Team EWE: 22. I think I saw a Pensieve like this once...

May 05, 2009 14:34

Title: A Bad Case of Deja Vu
Team: EWE
Author: bemygoodday
Prompt: 22. I think I saw a Pensieve like this once...
Wordcount: 2,200
Rating: PG
Warnings: Horrible puns.
Summary: Nothing good ever came from the Department of Mysteries, nothing good at all.
Author's Note: Thank you to Kim and Mel for the speedy beta jobs! Also, this was my first attempt at not ( Read more... )

pg, fic, team ewe, prompt: 22. i saw a pensieve like this, round ii

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meredyth_13 May 7 2009, 09:18:15 UTC
This is one of those bubbly, fuzzy, mirthful stories that makes you feel like you've been eating lemon sherbet all morning. The dry wit and sly sarky comments were adorable, and as seduction attempts go - this is definitely one of Draco's less effective approaches, and yet somehow I still think he'll get his man (and his coffee).

Delightful!

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bemygoodday May 8 2009, 04:43:08 UTC
this is definitely one of Draco's less effective approaches

Yes, but then again, at least in my head... Draco isn't exactly the master of effective approaches to anything. To me, Draco is an 'idea man', but none of his ideas ever seem to be that great.

But, like always, Draco somehow gets what he wants. There is a very this line between sanity and genius. :)

Thank you for reading and commenting!

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maggie2mw May 8 2009, 06:54:31 UTC
Yes Yes YES!!!

I love this so much, have been off HP-slash for nearly a week finishing of a major assignment, and this is the first one I jumped in right after I handed my homework in.. And this is just pretty for my mood!! Your Draco.. Haha, So much trouble just for a date hey?

Great work~

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nolagal May 8 2009, 16:28:57 UTC
I loved Draco's puns and Ron's brief appearances. Very cute!!!

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ashe_frost May 9 2009, 07:54:58 UTC
=) Awwwwwww. Oh Harry and Draco. I love fluffy humourous fic! Week one is probably one of my favorite punchlines. I also--"latte problems?" OMG. Possibly I am awake too late, but I laughed outloud. My roommate is going to yell at me in the morning.

You did a great job with your story and your prompt, and I like the way you worked in some kind of endearingly horrible puns with the line "I think I saw a Penseive like this once..." which is equally kind of punishly horrible.

You've definitely done our team proud!

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szefi May 11 2009, 20:58:18 UTC
This was funny and cute!

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