Re: Kingdom Guide: Northern Kingdom
anonymous
March 22 2010, 20:15:14 UTC
Woo, Baltics! ^^ (pause) One of the reasons Hetalia rocks - I can now name the Baltic nations with complete confidence!
...wait a second, you didn't mention Ravis before? (goes and checks previous chapters) So you didn't. Huh. I would blame my second sight for plot twists, but I'm pretty sure I turned it off in February, and I'm not getting anything else for this story... (shrugs) Meh, probably just creating false memories. Whatever the case, Ravis being magicless as well just fits.
Oh! And I forgot to do this in my previous post! (falls down in worship of writer!anon) THANK-YOU OH GLORIOUS PROVIDER OF BEAUTEOUS AND WELL-WRITTEN MASTERPIECES OF FIC! WE ARE NOT WORTHY!!! (worship, worship, grovel, worship) ;) I mean, it has everything I could ask for: RusxUS, FrUK, implied Geritalia, magic, it's well-written and has a stimulating plot... Gods, I love this fic...
Kingdom Guide: Prussia
anonymous
April 11 2010, 05:26:26 UTC
I should note that from here on out the guides will be less and less detailed. The kingdoms/nations mentioned in these are not important to the main plot of the story and will likely not be much more then mentioned in passing from time to time. I just found it helpful to create the world my characters resided in as full as possible though most of these other kingdom and independent states have not been full defined in my mind.
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~Kingdom of Prussia~
Kingdom Seat: Berlin
Ruler -- Gilbert Beilschmidt ~ Air
Heir -- Ludwig (Brother/Younger) ~ Air
Land Controlled -- Prussia Germany Austria Hungary
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~Ludwig is engaged to marry the youngest grandson of the neighboring Italia Kingdom.
At Word's End -- Part 5a
anonymous
April 11 2010, 05:17:32 UTC
Author's Note: A fairly short (for me at any rate) part. This was originally part of what was supposed to be a longer part 5 but it was getting too long and I decided it worked well enough on its own to post it separately. The rest of what is now Part 6 is mostly completed but will probably not be posted until the end of the month. I'll also be adding one more Kingdom Guide
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At Word's End -- Part 5b
anonymous
April 11 2010, 05:19:45 UTC
"We'll have to change that," the King murmured thoughtfully but his voice didn't sound as condescending as Alfred thought his father's might over the same subject. "During dinner we'll discuss what will happen tomorrow and if you'll give me a chance...we can discuss what will happen once we return to my homeland
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Re: At Word's End -- Part 5b
anonymous
April 11 2010, 19:35:38 UTC
The last sentence had me chuckling out loud. "The second after that his brain was already off and running on Plan B." (chuckles again and shakes her head) Oh Alfred...
I was delighted to see that this was up - I was just looking around yesterday and wondering if the next bit would be up soon, because it had been awhile since the last update. And then I check the fill index again today, not even thinking about this fic and, lo and behold, an update! (hugs author!anon) I truly love how you're playing Ivan in this fic. He still seems very much like Russia, but with different aspects of him emphasized. The other aspects are still there, the danger, the power, but there's more. Like we're getting a more in-depth look at his personality. (waves hand in frustration) I just know there's a better way to say all of this, but my brain is currently in exam-week melt-down, and has shut off access to the areas that contain this better way of saying it. Suffice to say, I love this fic, I love you for writing it, and I will happily stand first watch
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Re: At Word's End -- Part 5b
anonymous
April 13 2010, 01:11:54 UTC
My dear author!anon, this is one of the best AUs I've found in the Hetalia fanverse, it has everything I could ever wish for in a fic, and you're specifically going to lengths to ensure it will eventually be finished. The remarkable thing would be if I didn't keep an eye out for it! ;)
Yes! That darkness you mentioned you're trying to portray - it's coming across beautifully! It's part of what makes him so intriguing! And everything you say is there, and I'd totally spazz about it all some more, but my brain is melting out of my ears and taking my normal verbosity with it. (stupid finals...) Russia's plans work just fine, btw. I loved the bit where he was asking Alfred to work with him to make this something that was mutually beneficial so much...! Yes. Again, worship, devotion, and praise for you, most excellent author!anon! Worship, devotion, and praise! (looks over what she's just written) Yeesh, I sound like a creepy stalker-person. That's it, I need more sleep... See you at the next update! ^^ (stumbles off to get some sleep)
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...wait a second, you didn't mention Ravis before? (goes and checks previous chapters) So you didn't. Huh. I would blame my second sight for plot twists, but I'm pretty sure I turned it off in February, and I'm not getting anything else for this story... (shrugs) Meh, probably just creating false memories. Whatever the case, Ravis being magicless as well just fits.
Oh! And I forgot to do this in my previous post! (falls down in worship of writer!anon) THANK-YOU OH GLORIOUS PROVIDER OF BEAUTEOUS AND WELL-WRITTEN MASTERPIECES OF FIC! WE ARE NOT WORTHY!!! (worship, worship, grovel, worship) ;) I mean, it has everything I could ask for: RusxUS, FrUK, implied Geritalia, magic, it's well-written and has a stimulating plot... Gods, I love this fic...
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Thank you!
I'm really glad you're enjoying it so much! :-)
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~Kingdom of Prussia~
Kingdom Seat: Berlin
Ruler --
Gilbert Beilschmidt ~ Air
Heir --
Ludwig (Brother/Younger) ~ Air
Land Controlled --
Prussia
Germany
Austria
Hungary
Notes --
~Ludwig is engaged to marry the youngest grandson of the neighboring Italia Kingdom.
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I was delighted to see that this was up - I was just looking around yesterday and wondering if the next bit would be up soon, because it had been awhile since the last update. And then I check the fill index again today, not even thinking about this fic and, lo and behold, an update! (hugs author!anon) I truly love how you're playing Ivan in this fic. He still seems very much like Russia, but with different aspects of him emphasized. The other aspects are still there, the danger, the power, but there's more. Like we're getting a more in-depth look at his personality. (waves hand in frustration) I just know there's a better way to say all of this, but my brain is currently in exam-week melt-down, and has shut off access to the areas that contain this better way of saying it. Suffice to say, I love this fic, I love you for writing it, and I will happily stand first watch ( ... )
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Yes! That darkness you mentioned you're trying to portray - it's coming across beautifully! It's part of what makes him so intriguing! And everything you say is there, and I'd totally spazz about it all some more, but my brain is melting out of my ears and taking my normal verbosity with it. (stupid finals...) Russia's plans work just fine, btw. I loved the bit where he was asking Alfred to work with him to make this something that was mutually beneficial so much...! Yes. Again, worship, devotion, and praise for you, most excellent author!anon! Worship, devotion, and praise! (looks over what she's just written) Yeesh, I sound like a creepy stalker-person. That's it, I need more sleep... See you at the next update! ^^ (stumbles off to get some sleep)
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