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Past-Part Fills Post 1 -- CLOSED

Feb 26, 2011 13:32

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Rome/France - aeternum anonymous July 23 2009, 02:42:33 UTC

original request: http://hetalia-kink.livejournal.com/6850.html?thread=10447042#t10447042

Rome/France; pseudo-historical Erastes/Eromenos relationship
[please imagine young France as innocent Gaul, I did my best, hope it's all right]

Re: aeternum [5/??] anonymous July 30 2009, 08:46:12 UTC

Don't need to feel sorry about it, writer!anon. In fact, it serve as an ongoing plot and anon is more than pleased to read more of it.

Anon would love to comment more but sheer sleepiness made me forgot what I'd wanted to comment. Just that anon is loving how the story is going and loves to see more. ^^

Re: aeternum [5/??] anonymous July 30 2009, 17:23:15 UTC

oh god. I've been wanting this fic to update so, so, so bad. Thank you author anon, it's wonderful. Can't wait for the next part.

Re: aeternum [5/??] anonymous July 31 2009, 04:16:32 UTC

Yay, you updated! My week has been shit so far but you've made it all better <3
Gallia is so adorable and Rome makes me giggle what with his thoughts about subtleness and all. I've always thought of Rome as a more mature version of Feliciano. (Pervert and dumb, that is).

I also really like Germania here.

Looking forward to more!

aeternum [6/??] anonymous July 31 2009, 18:04:10 UTC

For someone who lived on the edge of starvation during the long siege of Alesia, Gallia seemed incredibly picky about food. He did not want to eat with the soldiers and demanded to be taken to see the head cook, as if he were a prince and not a captive being fed at their mercy. Germania would have refused such a silly order, but Rome, that besotted fool, indulged the boy instead ( ... )

Re: aeternum [6/??] anonymous August 1 2009, 03:06:31 UTC

Poor Gallia (future France)

Loving it thus far, can't wait for more.

Re: aeternum [6/??] anonymous August 1 2009, 03:39:25 UTC

Loving this thus far!

With just a flutter of his long lashes and a few well-chosen compliments neatly re-phrased into Latin, Gallia quickly had the cooks and servers under his command, every one of them eager to do whatever he wanted done, tell him whatever he wished to know.
8DDDDDDD Already having those tricks up his sleeve eh?

Anon is hungry for more!!! \o/

Re: aeternum [6/??] anonymous August 1 2009, 10:15:37 UTC

Germania refrained from looking to the heavens at this embarrassing display. There were no words, no words at all.

Poor poor Germania. Indeed no word can describe my love for you, author!anon!

Re: aeternum [6/??] anonymous August 1 2009, 11:07:54 UTC

OP loves you SO MUCH. OMG.

Be as long-winded as you want. I'm just adoring every bit of this.

Eagle symbolism! Imperial Rome being creepy and 'civilizing', longsuffering Germania, besotted!Rome, flirtation games, the military politics, the creepy/sexy kisses and caresses, gladii!

I just! *flailsquee* So many things to love!

This is such a *smart* fill, in terms of the historical details, but still emotionally poignant and entertaining as hell and did I mention that perfect combination of creepy/sexy that was exactly what I was hoping for?

tl;dr: ilu anon

Re: aeternum [6/??] anonymous August 4 2009, 02:43:15 UTC

Writer!anon is so pleased to know that you liked this so far, and that readers are (apparently) okay with it being creepy and also long-winded and unnecessarily detailed. Thank you.

aeternum [7/??] anonymous August 8 2009, 17:06:00 UTC

“Where did you go?! Do you realize everyone was looking for you?” It was well after sunset, and Rome had lost track of his ward for some time, finally forced to call upon Gremania’s somewhat unwilling assistance. Could he be blamed for holding tightly onto the boy’s arm once he stepped into the tent ( ... )

Re: aeternum [7/??] anonymous August 9 2009, 07:41:05 UTC

This was adoringly sweet between the both of them, yet there in still lies the undertone from Rome, and Gallia's “Should I lie down?” just hints at him knowing more than it seems.

Ah~ It's getting so so good!!! *squees* Not lame at all!!! ;A; Eager for more~

Re: aeternum [7/??] anonymous August 10 2009, 03:25:31 UTC

The more I read this, the more I like it. Oh, Rome, you fail!father, you~

I especially like the contrast between how Rome feels towards her in comparison to how he feels towards Gallia.

And the last line there had me in awe for about ten minutes = =.

Re: aeternum [7/??] anonymous August 10 2009, 23:58:26 UTC

oh i'm in love with this fic. need moooooore! it's wonderful!

OP anonymous August 12 2009, 07:24:07 UTC

this. is so. hoooottttt.

and they don't even. there isn't. asdfjlkjafd.

I love how all the wrong and caring is all mixed up, and both of them are so clearly there and emphasize eachother rather than distracting from them.

this continues to be totally awesome. I love love love it.

Re: aeternum [7/??] anonymous August 13 2009, 15:14:42 UTC

I think Gallia isn't as innocent as he appears (Rome, have you let your men near him?).

I'm absolutely loving this, Anon. Germania's popping up every so often (yes, I am biased towards him because he's a favourite of mine), Gallia's innocence, though it seems like he isn't completely so (I seriously felt fuzzy when I read the bit about him batting his eyes - dear God, I love France/Gallia when he does that - the imagery is lovely). And Rome! Oh hell, his messed up fatherly to perverted feelings are portrayed so perfectly. You can feel his resolve crumbling as this fic chugs along.

Can't wait for the next part! You're doing fantastically!

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