At World's End -- Part 4c
anonymous
March 22 2010, 02:10:08 UTC
He stopped in front of a section of the wall towards the back of the garden. There barely visible even to those who knew it was there was a small chunk of brick that looked only slightly out of place with the rest of the wall. He took a deep breath and pushed it. The door swung open slightly. He breathed a sigh of relief and quickly shut it back up again. Then he continued walking until he reached the place where the regular gardens merged with Francis' rose gardens and turned and walked towards the center of the garden and towards the pond. He waited until he was sitting with his back against the tree, pack on the ground next to him, before he sent a cautious glance towards the windows of the family quarters
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At World's End -- Part 4d
anonymous
March 22 2010, 02:12:36 UTC
"You haven't been around for the past five years, Alfred," Matthew snapped in real anger. "What could you possibly know about what I want or not
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At World's End -- Part 4e
anonymous
March 22 2010, 02:14:37 UTC
Matthew seemed to sense his mood though he misunderstood what it was for. "You could come with me," he said with a wide grin. "Imagine the stir we'd cause if we showed up together
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Re: At World's End -- Part 4f
anonymous
March 22 2010, 10:30:18 UTC
This was totally worth waiting for, everything fits so well together and both Alfred and Matthew are very realistic. The stone in the pond part was really good. Now I'm wondering what his escape attempt will be?The part where Alfred learned Ivan's name was really cute too ^_^
Thank you I'm glad you enjoyed it! It's nice to know there are a few people still hanging around to read this I feel bad about leaving it hang for a while but real life and naughty muses just did let me.
*happydance*
anonymous
March 22 2010, 20:39:56 UTC
This was great. I'm totally looking forward to the next bit, and will wait just as long for it :). The characters are great and the bonus information is just soooo WIN.
Re: At World's End -- Part 4f
anonymous
March 23 2010, 02:33:50 UTC
Yay an update! I really like that invisible bond that is there between the two brothers. And I also love the rock part near the end. Great job so far! Keep it up! C:
Extras/Bonus Content
anonymous
March 22 2010, 02:23:53 UTC
I will be putting all extra/bonus content under this sub-thread.
To start with I only have a couple of brief Kingdom Guides for the Britannia Kingdom and the Northern Kingdom. Eventually I plan to add them for all of Northland's Main Kingdoms though most will not play any direct role in the story itself. I also plan on posting a couple of timelines for non-spoilery events that took place before the story start and hopefully eventually that map if I can get the scanner working.
Kingdom Guide: Britannia
anonymous
March 22 2010, 02:31:59 UTC
Note these do not contain any spoilers if you've read up to Part 4 these are current for the characters up to the start of At World's End and don't include anything that's first brought to light after the first chapter starts
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Re: Kingdom Guide: Northern Kingdom
anonymous
March 22 2010, 17:09:42 UTC
Hiyas! In accordance with the rules of the Kink Meme, I must make this post anonymous. However, I would like to take the time to gloat over having located this (as I've mentioned to you in non-anonymous posts, I'm not that good at navigating livejournal
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Re: Kingdom Guide: Northern Kingdom
anonymous
March 22 2010, 17:23:45 UTC
I'm glad you found it and I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Heh actually I've never mentioned Ravis before this bonus he's a bit of a spoiler I guess he was supposed to at least be mentioned by this point but that part got snipped out of an earlier chapter but I decided to leave it in because it's not that big of a plot point. He's definitely not the only Baltic that will be appearing though... ;-)
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Great job so far! Keep it up! C:
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To start with I only have a couple of brief Kingdom Guides for the Britannia Kingdom and the Northern Kingdom. Eventually I plan to add them for all of Northland's Main Kingdoms though most will not play any direct role in the story itself. I also plan on posting a couple of timelines for non-spoilery events that took place before the story start and hopefully eventually that map if I can get the scanner working.
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Heh actually I've never mentioned Ravis before this bonus he's a bit of a spoiler I guess he was supposed to at least be mentioned by this point but that part got snipped out of an earlier chapter but I decided to leave it in because it's not that big of a plot point. He's definitely not the only Baltic that will be appearing though... ;-)
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