Past-Part Fills Post 1 -- CLOSED

Feb 26, 2011 13:32



Thanks to anon's suggestions we are now enforcing a past-part fills post

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Relationships are like Cooking (6/?) anonymous September 5 2009, 22:19:04 UTC
request+previous posts aqui amigos:http://hetalia-kink.livejournal.com/10530.html?thread=15899426#t15899426

Bruising Tomatoes Should be a SinLovino curses as the water in his shower comes out cold first. He jumps; skin prickling under the icy water, and then eventually relaxes, as the water slowly turns warm ( ... )

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Notes+A/N for part 6 anonymous September 5 2009, 22:20:25 UTC
Okay, excuses. (1)School sucks and (2)I suddenly got sick. So I wrote this half delirious and woozy. Still am. At least I get a 4-day weekend?

Anyway, this is the start of the Sp/Ro, Kor angst ending. I'm betting the quality of these posts are diminishing with time. I apologize.

Anyway again, the Spanish meant: Understand, my little tomato? Yay, I used my Spanish for something other then school! I think I made a grammar error, but WHATEVS.

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Re: Notes+A/N for part 6 anonymous September 7 2009, 03:28:42 UTC
Hey, sorry I haven't commented in a while (I'm so lazy) . I have been following this closely and it's really well done. I like how you did the POV's of the different characters, since it makes all of them sympathetic. It's impossible for me to decide which one I want Romano to choose, since I can't help but feel for the both of them.

I'm sorry school sucks. And to start of an academically loaded school year with an illness must have been frustrating. It was worth the wait for this chapter though. The quality of the posts are absolutely not diminishing with time, so don't worry. I'm quite addicted to this story.

~ OP! Anon.

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Re: Relationships are like Cooking (6/?) anonymous September 6 2009, 01:04:03 UTC
Ooh, cliffhanger! I love it and I'm seriously looking forward to seeing what happens next.

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Re: Relationships are like Cooking (6/?) anonymous September 6 2009, 01:11:48 UTC
Cliffhangers~ fun to write, a pain to read

I hope I get to it soon, sooner than this post. I'm glad you're enjoying it so far!

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Re: Relationships are like Cooking (6/?) anonymous September 6 2009, 09:35:16 UTC
I really like how you did your cliff hangers, from the previous part 5, to this part 6 here.

In truth, the pacing is going rather well here. You've written it with different timings of the character, moving from one scene to the other, which is done very well.

Keep it up!

<333333333 Hope you're better soon too... ;A;

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Re: Relationships are like Cooking (6/?) anonymous September 6 2009, 19:52:54 UTC
Oh good, I'm always worried about pacing. I shall continue writing! Hopefully school won't hold me back too much.

D: I hope I get better, too. I'm well enough I can stay at home fine, but when I go out it's like I'm being tossed around.

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Relationships are like Cooking (7/?) anonymous September 13 2009, 01:54:56 UTC
FFF school and icky stuff like that. I actually wrote this almost a week ago, but decided to reread it later. And now that I have, here you go!

Desserts Are a MustThe long pause afterwards tells Yong-soo that Antonio is shocked ( ... )

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Notes to Part 7 anonymous September 13 2009, 01:57:35 UTC
Dios, eres loco--God, you're crazy. Spanish speakers out there, do I use ser or estar? I went with ser because...because.

Korea angst coming up, then a wrap up of this ending. Argh, damn my overachiever self going for the hard route.

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Re: Notes to Part 7 anonymous September 14 2009, 18:05:42 UTC
Spaniard!user here! "Dios, estás loco." Is the right way xD but you can say "eres un loco." "Es un loco." ... but... it just don't feel right (?=)
Ser - is for be forever, after and before.
Estar - is for be at the moment.

It's like... I'm blond but my hair is black right now.
Soy (ser) rubia, pero mi pelo está (estar) negro.

Urr... hng, by the wat :/ I'm suck at english XDDDD so, sorry for the mistakes.

ANYWAY *W* I LOVE YOUR FILL, I'M HERE EVERYDAY FOR NEW UPDATES *camping in the post* but, I don't now how to properly... er... say to you how beautiful and sad and wonderful and ;____; and... FFFFFF is. So... ;////; that's all.

Shy Spaniard!anon run away

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