Really well-paced. The fact that it was sex but so much more every time. And the ending is perfect.

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