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52 Words for Snow [6/??] anonymous August 14 2009, 13:59:47 UTC
-Late September 1958-

Russia understood what was going on. Perfectly.

He could easily translate those French and Spanish whispers, echoing through the darkness. Verbal evidence appearing before him, words in flashes of white and grey before his very eyes. Even the lowliest person, without the slightest understanding of anything, other than their first grunted utterance, could see what was happening. What would predictably come.

That is until the screen started flickering, and suddenly went dead. Right in the middle of the movie no less.

“Oye, fije la proyector!”, a Spanish man called out a few seats in front of Ivan, far off to the left corner of the theater. The teenage girl curled up against the shouting male, added an irate little huff, annoyed that the French film she’d most likely broken curfew to see, was being postponed ( ... )

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Re: 52 Words for Snow [6b/??] anonymous August 14 2009, 14:02:24 UTC
Ivan had always appreciated the theater, secluded in the dark half of the world, looking in on the world of light; of plays, films and above all else, fantasy. Mostly because here he could finally give his aching jowls a much needed rest, and let that eerily calm grin drift away into the darkness, the moment the house lights went down ( ... )

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Re: 52 Words for Snow [6c/??] anonymous August 14 2009, 14:07:30 UTC
A too familiar, breathy accent hushed, “Don’t. Turn. Around.” freezing his every nerve in place, with that all too familiar warmth. Swamped with a peculiar sense of shame for his brooding a moment ago, blended with a distrustful sense of cheer, Ivan held his breath and calmly awaited a Smith&Wesson handgun to jut into the back of his head.

“I’m not armed if that’s what your thinking,” the American behind him sighed, as if his voice had taken a much needed rest from the exhaustions of rough-and-tumble heroics he’d often brag of. “I just...want to talk...”

Russia felt himself smiling at the screen like he’d won the world in a goblet, though he was truly facing the edge of an emptying abyss. He wasn’t the all-seeing eye people made him to be...and Ivan really couldn’t predict what Jones’ intent was, sneaking up on him after months of avoidance. The elder nation merely deduced the worst.

“I am correct in suspecting you’ve come to admit miserable failure and defeat of th-”

“NEVER!” America shouted, perhaps a bit too loudly. “YOU ( ... )

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Re: 52 Words for Snow [6d/??] anonymous August 14 2009, 14:10:22 UTC
He hesitantly accepted the napkin, slowly but thoroughly inspecting it with the tips of his thumbs. Only the foretold address marred the soft, crinkled paper in blue ink, and a stain in the shape of a brown ring orbited the scrawl. Ivan sniffed the thing once for any hazardous chemicals, chloroform or poisons it surely must have been dappled with.

‘How stupid does America think...oh, it’s just coffee. Damn.’

This gaping lack of threat attached to this invitation only confused (if not outright bothered) Ivan even more. It was one thing to burden the nation with instructions for some vague and secretive purpose, but who did Alfred think he was, flippantly commanding all these directions to his enemy of all people. Even still, he could feel the young country boring holes into his back with a straightforward stare, awaiting any sort of reply.

With hum of a little laugh, Ivan glared into his shoulder, so the American might see at least a silhouette slip of his mock-amused face. “How painfully obvious, for so-”

“Please?” The western ( ... )

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Re: 52 Words for Snow [6e/??] anonymous August 14 2009, 14:12:27 UTC
Every strategy and verse Khrushchev, Stalin and Lenin had drilled into his mind, scuttled off, out of earshot, as Russia said the only thing he knew would bring him relief.

“Very well. One hour.” he said in a quite but clear voice, after the long deliberation, and all too certain that the American was still behind him. “I trust you’ll have ready something halfway decent to eat.”

America snorted that adorable hate-filled scoff, that Russia had so longed to hear these past few days, “Vodka. Sure thing.”

That hand suddenly returned yet again, clapping his shoulder only once, then slipping back into the shadows. Ivan didn’t dare look at it, pretending to be utterly absorbed in the love confession on screen. Minutes shivered by, before he turned ever so casually towards his opposite shoulder. An empty seat sat by it’s lonesome, in an inky darkness.

Jones had long gone. Folding into himself, listening, but not, to the movie’s earnest wisdoms, Braginsky closed his eyes, and was left alone.

Ah, that dream again. He looked onto the ( ... )

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Re: 52 Words for Snow [6f/??] anonymous August 14 2009, 14:14:53 UTC
America was gold, scantily wrapped in a flame-red toga. In one corner of his chest, opposite his heart, chips of some yellow symbol were folded over, rumpled and unrecognizable against the young country’s form.

But Russia could recognize the symbol. It was his flag. Hammer, sickle and all, that was draped on America so coquettishly. Turning to Russia, he smiled, presenting a basket he’d woven and apparently just finished.

“There!” he shouted in his usual cheery tone, but spoken in a flawless and beautiful Russian tongue “What shall we fill it with?”

The basket was something America had crafted together by himself, without machines or any dependance upon others. It was strong and aged to perfection in an instant. The youth looked so whole at this accomplishment, but his face said otherwise, licking lustily at his lips, kneading them between his teeth. Glasses gone from his ears and nose, there was no hiding what America’s eyes implored.

‘Pleasepleaseplease!’Oh, temptation ( ... )

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Re: 52 Words for Snow [6g/??] anonymous August 14 2009, 14:19:02 UTC
“Ahhmmm...I-Ivan,” Alfred gasped excitedly, struggling to speak through his mewling “That’s incredible...hmmpphh...you’ve...” Moving the basket aside, the American was lost to bliss holding himself, so full and content, like an Egyptian cat god. Russia could hear that same melody stream into their world again ( ... )

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A/N: I has it! anonymous August 14 2009, 14:22:49 UTC
WARNING: Dream sequence confusing because dreams are very surreal. Also, I feel Ivan is the type of person who usually gets visions and premonitions(Since he can curse other nations, he probably gets alot of spiritual backwash).

A/N: Sorry to leave you readers hanging like this (Long and not very action packed chappy), but I wanted to try writing for Russia (Hope I didn’t fail miserably.) and to bring a little pity and humanity to his character, maybe have him contradict himself a bit. As for America, I’m trying to make him genuinely scared for Alaska (Since Ivan and Alfred’s governments are technically at their nuclear my~missiles~are~bigger~ego standoff), but at the same time he’s still the same hero-crazed, ballsy nut job he ever was, who doesn’t want to look weak in front of his enemy.
-Also, yes, there are many instances of play on words in this chapter. I wasn’t just being lazy.

Historical Stuff:-Hints of the impeding Sino-Soviet split, that was finally realized in 1961. The Chinese and Russian partnership had been secretly ( ... )

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Re: A/N: I has it! anonymous August 14 2009, 20:41:41 UTC
Ivan's going to flip when he hears about the baby...Either he is going to be super protective of America and start stalking him everywhere or he's going to be all "Yessssss...Proof you shall become one with Russia, da?"

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HOLY SHIT YOU'RE BACK. anonymous August 14 2009, 21:24:03 UTC
Seriously, I was worried you'd discontinued this. I was looking at the fills, saw this, and was all, "No way this can't be--" and fucking hell, it was.

Loved the build up in these parts. Can't wait to see how it turns out.

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Re: A/N: I has it! anonymous August 14 2009, 21:37:48 UTC
Nobody minds the lengthiness, I'm sure! *u* I rather like the way you write Ivan, and his interaction with Alfred.

As for the dream sequence... Erhm, I'm really bad at analysing any kind of symbols, but at least the little USA flag means Alaska...? XD *fail* I liked the whole atmosphere of the dream, though.

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Writer!Anon anonymous August 16 2009, 02:31:53 UTC
Muy bien on the flag!

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Re: Writer!Anon anonymous August 16 2009, 19:28:18 UTC
YES! You're back!!! I'm so happy! Can't wait for whats to come! :)

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Re: A/N: I has it! anonymous August 28 2009, 06:38:55 UTC
Humph...About that dream..don't apples mean like forbidden fruit? And the basket fertility? If I'm wrong don't mind me. Soo..them discarding their flags mean they look past their ties to their countries in order to "play" the game that they enjoy so much. Wao I such a nerd, I freaking love stuff like this >,< Thanks a lot writer!anon.

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OP~here! anonymous August 29 2009, 00:14:28 UTC
Very good analysis. Apples usually have many different meanings. Temptation, knowledge and even chaos (Golden Apples of Discord), so I used this multi meaning fruit because like the different nations, it has many different meanings and perspectives.
-And bravo to you smarty-anon on the...heheheh...basket filling (LOL I'm DIRTY IN THE NERDIEST WAY POSSIBLE!), but yes a basket filled or being filled in dreams often means creation or conception(Or pregnancy, if your have visions like Ivan. He can't figure it out though because that wouldn't be fun).

Also nice description on the meaning behind the two forgetting about their flags. I wanted to add in how terrifyingly human they felt, but forgot to do so. Whoops...

Anyway anon, YOU GET A GOLD STAR! Props!

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Re: A/N: I has it! anonymous October 11 2009, 19:25:49 UTC
Anon just found this fill and let me just say that it's probably my favorite fill ever. (this is how literate I am after reading it through twice)

Please update soon, author-anon! *bookmarks*

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