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Under the Sun [5/?]

[anonymous]

Dear Francis,

How have you been? It’s been a long time since I’ve managed to sit down and write you! I’m sorry for any dust, I’m still on the Wagon Trail so y’know. Dust is normal. It’s been pretty awesome though, it’s not just a stroll in the park either. There’s a lot of work to do. Though, I was already banned from making any of the meals by Becca. She said I was a lost cause… Reminded me of you actually. I remember you told me I was a lost cause when you tried to teach me to cook after the war… She didn’t get why I laughed so much. Heh. But right, it’s been really hard. I mean, I expected the work, but still. Man, I didn’t really expect it, y’know?

I’ve met a lot of really great people here. Except Vincent, I want to punch that guy in the face. He just knows how to push my buttons. And it seems to be his past time to make me cry… I’ve gotten the nick name “cry baby” now. Not everyone calls me it, but it’s enough t be really annoying

Op Here

[anonymous]

I think you are doing a marvelous job. I am seriously so happy with this fill. You have no idea. I'm happy some comments have given you some ideas. Time Skips are fun~ <3

Re: Under the Sun [12d/?]

[anonymous]

This is EPIC like ho shit! Thanks so much for updating, I can't wait for the next bit :3

(re-captcha: $2,882,000 fudge. WAT)

Re: Under the Sun [12d/?]

[anonymous]

huuuuuuugh your fic has me in stitches! your updates will unravel me, authornon! lol that did not make sense at all kthxbai :3

...why do i phail at anoning?!

Re: Under the Sun [13a/?]

[anonymous]

Despite his insisting that the Trent situation was no big deal, all his friends were worrying. Alfred had become use to not being able to walk around town without someone by his side. It was starting to get frustrating, but he understood his friends concerns. To them, he was an 18 year old kid, when in retrospect he was by far older than that. And to top it all off, he was essentially a war veteran. Sure, he didn’t know what would happen in a western shoot out, but he had been shot at before during the wars. He had faced death, and he’d always come out of it perfectly fine. Of course… None of them knew that

Re: Under the Sun [13b/?]

[anonymous]

A quick jab to the arm drew his attention away from the mysterious carriage, and back to his friend. Paul was scowling. “I don’t get it, you cry over stubbin’ your toe-”

“That was once! And I stubbed it really hard

Re: Under the Sun [13c/?]

[anonymous]

“Pa-Paul Turner,” he stuttered, blushing more and more. Alfred laughed again, that earned him a sharp elbow to the gut. Paul, still pink, cleared his throat. “Anyways Al, like I was sayin’. You really should be worryin’, at least a bit

Re: Under the Sun [13c/?]

[anonymous]

Alfred stared ahead, hardly aware of Liz when she returned, or when the three had begun walking back to the inn, deciding that it was no longer safe to roam the streets. He could leave, a voice reasoned. He could go back to Philadelphia, or the capital. That would take care of the situation. But would the others be safe? What if Trent took it out on them? He couldn’t risk that

Re: Under the Sun [13d/?]

[anonymous]

He ignored Bill’s shout, rushing forward, sliding to a stop besides the fallen women. Paul was shouting her name in a panicked voice, but Molly wasn’t moving. Pain was etched across her face, blood seeping through her sleeve. She’d been shot

Re: Under the Sun [13e/?]

[anonymous]

The illusions vanished. Alfred was standing in the street, one gun still raised. Trent was across from him, holding a bleeding arm, some of his companions injured as well

Re: Under the Sun [13e/?]

[anonymous]

OMG Prussia?! Rawr, America and Prussia as cowboys, hawt.

And did I see Arthur ninja his way into this chapter? Could have been my imagination...

Glad to see you updated!

Re: Under the Sun [13e/?]

[anonymous]

...Prussia. PRUSSIA. OMG ANON, I THINK I LOVE YOU.

Out of all the people I expected, I did not expect Prussia.

And don't think I didn't see what you did thar. England is totally there.

captcha: Amer- outvotes ...America outvotes what?

Re: Under the Sun [13e/?]

[anonymous]

GILBERT! ~<3<3<3 My love for you, can you feel it authoranon?

Your story is as wonderful as ever. I noticed how you used my veteran excuse as to why Al was not being a cry baby. Soldier!America is awesome and so canon. He started with war and continued the tradition for every following generation. Better get used to your soldier side Al. I'm sure Gilbert can help.

England might not be there, but it looks like the UK is in the house /o/

Re: Under the Sun [13e/?]

[anonymous]

I...I love you so much author anon. Gilbert! I can't believe you put him into the story! It was completely unexpected~

I can't wait for the next parts!

OP Here

[anonymous]

Writer!Anon, I love you so much right now.
Gilbert is one of my fav characters~ <3

Re: Under the Sun [14a/?]

[anonymous]

The next thing Alfred was aware of was that he was lying in a bed. He couldn’t remember how he got there, or when he had even lost consciousness. One second, he was staring, in shock at the blurred form of Gilbert, the Nation of Prussia, the next