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The Young Mr. Cain, chapter 2

Mar 10, 2008 20:34

Title: The Young Mr. Cain, chapter 2
Author: Cricket
Rating: PG-13
Summary: Even a jaded Tin Man was young once.
Disclaimer: Sadly, not mine. I'm just playing with the toys of the respectful owners.
Word Count: 1357
Author's Note: Beta'ed by the amazing angel932 and fabulous trystan830.

( It felt as though he'd been run over by a truck, a very heavy truck, repeatedly. )

Comments 16

magickboxgirl March 11 2008, 00:52:39 UTC

Wow great update. You keep writing Iwill keep coming back.

thecricket March 11 2008, 05:51:45 UTC

Thanks, glad you liked it! :)

gatechic March 11 2008, 01:03:29 UTC

Awesome chapter. Poor confused!Cain. ^_^

thecricket March 11 2008, 05:52:31 UTC

Thanks! And poor Cain is probably going to stay confused for a while. *huggles him*

dmr2158 March 11 2008, 01:10:35 UTC

I am so glad you updated this. I can't wait for it to continue. However, how can you stop there?????

thecricket March 11 2008, 05:53:49 UTC

I'm already working on the next chapter, so hopefully I won't keep you guys hanging on this cliffy for too long!

Thanks for reading :)

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thecricket March 11 2008, 05:55:06 UTC

Thanks! More coming soon - well as soon as I can beat this plotline into submission :)

trystan830 March 11 2008, 02:06:41 UTC

"Something very strange is going on here."
i hate when that happens.....

thecricket March 11 2008, 05:55:45 UTC

Strange things seem to happen often in the OZ ;)

trystan830 March 11 2008, 13:34:52 UTC

well if they happen often enough, are they really strange? or just "normal" for the O.Z.?