Comments | heartcity: [18] no one told me I was going to find you, qmi, pg

heartcity

[18] no one told me I was going to find you, qmi, pg

Dec 09, 2010 21:49

title: no one told me I was going to find you
fandom: Super Junior M
pairing: Zhou Mi/Kyuhyun
rating: PG
summary: The most interesting part of a story is how everything started. This is the story of Zhou Mi and Kyuhyun, the beginning.

( We were strangers starting out on a journey, never dreaming what we'd have to go through. )

p: zhou mi/kyuhyun, f: super junior

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heartcity December 10 2010, 18:24:59 UTC

thank you!

kamerer220 December 10 2010, 04:44:26 UTC

I am an English major so all the writing metaphors made me squee! I love Qmi too so this was win all around.

doumyoujitsukas December 10 2010, 04:48:24 UTC

i just finished a ridiculous portfolio for class, and you have no idea how delighted i was to see this on my flist. i love your writing, and this was a really different way of telling the story and you made it work really really well.

/loves all over you ♥

heartcity December 10 2010, 18:26:13 UTC

congrats on finishing your portfolio! and thank you. =)

sujuhappiness December 10 2010, 05:08:04 UTC

this style of writing is very fresh^^ I like it^^
thanks for sharing this ^^

kyudreamz39 December 10 2010, 05:08:49 UTC

The timeline, and the way the storytelling is part of the actual story ... is so good! My brain feels a bit clearer now so i can go study DX

Kyuhyun doesn't fall in love on the spot; it takes that moment for him to realize he's already gone. It's too late. --> awwwwww so cute~

Mem-ing~~~ ♥ ♥ ♥