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Underneath [1/?]

[anonymous]

Original request from part 7: http://hetalia-kink.livejournal.com/10960.html?thread=19686864#t19686864. Anon!author wasn't sure about which names to use, so she went with the country names. Also, did not manage smut, alas. But I hope this satisfies otherwise!Initially, England had blamed the economy. Granted, the current economic conditions were all America's fault to begin with, but England could still understand the younger nation being tense because of it. It wasn't as though America was acting particularly different, anyway. He was just a little less loud, a little less boisterous, and England actually appreciated the change. It made the meetings considerably less irritating

Re: Underneath [6/?]

[anonymous]

Fuck. Fuck THIS IS GIVING ME THE SHIVERS. The good kind.

/brbstalkingforever

Re: Underneath [6/?]

[anonymous]

*_*

The image of yandere America musing about ending the world is so bizarrely, horribly attractive.

Love this. Stalking with the other anons.

Re: Underneath [3/?]

[anonymous]

England, you thick head o.o;

Underneath [7/?]

[anonymous]

England used the flight back home to ponder what to do with all the new information he'd learned. The problem was that he had no idea what he should do, really. Simply filing it all away in his mind seemed wrong. He felt restless at the mere thought, as though he had been building up to something and doing nothing instead would be a terrible mistake. But he wasn't sure what other option he had. It wasn't as though America had done something dangerous or terrible, something that necesitated a meeting or even taking him into custody. He was just very...England wasn't even sure what the word for it was

Re: Underneath [7/?]

[anonymous]

Good god, England is amazingly good at rationalizations (and not just in this part, either!). I like how his thought process just starts heading towards "Oh well, we're all a little mad here :Db". OTL

This whole paragraph is a thing of beauty and hilarity, for some strange reason:

"Everything's fine," England said, standing awkwardly in the foyer of the house. Now that he was here, he wasn't really sure what he was actually going to say. 'You don't have a bunch of bodies rotting in your cellar, right?' Somehow, he didn't think that would go well regardless of the answer.

That last sentence had me in stitches. XD

Re: Underneath [7/?]

[anonymous]

Good god, England is amazingly good at rationalizations (and not just in this part, either!). I like how his thought process just starts heading towards "Oh well, we're all a little mad here :Db". OTL

IKR? 8D Gotta love the way England thinks. This chapter has me so psyched, author anon, I hope you update soon, but honestly no pressure. ♥

Man, this fill is just written no nicely. \;3;/

Underneath [8/?]

[anonymous]

England wasn't sure where to start. He decided that at least a bit of the truth would probably be best

Underneath [9/?]

[anonymous]

Later, much later, England would curse his own moment of indecision. If he'd just been able to speak, he could have made his excuses to America and left quickly, and maybe gone the rest of his existence being able to feign ignorance.

That wasn't what happened.

He was still badly shaken from the photo, staring dumbstruck at it. Coming on the heels of all of his calm, pleased feelings about America, it was a little like turning over a rock to see something squirming underneath. There was no avoiding the feeling of horror

Underneath [10/?]

[anonymous]

"France said--" England cut himself off sharply. If they'd all been right about America's feelings, it seemed increasingly likely that they were right about the danger America posed. England didn't want to turn America's attention their way.

"France said what?" America said, stepping even closer to him, still smiling widely. What big teeth you have, England thought, before he could stop himself. "Did France say something about me

Re: Underneath [10/?]

[anonymous]

I must have a horribly twisted sense of humor because this is making me laugh and feel so giddy. How you set up everything with Alfred just snapping and the warnings Arthur reasoned away to the casual lighthearted mind f**ck you are putting Arthur through. Ah this is love. And the best part is how well it fits in like something you passed by so many times and you just noticed it was there. Please keep writing. captcha says united prattle XD

Re: Underneath [10/?]

[anonymous]

This is fucking awesome. WHY SO CREEPY, AMERICA?

Re: Underneath [10/?]

[anonymous]

Oh oh oh my God a-a cliffie D8 Author!anon, the tension you built along these ways just kind of kicked in and left me so stuuned at this moment! The way England's rationalization backfired, the way America snapped I don't even! . . . I guess no more denials for you England. . .

Please continue, this anon will be here rooting for you 8D

ReCaptcha: op powders WUT.

Re: Underneath [10/?]

[anonymous]

nooo cliffhanger! I'm dying for more of this. Honestly has to be my favorite fill on the kink meme so far~

Re: Underneath [10/?]

[anonymous]

Oh damn, anon, suddenly I'm more eager for the rest of this fill than any other of the too many other fills I'm reading. Your descriptions and imagery are fantastic; I'd love to see this one de-anoned eventually, since this is doing such a good job of exploring stuff fandom tends to either shy away from or, well, do badly. Good job, anon! <3

Re: Underneath [10/?]

[anonymous]

Omg. I really fear what's gonna happen next orz orz orz. At the same time, you really did a great job setting the way how Alfred works and arthur's mindset. Anxiously waiting to see your next part!