Beginning of my new fan-fic...give me some feedback..lots of feedback...

[hermyonegranger]

The Middle of the Beginning
written by
HermyOneGranger
*JkRowling, Warner Brothers and such own all the rights to Harry Potter. HermyOneGranger owns all new characters introduced.

Comments

[robopatrick]

ahhhhh i love it. you've captured the characters really well.

[mystery_spell]

Wow, it's amazing!

I knew you were brilliant with images, but WOW!

[willy__wonka]

Ho snap! Cliffhanger!! Awesome stuff. It seems like Draco's gaining more courage after his downfall.

[rosalen_knight]

I agree with willy__wonka Cliffhanger!... Keep up the great work... it's really great... OOO and I can look after hptrio_stills for you wile your away... Congrats on the new job.

[hermyonegranger]

k...thanks....and that is just the preface of the story...I'll start posting the first chapter after I get a bit more feedback....just want to make sure it is good enough to post...

[rosalen_knight]

It's more then good enough... lol... I think it's going to be great... I wish mine was as good... I haven't been writing for the past couple of weeks cause I've been stuk... But I've got something in mind... for my ff... Keep up the great work!

[xubious]

This is honestly the best well written fan fic that I have read yet. It's actually very much like JK's writing and could easily be mistaken for her own work. It's really exciting to read a fic that reads just like a real JK book. I'm really excited about this one and can't wait to see where the story takes us!