- Doubt < TomoxRui > Ch11 -

Aug 09, 2011 22:46

Title: Doubt
Chapter: 11/?
Author: heartsthatflies 
Genre: Fluff, romance, angst, drama
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: Malexmale relationship, language, sexual content
Pairings: TomoxRui
Disclaimer: Vistlip belongs to themselves, the pictures I don’t own either.
Summary: Something was off with their bassist. Tomo couldn’t exactly put his finger on it, but the last few days he ( Read more... )

fanfic, doubt, vistlip, tomoxrui

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heartsthatflies August 18 2011, 10:15:25 UTC
Hmm, let me know if it's still unclear after the next chapter. O:

Yaaay~ Kouki. :3

Thank yoou for your comment! <3

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kei_kyuuketsuki October 26 2011, 15:08:41 UTC
Excuse me..I'm sorry..I've been reading this fanfic from the first chapter..
Well, I know..I'm very sorry cause I've never leaving any comment..>////<

I like Tomo's character here..he's really patient in dealing with Rui's problem..
I was curious about Rui's problem..

Mm..to tell you the truth, when I write a comment here, I haven't read this chapter..
the last time I read this fanfic was chapter 8..
I can't found chapter 9 and 10..
Would you mind giving me the link to chapter 9 & 10? I'm very sorry for asking you this..>////<

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heartsthatflies October 31 2011, 09:19:45 UTC
Oh hello. :D aw, it's better late than never right? ^^ I would just be happy with a "I like it"-comment since then I would know that people do like it haha :P

Tomo is a sweetheart alright. :3

Huu you can't find them? O: that's really weird..
ch9: http://heartsthatflies.livejournal.com/3526.html
ch10: http://heartsthatflies.livejournal.com/3948.html

does it work? O: wonder why you can't see them.
It's no problem really~ so don't worry about it. :)

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kei_kyuuketsuki October 31 2011, 12:39:30 UTC
Oh, thank you! Thank you very much..(>////<)
The links worked alright..
I'll read those two chapters and give the comment there..:D
Again, thank you very much! b(>w<)d

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heartsthatflies November 1 2011, 10:45:51 UTC
Yay! :D no problem. Hope you enjoy~~
<33

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kei_kyuuketsuki November 1 2011, 13:07:08 UTC
Done! Oh my..at last I can finish reading all the chapters! o(>////<)o

Rui's not coming home..Tomo's still waiting for him..
the one who called Rui in the last part..was it Tomo? ><

Oh! I want to ask one thing:
“She kicked me out Shin.” he slowly swung back and forward on the swing he was sitting on, soaked by the heavy rain.
Shin? Who is Shin? I forgot about Shin's appearance in this story..or is he just appeared in this chapter? I'm sorry..my bad..>////<

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heartsthatflies November 3 2011, 12:18:14 UTC
O: wait, how many chapters do you see? There's 14 of them, you don't see the last ones?

I'm just wondering since it would explain why this chapter is confusing.. it's not the last one! o:

ch12: http://heartsthatflies.livejournal.com/4388.html
ch13: http://heartsthatflies.livejournal.com/5082.html
ch14: http://heartsthatflies.livejournal.com/5296.html

:O

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kei_kyuuketsuki November 3 2011, 16:20:35 UTC
eeeeeeeeeeeh!? TAT ..ah, I missed the other chapters again..(>///<)
Thank you for the link! Going to read it now! (>w<)
Thank you so much..sorry for bothering you like this..T^T

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heartsthatflies November 3 2011, 21:03:24 UTC
Haha aww it's nothing to worry about really. :) I'm just glad it worked out! Really curious why it's like that though.. O: don't you see the chapters in my livejournal at all? Totally weird o: but I'm not really familiar with livejournal either so.. haha. ^^'

But don't worry! Hope you enjoyyy~~

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