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Past-Part Fills Post 1 -- CLOSED

Feb 26, 2011 13:32

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Rome/France - aeternum anonymous July 23 2009, 02:42:33 UTC

original request: http://hetalia-kink.livejournal.com/6850.html?thread=10447042#t10447042

Rome/France; pseudo-historical Erastes/Eromenos relationship
[please imagine young France as innocent Gaul, I did my best, hope it's all right]

aeternum [8/??] anonymous August 23 2009, 05:27:50 UTC

Gallia woke to the sound of Rome’s voice outside the silk walls, and Germania’s answering rumble. He stretched luxuriously, rubbing the sleep from his eyes, and curiosity piqued, stepped outside to see what was so amusing ( ... )

aeternum [9/??] anonymous August 23 2009, 05:30:40 UTC

It was a little past noon when Gallia led Rome and his horse into the dark woods, following a trail only he could sense. They walked for some while and stopped once for Gallia to gather an armful of wild rose blossoms. Rome’s brow creased in concern as he watched the boy weave a loose garland of the fragrant roses and set it lightly around the horse’s neck, but to his relief, Gallia did not prick his fingers on the tiny thorns ( ... )

aeternum [10/??] anonymous August 23 2009, 05:39:46 UTC

“Good.” Rome leaned forward, cupping Gallia’s chin with one hand, and pressed his mouth directly against the boy’s soft, unresisting lips. Gallia closed his eyes automatically, and when he felt Rome start to pull away, he wrapped his arms around the other’s neck and tentatively opened his mouth. Surprised to feel Gallia’s tongue brush against his lips, Rome put his hands at the boy’s waist and deepened the kiss, sliding his tongue in further, tasting the tender sweetness of the captive mouth before him. Why, Gallia was now doing his best to keep up, imitating the older nation as closely as he could, charmingly naïve to the effect of his efforts ( ... )

Re: aeternum [10/??] anonymous August 23 2009, 06:54:44 UTC

You're back with more updates! \o/ This was a highly enjoyable one, love how you wrote Germania. ^^

The scene between Rome and Gallia was very sweet, and those little subtle details (the rose), and the altar. Also that even if Rome begins to teach Gallia of the art of love, Gallia is very much a natural at it.

Oh, there's so much more I want to comment~ Very much love how you write this. Can't wait for more!!!

Re: aeternum [10/??] anonymous August 24 2009, 22:01:00 UTC

Checking back here once in a while has paid off with more updates!

The further I read, the more I like this, especially the change in attidtude Germania seems to be undergoing.

Re: aeternum [10/??] anonymous September 4 2009, 08:05:04 UTC

Ah, this story is so gorgeous~! I really hope you're continuing it.

OP anonymous September 6 2009, 22:08:49 UTC

OMG this continues to be so awesome. I have very intermittent internet now but I'm so glad I checked this.

I love the details about the celtic gods, Gallia's innocent/eagerness, and the subtle complexities between Germania and Rome. I really hope you continue this.

Re: OP anonymous September 16 2009, 06:00:05 UTC

Thank you so much, OP and everyone who has commented. Unfortunately, real life has gotten in the way and I will not be able to work on my fills as much as I would have liked. Especially since this one requires a bit of research. But I am not abandoning this, I just want to have more than 1 chapter to post at a time, and each part be worth reading.

Thanks again for your support, I am so glad others enjoyed this as much as I've enjoyed writing it. Please bear with me!

Re: aeternum [10/??] anonymous October 2 2009, 07:46:50 UTC

Basically wanted to say what everyone else has been saying -- this story is amazing! Hope you can finish it!

aeternum [11/??] anonymous October 19 2009, 01:03:06 UTC

Once they returned to camp, Germania gave them a brief humorless glance before pulling Rome to the side and muttering something in his ear. The republic frowned and then hurried off, leaving Gallia under the other’s supervision. He tried to excuse himself to go play with Avell, but Germania had other plans in mind ( ... )

aeternum [12/??] anonymous October 19 2009, 01:06:33 UTC

By the day’s end, Gallia had fallen asleep on the floor of the tent, too exhausted from his escapades to even get a blanket to cover himself. Rome was not much better, and if he could fall asleep in his armor, he would. Their tent had been stripped of luxuries for the march, anything that could weigh them down packed into the wagons overflowing with gold and tribute, so it was back to carrying bedrolls again. At least his officer status allowed him a tent for some measure of privacy ( ... )

aeternum [13/??] anonymous October 19 2009, 07:26:15 UTC

After catching Gallia dumping dirt into the stews, Rome resorted to tying him to his horse and keeping him in front during the march, in case he was able to guide his steed with just his knees, which seemed likely ( ... )

Re: aeternum [13/??] anonymous October 21 2009, 21:44:24 UTC

* v* Oh man, I'm glad I checked to see if this updated! I adore this fic, anon. I hope to see more soon. ♥

Re: aeternum [13/??] anonymous October 26 2009, 10:25:46 UTC

I love this fic so much sjdaklsjdksdjd I'm so happy you're keeping at it and I can't wait to read more. I think the waiting is killing me as much as it's killing Rome.

Gallia is just too adorable. ♥

aeternum [14/??] anonymous October 31 2009, 21:48:47 UTC

The opportunity came sooner than Rome would have thought, for the next day, during the midday meal, he lost track of Gallia once more. A helpful legionnaire reported that he was last seen in the company of a woman. Rome thought over this carefully and asked what sort of woman, fearing that it might have been an unscrupulous camp follower who might harm the boy. The soldier’s answer was worse, much worse ( ... )

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