can't forget what constantly reminds you

[heads_bang]

Pairing: gd/top, gd/kiko (slight)
Rating: r 
Summary: ar, switches between the future (about 5 years from now) and the present.
When Jiyong gets in a new relationship, Seunghyun can't help but reflect on theirs.
A/N: Just trying something, 'kay~  
1,780 words~

Comments

[animalgangsta]

NARGH I LOVE THIS. sad yet beautiful :'( it's like I kinda understand Ji's POV. Like he's scared of commitment because he actually has feelings for Top as well. Aww this is lovely one shot :'D and cool way of writing it too!

[heads_bang]

AIGOO THANK YOU~ ;A;
in that sense i can empathize with Jiyong's POV as well, still yeah... Seunghyun's situation is shitty.
it's weird i love the pairing but i only think of sad stories for them..

thank you again bb for reading and commenting :) /hugs/

[animalgangsta]

Haha! -hugs back-! Yes same! I love GTOP loads and think they go best tgt but I don't know why I always write angst-y, emotionally drained stories of em. Like it's kinda hard for me to write happy shots D: haha! Probably my huge love for the genre angst xD it was a good one though your one shot! ;)

[heads_bang]

OMG YES TY~ i definitely know what you mean. fluff is so hard for me, but i love angst so much, it's painful and shitty but it can be beautiful at the same time! i love all genres but i think whenever i read fics it's the angsty ones that make the biggest impression. lol i feel like we so understand eachother :D

[jotownchica1987]

This is beautiful. I felt my own heart break a little at the last line. You paid so much attention to little details while still being pretty subtle with the actual storytelling. I love authors like you. I am going to happily read your other works. Yayness!!!! (huge round of applause)

[heads_bang]

Aww thank you so much ;A; your comment legit made me grin like a madman right now~ I put a lot of effort into this one so it means a lot to me that u like it for the reasons you do. Ty again, I'm gonna be pretentious for the rest of the night b/c of you~

[nitsa1980]

Oh god, my heart, this just broke my heart and it felt really good. I am not really good with words but thank you for starting writing gtop, we need writers like you. I really hope to read more from you :)

[heads_bang]

you are wonderful with words and your comments have made me sooo happy~ so ty ;~;
i love gtop very much as well and yup im working on some stuff atm, hopefully i'll get it posted within a few days~
and feel free to give me any crit if you want, i really wanna improve on my writing~

[seamanthedog]

Well this is heartbreaking. But I liked the way you had glimpses from Top's pov of their relationship when they were younger and then the moments of what it has become now. And the last few lines /my heart/