[SMAPfic] Dirty

May 05, 2011 00:25

→ I swear the title is not a blatant one-word summary sorry?

Dirty

2top; pg13; 615 words | Showers are his best friends. )

not on crack i'm on smap, ❤ 2top, writing, this is fanfiction

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yue_akuma May 5 2011, 00:14:48 UTC
Oh gosh, giggled so much! XD

Poor Nakai, but somehow this image of a clean freak goes pretty well with him! ;D they should do more dirty btw!

Anywayyyy, thanks a lot for sharing, it was epicakes! ^_______^

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hereticpop May 5 2011, 13:29:31 UTC
making fun of Nakai's cleanfreakiness is always a good choice, I guess. [or just making fun of any freakiness that Nakai has] they can never do enough dirty. someone just needs to write it. XD

thank youuuuu~ for the comment. ^.^

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h1m1tsu May 5 2011, 01:47:58 UTC
http://i623.photobucket.com/albums/tt313/yuuki-chii/1111-1.jpg

THIS came in my head /\
(Sex-god Kimura in sheets UAHSUAHSUS <3333)
Just a perfect fic for this pairing. I love your style *-*

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hereticpop May 5 2011, 13:34:55 UTC
ASDFGHJKLKJHGFDSDFGHJK OMG YOU'RE THAT PERSON WHO DOES THAT SUPER-CUTE AND LOVELY FANART. <333 YOU'RE SO AWESOME. I ABSOLUTELY LOVE IT.

[lolol, that tiny Nakai in the corner is so adorable *squishes him*]

THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR COMMENTING WITH THIS CUTENESS. <3

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pu_ni_yo May 5 2011, 02:23:41 UTC
Only Nakai could refuse Kimura because of his freaking cleaning obsession... xD
So funny and so good!! I want MOAR.... xD

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hereticpop May 5 2011, 13:38:17 UTC
Ikr, who in their right mind would refuse? [I'm totally on Kimu's side, morning sex in messy sheets ftw! Nakai doesn't know what he's missing! XD]
thank you, bb. lol, I wish there was be more. :P

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dictionarysays May 5 2011, 02:26:05 UTC
OMGOMGOMGOMG.
YOU DID NOT NOTIFY ME OF THIS BEFOREHAND!!

I think this is what dying feels like. All those other times I was dying was a lie because, srsly. SRSLY. The entry alone before I even went past the cut squeezed my heart and HOLYFUCK I WAS NEEDING 2TOP FIC LIKE I CAN'T EVEN TELL YOU.

THIS IS MY KINDA' NAGGING IDEA.

What is with you and out-of-this-world characterization? Do you sleep in 2TOP's rooms? Do you actually know them IRL and you're just not telling us? Because, idk, this shit feels spot on and downright voyeuristic. 89

He pokes it experimentally with his finger... feels like smth Nakai-bb would do. HIS DISCOVERY IS COMPLETELY HESITANT AND UNSURE AND I COULDN'T SEE IT GOING DOWN ANY OTHER WAY.

ALSOALSO. YOU GAVE ME MAGICAL TINGLES WITH STUFF LIKE THIS:

Oh. Oh. He now remembers the bed sheets rolling uncomfortably under his back, he remembers biting down on his lip until it hurt, Kimura above him, moaning and cursing and doing all sorts of things that felt real good.Fuck you so many times, bb, for making me ( ... )

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dictionarysays May 5 2011, 02:27:01 UTC
AHAHAHA I WENT OUTSIDE YOUR LAYOUT DOES THAT MAKE ME COOL? 8DDD

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hereticpop May 5 2011, 13:12:48 UTC
I THINK IT DOES. NOT MANY PEOPLE MANAGED THAT. <3

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hereticpop May 5 2011, 13:09:07 UTC
I was never even going to write it in the first place, but 2top always have their way with us however they please, don't they I wish.

and you don't even need to tell me, I KNOW. MOAR 2TOP FIC NOW PLEASE. [it just always comes back to this.]

Do you sleep in 2TOP's rooms?
don't be fueling my imagination. actually, I live in Nakai's closet and fap to him and Kimu sexing every other night. I get off the hardest when Nakai tops. he tops in that shower, btw, this much I can tell you. ...actually, in the first version, Kimu's "Let's fuck" was "Fuck me", but I thought maybe the wanton-whore-ness levels were too high for him early in the morning. "Let's fuck" is much more Kimu-like anyway. 8D I don't really think I am getting into that shower, but if you feel like it, douzo. [I think you do absolutely amazing when it comes to 2top bathroom sex]. XD ( ... )

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zheinpathos May 5 2011, 10:06:16 UTC
LOL this is hilarious! <3

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hereticpop May 5 2011, 13:39:14 UTC
thankyou, bb. <3

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