Fic: An Attempt to Tip the Scales (Part 2/2)

[hengilas]

Title: An Attempt to Tip the Scales
Author: hengilas
Rating: NC-17
Pairings: Kurt/Blaine, minor Blaine/Jeff (Warbler)
Warnings: Vampire AU, romance, graphic sex, language, angst, slight talk of minor character death (Blaine's mom)
Word Count: 16,959
Summary: Blaine and Kurt have been best friends for the past nine years, but now that they're more aware of

Comments

[its_klaining]

Beautiful. I loved it!

[hengilas]

Thank you so much! I'm happy you liked it! <3

[hallowchaser]

I really enjoyed this... it was a fun read and gosh Blaine and his insecurities. ;)

[hengilas]

Aw, awesome! Good to hear! Yes, Blaine angsted quite a lot in this one, ha. Thank you very much. =)

[curtslade]

Wow! I love this! I think my favorite part was ImmortalNaughtyJeff.:) I love seeing him like that. I imagine grot21cNick would never cheat on this version of Jeff. ImmortalJeff OTOH...:) Blaine and Kurt are so perfect for each other in this. Love it!

[hengilas]

Hahaha. That is so true, I never thought about it. GR!Nick would never ever cheat on this Jeff (but then again, this Kurt is also different from the GR!Kurt that he has interest towards. :P)
Thank you, bb! I'm glad you read it/enjoyed it. Hurrayy... (I'm trying to finish Chapter 2 right now. You will see WHY it took so long.)

[curtslade]

I also loved the way you portrayed Thad, and that you gave Wes mind reading abilities.
Funny thing is, I'm so used to GR that I actually expected Blaine to go a lot further with ImmmortalJeff when it came to that part. Horrible, I know.XD
True that Nick wouldn't be interested in this Kurt, but there could always be someone. But with this Jeff being so perfect and all, GRNick wouldn't consider cheating probably until after ImmortalJeff cheated first. Plus aging would be a big factor in their relationship. Immortal Jeff would lose interest in GRNick as soon as his looks started to go.
I think WAY too much about this stuff.:)
Can't wait for the next chapter of ABW!!! You've got me quite intrigued.

[hengilas]

I love your thoughts, it's all good. ;)
The next chapter's finished! My betas are just busy with their own stories and such. I'll say that it could be up by way later tonight, but I'm more just hoping. D: In any case, it's like nine thousand words and split into two parts, so you'll have enough reading to do to hopefully make up for the wait. hah

[keri_lin]

This is quite good. I liked it.

[hengilas]

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it. :)

[elva_barr]

This was wonderful. Maybe it sounds a little weird, but something in the way you wrote this intensely reminded me of a comic book, and I absolutely adored that, I don't know if it was intentional but it worked so well with how I imagined this playing out in my mind. I love the universe you created here, and this story is just fantastic.

[hengilas]

Oh, wow! That's really cool that you thought that. I guess I would slightly credit X-Men for inspiration? haha. I didn't read the comics, but my obsession with films was revived right around the time I was hurrying to finish this, so yes. =D Thank you so much!

[elva_barr]

Yeah, I don't know, there were just a few parts that I could easily see in my mind as comic book panels, like this one:

"That's the major difference between them. The only urges Kurt has are to kiss, to feel close, and to get off. Kurt doesn't understand Blaine's need to have and to take. To keep.

It's the reason Blaine introduced himself to Kurt on the playground nine years ago. He sensed something he liked about Kurt, and at the time he thought it was just a friendship he wanted, but no. His vampire side knew he'd want this.

He wants Kurt all the time. Badly.

Maybe Jeff's right. Blaine is getting too dangerous for Kurt."

I can just visualize that really easily as a panel, does that make sense? Really cool, in any case!

[hengilas]

Aww, neat! Yes, I can totally see that. I guess my translation of vampire!fic = comic book worlds. Thanks for noticing/thinking that! =)