Firefly - Shadowed Heart

Jul 30, 2009 19:35

Title: Shadowed Heart
Rating: PG
Disclaimer: The characters and settings referred to here are not mine, they belong to Joss. No infringement is intended and no profit is made.
Author's note: Another piece written for a prompt at comment_fic. Set some time after the movie. With thanks to geek_mama_2 for beta reading.

Shadowed Heart )

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americanfairy July 30 2009, 20:03:04 UTC
That was good!

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hereswith July 31 2009, 16:43:14 UTC
Thank you!

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apckrfan July 30 2009, 21:24:14 UTC
It's always your stuff that captures my attention when I feel I've been away from this 'ship for too long and you always make me wonder why I've stayed away so long.

Thank you for another enjoyable piece.

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hereswith August 1 2009, 12:48:23 UTC
That's really kind of you to say and I'm flattered to hear it. I drifted away for a long while too, but lately I've been missing them.

Thank you for reading and for your comment.

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eastpath July 30 2009, 21:28:43 UTC
Oh delightful. Thank you!!

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hereswith August 1 2009, 12:53:48 UTC
I'm glad you liked it. Thanks for letting me know :-)

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outinthestorm July 30 2009, 22:49:25 UTC
One of the things I love best about your writing is that you always seem to capture the emotions perfectly, considering how short a piece it is.
Very nice.

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hereswith August 1 2009, 15:54:05 UTC
I'm glad you think so, it means a lot that the emotions ring true. Thank you!

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luxuria_oceanus July 30 2009, 23:04:06 UTC
*lets out a big sigh* ;.; Beautiful.

“Hey.” He catches her shoulders and pulls her around, slides his palms down her arms, his warm fingers coaxing hers, curled in and clenched, to unlock. “You with me here, darlin’?”

*lip wibbles* That line just... perfect visualization there, along with an ache. I'm going to go day dream now.

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hereswith August 1 2009, 17:25:13 UTC
Thank you very much. ♥ And I'm really happy that particular passage worked so well for you.

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