Comments | her_pseudonym: Good Girl (3/3)

her_pseudonym

Good Girl (3/3)

Jan 08, 2010 03:39

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Gillian’s hand reached for the door before her mind caught up with what she was doing. Her heart pounded so hard she was amazed her fingers didn’t shake as she engaged the lock. Not with fear. Arousal. An almost crippling rush unlike anything she had felt before. She never took her eyes off Cal, waiting to see ( Read more... )

fanfic, lie to me

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her_pseudonym January 9 2010, 09:27:25 UTC

Thank you!

This story took me over a month to write (I wrote Leaving Vegas after I started it, actually) and I really struggled to get through it. So it's especially gratifying to get such great comments. I was working through a lot of character stuff with this one and I really wanted to get the tone right. I'm happy it worked for you. Really happy.

And I appreciate that you commented!

wickedground January 9 2010, 00:01:13 UTC

I don't even know what to say so I just agree with everything spacekid77 said.

So very good. And different; not your normal PWP, on the contrary. Well done!

her_pseudonym January 9 2010, 09:28:14 UTC

LOL. Again, thank you.

"Different" is good to hear. I like that. :)

Thanks so much for reading and commenting.

wickedground January 9 2010, 12:10:08 UTC

(with "your" PWP, I'm talking about PWPs in general ... since your smut stories always have character insights)

starfirefic January 9 2010, 01:29:46 UTC

I've just left a fairly detailed (and very squee-y) review over at FF.net, but forgot to mention the critical point that I will be reccing this one far and wide, because *dayum*, it's good fanfic squishy!

her_pseudonym January 9 2010, 09:29:51 UTC

I'm still working on a reply to your FF.net review, which frankly staggered and humbled me. Thank you so much for all your kind words. I am SO glad you enjoyed the story. I had your comment about wanting more dirty talking in mind when I began this story and fleshed out the concept. I'm glad my "target audience" got so much from it!

And thanks for the rec. Again: flattered.

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her_pseudonym January 9 2010, 09:30:40 UTC

As a BSG fan, "frakkin' hot" pleases me to no end. I'm glad you liked it! And am thrilled you want to reread it. :) Thanks so much for your comment!

sunspawn January 9 2010, 04:41:23 UTC

Holy shit. My god, panties on fire. This was so freakin' hot! As much as I like fluffy romantic stories, this is really refreshing and HOT. Did I mention hot? :D

Btw, totally read this at B&N, while surrounded by children. /rebel

her_pseudonym January 9 2010, 09:32:11 UTC

LMAO. "Panties on fire". Yes! Mission accomplished!

And damn...go rebel go! I'm not sure how you managed to get through part 3 in a public place, but I'm impressed. ;)