The Chains of Nation (1/2)
anonymous
October 3 2009, 16:15:58 UTC
Not exactly what OP requested but I couldn't get this idea out of my head for Alter!England and America.
He'd started coming home later and later since that had happened, arriving only a little before midnight and leaving against before dawn, catching a couple of hours in the White House during the day to tide him over before the whole cycle started again
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The Chains of Nation (2/2)
anonymous
October 3 2009, 16:17:03 UTC
Alfred sighed, reaching out and patting England's head like a dog and he hated it, treating Arthur like this but it seemed to be the only thing which would reassure him and convince him that he didn't need to do anything more drastic to curry America's favour.
Arthur nuzzled against the touch, expression as flat as it had been (and he only seemed to show expressions like that anymore, that and fear and no-one could tell him why), and he sank to his knees, reaching for the opening of Alfred's suit pants.
Alfred pushed him away, a little more roughly than he'd intended and instantly felt guilty at the terror stricken expression which passed over England's face.
"I'm sorry, I'm sorry," a mantra of repentance.
Matthew would have snatched Arthur away from him as soon as he could. So would Francis he was sure, and Kiku and Heracles and Antonio and probably everyone in Europe, because they recognised the fear in Arthur's gaze, the submissive stance worse than that adopted by even the most abused of Ivan's pet states at the height of his
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Re: The Chains of Nation (2/2)
anonymous
October 3 2009, 20:01:48 UTC
oh god oh god oh god. poor england, only a shadow of the man he has been and poor america who wants to help england but doesn't know how. i love how america resorts to the deed he doesn't want to do because it's the only thing england will accept of him and oh shit the last two paragraphs (oh, your dark tendencies, america) totally killed me.
is it wrong to request for a sequel? what about the this world! england? will alt!america break him too? though the outcome is quite predictable (will he turn out just like alt!england, i wonder) i still want to see it written.
Re: The Chains of Nation (2/2)
anonymous
October 3 2009, 20:09:55 UTC
augh, sorry for being too demanding. seeing that you just filled a request, for heaven's sake. i'm not even the op. gah, what is wrong with me? why am i being so selfish. please ignore. apologies for troubling you :(
Re: The Chains of Nation (2/2)
anonymous
October 3 2009, 21:57:22 UTC
Ah, not at all! No worries! It's really nice to know that people liked it enough to want more from me ^^; And flattering too! I can't promise anything, but I'm definitely considering it.
Re: The Chains of Nation (2/2)
anonymous
October 3 2009, 21:33:50 UTC
Hee <3 Thankyou! I'm really glad that you enjoyed it, messed up as it is.
Yeah, they're both in a bad position and I can't imagine that Canada is very happy with his brother right now, especially if he finds out that America is actually taking advantage of England, no matter how good his intentions.
I can't resist the dark tendencies, I admit. The differences between the nations caring about the other nations, and their need to survive and become strong above all else.
I'm tempted to write a sequel/other side for this, although I don't know when it will be and I fear it would become very long XD But I'm glad that you want more ^^
Re: The Chains of Nation (2/2)
anonymous
October 3 2009, 21:26:19 UTC
I second the other anon's request for a sequel (and a happy ending for them all). I LOVE the way you wrote this but I would love it even more if it was longer. Much, much longer. In fact, good fics like this should never end!
Re: The Chains of Nation (2/2)
anonymous
October 3 2009, 21:59:21 UTC
Ahaha, thanks anon ^^ I'm glad that you liked it! I'm definitely considering working on another part (perhaps not a sequel so much as the 'other side' of the request) although I can't promise anything (I still have other fills I'm working on too ^^; )
But thankyou for commenting! i really appreciate it!
You done an awesome job Author!Anon! How you capture them is really good too! And I don't mind if you want to make a sequel or the 'other side' of this! <3<3<3
Re: The Chains of Nation (2/2)
anonymous
October 4 2009, 12:23:02 UTC
Latereader!anon wants writer!anon how much she appreciate this fill. It was so heartbreaking to read yet this anon wants MOAR (I'm a terrible person, yes). Nevertheless, it really is up to writer!anon whether you wish to continue but this anon agrees with the above comments about how great fills shouldn't be this short (and when I say great, I mean GREAT). Do consider a sequel, anon? I will shower you with more love if you do!! <333
He'd started coming home later and later since that had happened, arriving only a little before midnight and leaving against before dawn, catching a couple of hours in the White House during the day to tide him over before the whole cycle started again ( ... )
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Arthur nuzzled against the touch, expression as flat as it had been (and he only seemed to show expressions like that anymore, that and fear and no-one could tell him why), and he sank to his knees, reaching for the opening of Alfred's suit pants.
Alfred pushed him away, a little more roughly than he'd intended and instantly felt guilty at the terror stricken expression which passed over England's face.
"I'm sorry, I'm sorry," a mantra of repentance.
Matthew would have snatched Arthur away from him as soon as he could. So would Francis he was sure, and Kiku and Heracles and Antonio and probably everyone in Europe, because they recognised the fear in Arthur's gaze, the submissive stance worse than that adopted by even the most abused of Ivan's pet states at the height of his ( ... )
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is it wrong to request for a sequel? what about the this world! england? will alt!america break him too? though the outcome is quite predictable (will he turn out just like alt!england, i wonder) i still want to see it written.
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Yeah, they're both in a bad position and I can't imagine that Canada is very happy with his brother right now, especially if he finds out that America is actually taking advantage of England, no matter how good his intentions.
I can't resist the dark tendencies, I admit. The differences between the nations caring about the other nations, and their need to survive and become strong above all else.
I'm tempted to write a sequel/other side for this, although I don't know when it will be and I fear it would become very long XD But I'm glad that you want more ^^
Thanks for the review!
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this fill gave me chills, anon!
and i'd love to read that sequel/other side, if you ever get around to doing it and the longer the better~ *encourages*
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But thankyou for commenting! i really appreciate it!
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Good, no, awesome job, author!anon and also, great request, requester!anon!
And... hehe... It would be nice if this is continued soon... XD
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