That was so well done, so full of tension and suspense and confusion that kept me on the edge of my seat in between the unbelievably hot sex, that you accomplished something rare for me -- I usually strongly prefer bottom!Jensen, but damn, that last scene?? Hot as hell. Rarely does someone pull off Jensen being a top for me, but you really really did. Wow. Thanks, Lynsey
All I can say is I agree with everyone above me, it is insanely amazing and so hot...you took him a porn star and didn't turn it to cheese like it could have so easily been.
Fantastic story, I'm going to tell everyone I know in the supernatural fandom to read it!
This was truly wonderful - hot beyond words (LOTS of panty explosions) but also achingly hard to read at times, as frustrating as Jared was frustrated in trying to get through to Jensen. And switching the epilogue to Jensen's point of view was perfect - it finally let us readers in to the heart of the conflict. Really glad for a happy ending too - I think you won it fairly. Well done! Definitely a keeper! -Samazon
Wow, just . . . wow. I was a little worried there in the intensely porny middle about how you were going to resolve this, but you did it BEAUTIFULLY! I am so deeply impressed with how you managed to work in that much kink and still have it be all about the love in the end. Just . . . wow, and thank you for taking the time to write this monster epic *g*
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Fantastic story, I'm going to tell everyone I know in the supernatural fandom to read it!
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Well done! Definitely a keeper!
-Samazon
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