Another new poem!

[hellz_angel_802]

Yeah this one actually required some thought...I don't know I really want some feed back on it so everyone please read and tell me what you think! Much Appreciated

Comments

[death1_life6]

wow fucking awesome, I could really relate with this, you really shed light on how the world behaves to those of us who are different and refuse to conform. And how the world locks society in with stereotyping,resentment,and hatred, crippling the foundation and spoiling the soil of the world for each generation to come.

My favorite lines are:

They could not break me
I'm no criminal
Never will I allow myself to succumb to
their ridiculous accusations
I will not admit defeat

Those words are burned into my chest, anyway it's amazing as usual I love it.xoxoxoxoxoxo

[hellz_angel_802]

wow thanks =) this actually took a while to write, tried to get the right feel for it. Thanks for the comment!

[dwigsgotissues]

What up Son, this is pretty good. You're a very good writer. You actually remind me of myself a little...a decade or two ago. At any rate, let's cut to the chase..... i went to 135 when i was young....lived on Fanny Lou, but moved outta Queens in 92.... when i read your shit, it brings me back to Hillside Ave, and Jamaica Ave, and Hollis n shit.....So i added you on my F-List. The name is Dwight. Stay Up!

[hellz_angel_802]

Thanks man, I'm still living here in Queens, high school and everything but I write a lot and I'm glad you like it. Yeah queens is madd cool to grow up in, chillin on the ave and stuff everyone is madd cool here, so many different people and i love it.