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Past-Part Fills Post 1 -- CLOSED

Feb 26, 2011 13:32

Thanks to anon's suggestions we are now enforcing a past-part fills post

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Under the Sun [5/?] anonymous July 23 2009, 05:44:58 UTC

Dear Francis,

How have you been? It’s been a long time since I’ve managed to sit down and write you! I’m sorry for any dust, I’m still on the Wagon Trail so y’know. Dust is normal. It’s been pretty awesome though, it’s not just a stroll in the park either. There’s a lot of work to do. Though, I was already banned from making any of the meals by Becca. She said I was a lost cause… Reminded me of you actually. I remember you told me I was a lost cause when you tried to teach me to cook after the war… She didn’t get why I laughed so much. Heh. But right, it’s been really hard. I mean, I expected the work, but still. Man, I didn’t really expect it, y’know?

I’ve met a lot of really great people here. Except Vincent, I want to punch that guy in the face. He just knows how to push my buttons. And it seems to be his past time to make me cry… I’ve gotten the nick name “cry baby” now. Not everyone calls me it, but it’s enough t be really annoying ( ... )

Re: Under the Sun [9/?] anonymous July 29 2009, 21:17:20 UTC

Poor Annie. T~T She was cute. Wonder if Alfred is still holding on to Ms. Dotty even up to modern times...
Woot for surprise!England. Got to agree with above annon...Iggy is totally watching Alfred via crystal ball/magic mirror. Stalker!worried!England with magic.

Re: Under the Sun [10/?] anonymous July 30 2009, 00:59:15 UTC

It took another three days after Alfred’s ghostly encounter to reach the town. And he still couldn’t help but think back to the moment. Had it really been his imagination? It was likely, after all, how could England even be out West? He was still across the ocean in London… At least last he had heard from Francis. Then again, he remembered England boasting about his magic back when he was still a colony… The image of England spying on Alfred through a crystal ball made him snort, and glance nervously over his shoulder ( ... )

Re: Under the Sun [11/?] anonymous July 30 2009, 01:01:18 UTC

“O-Oh I mean…” Alfred just blinked, before realizing the sudden panic. On the trip, comments like that had always set the American off. He would either fall quiet, depressed or cry. But this time… Well, Alfred just sat there chewing his food.

“Its fine,” he stated, earning a small glare from Molly when he spoke with his mouth fall. Rubbing the back of his neck sheepishly, he swallowed. “I mean, you don’t have to worry… I’m not gonna cry…”

They all stared at him, Alfred rolled his eyes. “I’m wasn’t that big of a cry-baby ( ... )

OP Here Yet Again anonymous July 30 2009, 02:40:11 UTC

I seriously will love you forever for doing this fill.
I love this update so much~ <3

Out of selfishness I say continue. XDDDDD

As for suggestions um... I kinda want Canada to show up. For the brothers to make up.
Of course England actually being there would be cool too. secretly stalking America to make sure he's alright

Re: OP Here Yet Again anonymous July 30 2009, 04:10:13 UTC

I love you for requesting this <3 it has been so much fun to fill!!

Unfortunately. You may have just suggested things planned for the end. Do you have anymore requests?

Re: Under the Sun [11/?] anonymous July 30 2009, 05:59:36 UTC

This anon is greatly enjoying this fill as well! I would love to see it continue too. If OP and writer!anon need ideas... I would suggest Al get a job with the pony express! This anon always loved stories about them. :)

Re: Under the Sun [11/?] anonymous July 30 2009, 08:44:59 UTC

I really hope that you decide to write more. ^_^ I loved that England bit.

I think it would be cool to maybe do a time skip where Alfred has lived out West for a few years and maybe grew to be physically older.

You can also do something with the gold rush and the rowdy, makeshift towns made entirely of men. I imagine Molly would be very popular. ~_^ And a little closure with Annie's parents would be nice (again, timeskip).

Whatever you and the op decide would make me happy though.

Re: Under the Sun [11/?] anonymous July 30 2009, 17:32:55 UTC

Yes! You put the crystal ball! XD Thank you! This is the anon that had said it.
As for requests, I'd like to see Al face robbers. Whether he does that now or later is ok with me. But he does need to see the dangers of the west. Maybe cattle jackers too?

love you anonymous August 1 2009, 06:52:11 UTC

i love this fill. a lot. please don't stop now. I just feel like, he needs to grow lot more, ya know? If you're taking requests vincent turning evil and america having to fight him and being alll macho would pretty much rock, but either way... I also really want someone to find out that he is the usa-tan. But... thats just cause i like stuff like that, I don't know if that would fit in the story, please continue, I eagerly await your update.

Re: Under the Sun [12a/?] anonymous August 2 2009, 01:55:14 UTC

“Al, do me a favor and take these to Bill. He should be at the saloon.” That had been Molly’s simple request. One that Alfred did not hesitate to say ‘yes’ to. Though, he did wonder just why Bill’s belt and pistols were doing at the inn. With Molly. After all, he hadn’t stopped by recently. But then again, maybe Alfred did not want to pursue that nagging question. So without any questions he took the belt, grabbed his hat (to avoid another lecture from Ruben) and left the inn ( ... )

Re: Under the Sun [12b/?] anonymous August 2 2009, 01:59:24 UTC

Bill was seated at a round table with other men (with a groan, he realized Vincent was among them). Bottles of beer and poker chips were littered across the table, cards in each player’s hands. They were playing poker, just like she had said, a fairly large pile of chips in the center of the table. Alfred stood off to the side for a minute, listening to them banter, uping the stakes, cracking jokes. He’d wait until this hand was done, then he’d pull Bill aside to return his pistols ( ... )

Re: Under the Sun [12c/?] anonymous August 2 2009, 02:05:23 UTC

“I donno, been practicin’ a bit here and there after we got here… I mean, Paul and me practiced on the way here to but… You already knew that ( ... )

Re: Under the Sun [12d/?] anonymous August 2 2009, 02:10:05 UTC

“… Why’d the bastard thank me?”

“You did save his life back there Al,” Bill stated, opening the inn door. “Trent would’ve shot him, probably killed him ( ... )

Re: Under the Sun [12d/?] anonymous August 2 2009, 02:42:20 UTC

This is really good! Tsundere!Vincent, lol.
Alfred's gunslinging = win!

Re: Under the Sun [12d/?] anonymous August 2 2009, 04:07:10 UTC

Aww, Vincent's an ok guy. I knew he had some likability in him. He's just had a rough life, I'm sure. *is such a Molly ><*

Al is a war veteran and a demi-god nation thing, so I can't see him getting too frightened by some punk wanting to kill him. It made sense to.

At fist I though Al had named his glasses Anton. XD It breaks my heart every time Al starts saying a nations human name, but switches to their real name because they're not friendly anymore. It makes it seem like he really is an orphan, losing everyone close to him. Bawww.

Glad you're considering the time skip.

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