Comments | hectic1: Half Blast- Chapter 2

hectic1

Half Blast- Chapter 2

Jul 11, 2009 10:58

Disclaimer: Erica Hahn and Callie Torres belong to ABC/Shondaland. No profit intended.

Rating: PG. At least for now. There's bound to be some language and some adult situations.

Pairing: Callie/Erica

Summary: Erica is talked into letting a documentary television crew descend on Seattle Grace. While in her personal life, she's realizing a deepening ( Read more... )

callica, grey's anatomy, fanfic

Comments 23

berlygruvr July 11 2009, 16:49:00 UTC

Oh Ian! I kinda liked his character when he and Erica were talking in the car in the last story. I hope he won't be causing trouble for our girls!
Can't wait for the soap opera to start!

hectic1 July 12 2009, 00:27:30 UTC

Yeah, I was going to jump right into the show aspect but felt like I needed a little bit more set up. Ian's an unpredictable kind of guy. I'm not sure what he's going to be up to when he makes the scene. Could be good, could be bad. We'll see... Chapter 3 should start the integration of the show into Erica's life. And into Callie's for that matter.

mcortho July 11 2009, 18:08:49 UTC

I'm loving this so far. Please tell me our girls will stay together through all this!

hectic1 July 12 2009, 00:28:57 UTC

Thanks. Our girls will stay together through all this... maybe. ;))

sherlock2040 July 11 2009, 23:01:05 UTC

I'm finding myself a little bit jealous by this, I was amusing myself with thinking about how the characters would react if a film crew arrived at Seattle Grace then refreshed my friends page to find the first part of your story... and now I'm jealous because not only is it awesome, it's so much better than my idea!

Excellent work, I definitely look forward to later chapters :)))

hectic1 July 12 2009, 00:30:54 UTC

It's like they say, 'ya snooze, ya lose.' Seriously, though, thanks for the compliment and thanks for coming along for the ride.

one_escape July 11 2009, 23:14:05 UTC

I liked this, and that Callie just randomly find out about Erica's past during surgery.
Oh, Erica being moody/bitchy is always fun. So, is Ian going to make an appearance? I sort of liked him before, I think.

hectic1 July 12 2009, 00:40:55 UTC

I was a little iffy about this chapter. I wrote four different versions then decided all of them were too ambitious so I pared it down to just focusing on Callie and Erica.

I like moody/bitchy Erica a lot too. It's a fine line between making her cranky and making her come off as a shrill bitch. I was kind of close to that line here, I think. Oh well, I'm glad you liked it.

xxinfinityz July 12 2009, 02:56:38 UTC

Ouch. Moody Erica and upset Callie? Kinda reminds me of the 'Rise up' scene ;) I hope they will stick together though.

As for Ian, I really liked him when he talked Erica through everything in the car in the earlier part of your story. But I hope he doesn't stand in the way of Callica.

Awesome job! I am so looking forward to the next chapter. =)

hectic1 July 12 2009, 14:14:35 UTC

Yeah, like all couples they occasionally hit the emotional speedbump. It can't always be sunshine and roses. A 'Rise Up' comparison? Harsh. It wasn't that bad, was it? At least I was trying to make it make sense. I don't think I can say the same for the writer of that gargabe episode.

Ian will be showing up to complicate Erica's life further. That's all I'm saying.

Thanks. I'm glad you liked it despite all comparisons to 'Rise Up.' ;))

xxinfinityz July 12 2009, 14:31:44 UTC

No no, I totally didn't mean it that way. It's just that rise up was the only Callica argument scene shown on Grey's and so it kind of reminds me of that. Sorry. I'm not really that good at expressing myself.

And definitely, yours make way more sense than rise up. Hehe. :) This should have been the plot shown instead. I believe Erica is actually more rational than to walk away because of an argument.

hectic1 July 12 2009, 18:24:31 UTC

Oh okay, I hear ya. Honestly, I don't really consider this chapter an argument as much as I consider it two cranky women who have had a long day. I don't know about you, but when I get overly tired I don't have the patience to 'make nice' with other people, even people I care about. I think that's more of where they're at in this scene.

And you're right, Erica is an extremely rational person. I think if things got too heated or whatever, she'd take a step back, but she wouldn't just pack up her toys and leave. That whole thing is still just bizarre. One good thing that came out of it, if you want to look at the silver lining, is that her leaving was so open ended that it gives fan fiction writers infinite options as to where she went and what she's doing now. And who said I was a glass half empty kind of person?