[smapfic] Adagio
dedicated to all the kimutsu shippers on my flist, in particular g_pumpkin and tsuristyle
with huge thanks to dictionarysays for the betareading and flailing
Adagio
( kimu/tsu; nc-17; 10 853 words | and part of it is because Kimura is scary and part of it is because Tsuyoshi has a raging crush on him )
with huge thanks to dictionarysays for the betareading and flailing
Adagio
( kimu/tsu; nc-17; 10 853 words | and part of it is because Kimura is scary and part of it is because Tsuyoshi has a raging crush on him )
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didn't see those frames, but hmm...
glad that my "lobbying" did some good and you should be proud of it! and not gonna stop you if you feel you must write more...
/must gif more kimutsu
/must find more inspirational pics
/looks back at first gif
your writing is awesome and i can't wait though i will patiently for your next offering!
oh btw, curious....do you write in polish and then translate to english? or do you think it and write it all in english? does this question even make sense? lol!
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i guess you only get to see such things when your browser is dying 'cause i can't catch it now anymore. /must be crotch-grabbing agonal delirium of sorts :D
think & write in English. frankly, it'd be enormous [and probably unnecessary] work to write in Polish and then translate, 'cause these are two rather structurally different languages and a lot of expressions i come up with when i write in Polish would be hard to translate/lose their point if translated to English [and the other way around]. i guess i probably developped slightly different writing styles in Polish and in English, 'cause i write original stories in Polish only and fanfic in English only and the different subject matter has probably influenced that. /you probably have some things that you'd more naturally express in pidgin or Hawaiian than in English and vice versa, i'm guessing. it's something like that for me with writing.
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Even though I can't understand all the subtleties of english language, I find your writing splendid.
It's like I can feel the characters feelings and it seems so real ! Like it's a true story lol
I've read your others fics but never commented because I can't express well my feelings in english and it frustrates me, gomen ;__;
I didn't ship KimuTsu before but this fic made me change my mind <3 it's so sweet :)
And it's really funny too, some sentences are just hilarious XD
Thank you again for this fic ^-^
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and to be honest, i didn't ship kimutsu much until recently but i got influenced, you could say, and they turned to be quite a fascinating pairing.
also maybe i'm not an expert but i see nothing wrong with your English and you should definitely not feel self-conscious about it. :D
thank you for this comment thank you thank you ♥
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and you have no idea about the feelings i have about the fact that this felt good to you. even despite the many references to actual events that i can imagine must've been confusing when you don't follow the fandom. /happy OH SO HAPPY ;.;
it's probably far from perfect but admittedly i'm quite proud of it. ;)
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This particular story stood on its feet quite nicely, there were no confusing moments due to me having no clue about SMAP. It might as well have been an AU.. anything.
The subject though.. OMG.. love doesn't care about gender dsagfgdjsja forever love!
And the fact that it all felt so real, made me think thins can get mended at some point, maybe not in the speshul-Prince-Charming-on-a-white-horse-marries-Cinderella way, but.. you know...
*happy sigh*
You should be proud!
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okay, this just must be some magic or idk what. 'cause - and you probably don't care, but just let me list them - things in this fic that i didn't make up: Kimu and Tsu climbing Mt Fuji for their tv show, the fact that Tsu got drunk in Kimu's hotel room the night before, Tsu's excessive drinking in general and Kimu scolding him for being hung over during concert rehearsals, Kimu getting married obviously, Goro-chan being suspended, Tsu drinking in Nakai's hotel room and wanting to be his friend, and my favourite 2009 scandal when Tsu drunkenly stripped naked in a park and got arrested, after which he was suspended too and since then he really doesn't drink anymore. just saying, not to take the whole credit, but i'm really glad that it felt completely clear and not confusing to you. <3 ( ... )
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