Underneath [1/?]
anonymous
April 12 2010, 04:17:33 UTC
Original request from part 7: http://hetalia-kink.livejournal.com/10960.html?thread=19686864#t19686864. Anon!author wasn't sure about which names to use, so she went with the country names. Also, did not manage smut, alas. But I hope this satisfies otherwise!Initially, England had blamed the economy. Granted, the current economic conditions were all America's fault to begin with, but England could still understand the younger nation being tense because of it. It wasn't as though America was acting particularly different, anyway. He was just a little less loud, a little less boisterous, and England actually appreciated the change. It made the meetings considerably less irritating
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Underneath [11/?]
anonymous
May 3 2010, 01:09:33 UTC
"Get away from me," England ordered, voice low and tight. "If you think you can just-"
"Aw, England," America said, smile as sweet and sunny as ever. Except for his eyes. The look in his eyes... "Always barking out orders, always trying to be in charge. Always trying to bend everyone else to your will. Your citizens, not so much anymore, but you? You never change
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Underneath [13/?]
anonymous
May 3 2010, 03:11:33 UTC
"It's been said before, yeah," America said, letting his free hand rest on England's neck gently, fingers exploring the already forming bruises. England was trying to work up a suitably scathing retort when America spoke again, voice dreamy and fractured. "It only got worse, the bigger I got. There were so many people, and they were all so different, and I could hear them in my head, all at once. And some of them hated each other, hated like nothing I could understand. They wiped each other out, enslaved each other, hung each other, left each other poor and diseased and broken. They screamed about skin color, about religion, about where they were from, like they weren't all a part of me. Like I didn't love them all. And they all needed help, they were all screaming for it, and all I ever wanted was to help
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Underneath [14/16]
anonymous
May 3 2010, 03:56:59 UTC
America let go of one of his wrists to run the back of his fingers along England's neck, movements still slow and gentle. England let himself lean into the touch, parting his lips to let America deepen the kiss. He made a soft sound, and felt America smile
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Underneath [16/16]
anonymous
May 3 2010, 04:20:29 UTC
Epilogue
England didn't stop until he hit America's border, waiting until he was well into Toronto before finally pulling over and getting himself to a hospital. He refused any painkillers, and may have overreacted slightly when they offered to sedate him. Predictably, Canda showed up within an hour of England being checked into the emergency room.
"What happened?" he gasped, staring in horror at England's injuries
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Re: Underneath [16/16]
anonymous
May 3 2010, 04:37:44 UTC
This fill makes me worry that I am more like Twitarded fantwits than I thought. Because, at the end, the one I'm worried about and awwing over is America. WTF self he is a dangerous stalker. Why do I want to cuddle him. Why am I not more worried for England. *shakes self by the shoulders*
Authoranon, nice work! Love your writing, England's slow realization, America's grinning all throughout.
I think for my sanity I will pretend America does not completely freakout and somehow builds up a healthy supportive needful relationship with someone else after. *sucks thumb*
Re: Underneath [16/16]
anonymous
May 3 2010, 04:53:59 UTC
Oh man I really want to know what happens after this. It just seems so undone, or something. ;__; I feel so bad for both of them, but then again a happy ending seemed kind of unlikely. I LOVED how you did this entire thing. All the countries involved and how everyone seemed to not want to talk about it. America was CREEPY and dark as hell. I do like the flash of humanity in letting him go, nice to see he hasn't gone quite all the way or at least was capable of letting him go after all that. And how Canada knew, because really he had to have known. It'd be REALLY appreciated if you could make another chapter, and I don't normally ask authors this, but it was just so good and I want to know what happens. ;___; Still as it is, it's a great piece and the only one I've reviewed in this meme(not to mentioned F5 every hour since I found it xD). Thank-you for writing this!! I'm going to go look for some fluffy/happy fics to drown myself in now.
Re: Underneath [16/16]
anonymous
May 3 2010, 16:25:06 UTC
yeeeees I've been waiting for this to be updated and ugrhsvjn words can't express how happy this makes me. It's perfect. I love how absolutely dark America is. I'm so looking forward to the sequel
Fuck getting to school on time
anonymous
May 5 2010, 16:05:08 UTC
If that wasn't a mind fuck, I don't know what is. O_O Damn...
My favorite things in this: 1) England realizing the photo was of him by the eyebrows, and the being annoyed with himself. 2) England getting away by appologizing and admitting he's an asshole sometimes. That was just... <3 (I need to re-learn how to make those little hearts...) Something about how it wasn't the fighting back that saved him, but the giving up... *flail* I cannot tell you how much I loved that. I just can't. 3) England wanting a gun. Ffffffffft. YES. That was perfect. I could kill my mind for going 'Yeah, a gun would probably slow him down, at least...' Thank you, brain. Thank you.
...It just occured to me that England is an idiot for not asking Matthew about Al's creepy before hand. *facepalm* /nerding forever
Re: Fuck getting to school on time
anonymous
May 6 2010, 09:53:47 UTC
I totally agree with your comments, but I'm really just hijacking your comment to tell you how to make hearts. XDDD
You just type the ampersand (the "&" sign), hearts (it has to be plural), and a semi-colon, all squished together. In other words, type this without any spaces:
& hearts ;
to make the ♥ appear ：
... ReCaptcha says "not polite"! Apparently it does not approve of thread-jacking. Who knew?
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"Aw, England," America said, smile as sweet and sunny as ever. Except for his eyes. The look in his eyes... "Always barking out orders, always trying to be in charge. Always trying to bend everyone else to your will. Your citizens, not so much anymore, but you? You never change ( ... )
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*F5S*
Captcha: So negotiate. OH THE IRONY.
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England didn't stop until he hit America's border, waiting until he was well into Toronto before finally pulling over and getting himself to a hospital. He refused any painkillers, and may have overreacted slightly when they offered to sedate him. Predictably, Canda showed up within an hour of England being checked into the emergency room.
"What happened?" he gasped, staring in horror at England's injuries ( ... )
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Creepy creepy creepy creepy creepy creepy creepy.
*shudders* I didn't think England was going to make it out of there. Wonderful, anon. Just wonderful.
Also my brain is going to demand some sort of epilogue to the epilogue after this but I suppose it's up to my imagination. >_
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Authoranon, nice work! Love your writing, England's slow realization, America's grinning all throughout.
I think for my sanity I will pretend America does not completely freakout and somehow builds up a healthy supportive needful relationship with someone else after. *sucks thumb*
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I've been waiting for this to be updated and ugrhsvjn words can't express how happy this makes me. It's perfect. I love how absolutely dark America is.
I'm so looking forward to the sequel
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My favorite things in this:
1) England realizing the photo was of him by the eyebrows, and the being annoyed with himself.
2) England getting away by appologizing and admitting he's an asshole sometimes. That was just... <3 (I need to re-learn how to make those little hearts...) Something about how it wasn't the fighting back that saved him, but the giving up... *flail* I cannot tell you how much I loved that. I just can't.
3) England wanting a gun. Ffffffffft. YES. That was perfect. I could kill my mind for going 'Yeah, a gun would probably slow him down, at least...' Thank you, brain. Thank you.
...It just occured to me that England is an idiot for not asking Matthew about Al's creepy before hand. *facepalm*
/nerding forever
Oh god, so late for school! orz
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You just type the ampersand (the "&" sign), hearts (it has to be plural), and a semi-colon, all squished together. In other words, type this without any spaces:
& hearts ;
to make the ♥ appear ：
... ReCaptcha says "not polite"! Apparently it does not approve of thread-jacking. Who knew?
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I will do my best to write a small sequel to this fic. When I do, it'll be filled here:
http://hetalia-kink.livejournal.com/15769.html?thread=39537305#t39537305
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