England/colonial!US, noncon shota, I'm going to hell
anonymous
February 16 2010, 04:33:57 UTC
Hope this isn't too specific.
I've seen a lot of consensual shota between America and England, but I crave horrible psychological trauma. I want America to be confused and afraid, I want England to feel endless guilt but still try to rationalize his actions, I want America to feel irrational guilt. Basically I want gut-wrenching agony on both parts and to have the urge to punch England in the dick.
If it's not too much to ask, I also have a few specifications: 1) America grows up to be how he is in canon (cocky, exuberant, has a hero complex, fairly good relationship with England, etc). Whether he chooses to suppress the abuse or simply have the most fucked up outlook on his relationship with England ever is up to you. Perhaps he convinces himself it's not abuse because he's a nation? 2) Canada knew about it. Sometimes it's good to go unnoticed in a household with a child molester, eh? 3) France finds out. Chaos ensues. If you involve Finland or Holland in this I'll love you forever. 4) Bonus if England breaks down at any point. 5)
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Re: Sing Sung Songs [2/?] - Quick concrit
anonymous
July 7 2010, 02:09:26 UTC
This sentence needs to become a fully-developed paragraph. Parenthesis are meant to contain single words or short phrases that add an extra little something to the sentence (oomph) and not fully developed sentences or ideas. Sometimes it can work with longer ideas but in this case by the time I got to the end of the parenthesis I forgot where I started. I also found Canada's mixed past-present-future POV confusing; it needs more development for clarification.
Aside from that, I love how you've characterized little!Canada here. I can't wait for France to find out and kick England's ass!
reCaptcha: volcano trustees (Captcha thinks Iceland should help Finland if he gets involved later)
<<< What Canada quickly learns (from France’s hand at his chin, scratching at his beard, that adult look- concern, one second and two over his features- “There’s no helping him.” Knowing the word France had wanted to say was ‘depraved’; but only figures this out when he’s older and England is crying in his room in that red redcoat “I’ve lost him!”
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Sing Sung Songs [3/?]
anonymous
February 23 2010, 22:24:57 UTC
His hands are clasped over America’s little arms, he looks like he’s pleading, crouched to America’s level. Canada can’t see America’s expression only his bare back, water drops still clinging to his skin. He shivers but not from the cold. England’s grip is insistent
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Holy shit. Holy shit. I'm speechless. Must attempt to articulate my love through a means other than capslock.
You've got a beautiful writing style. And taking it from Canada's perspective, seeing it through his eyes and remembering all the things France had said... guh. The third part put a lump in my throat because holy God everything England is saying and America's desperation to prove his love dfjsakl;trhewagwear
As America had blurred that line he brought back what they’d been fighting about- “There’s only one kind of love in this world!”
I literally felt my heart drop. Bravo, author!anon ♥ I can't wait for more!
captcha: allege Briton's. HAHAHA LJ KNOWS WHAT YOU'RE UP TO, ENGLAND.
Re: Sing Sung Songs [3/?]
anonymous
February 25 2010, 03:37:00 UTC
I think my heart stopped a little while reading this. I absolutely adore it all; England's manipulation, Canada just watching and his absolute horror, and GOD. America! He's just so desperate and adorable and twisted, and I loved it.
Re: Sing Sung Songs [7/?]
anonymous
February 26 2010, 05:39:33 UTC
Captcha says: "mourned about". Captcha is quite accurate. You have made me feel sorry for everyone. But especially America, with his big grin and his heart on his sleeve and his tendency to fall in love over and over again - it suits him so well. It's sort of heartbreaking seeing Canada watch all this and know what's going on and still not be able to help it.
I even feel sorry for England, dammit, because it's so painfully obvious that he really does love America, even as he's hurting him.
The scary thing is, I can see all this having happened in Hetalia canon. So easily I'll find it hard not to use as backstory.
Re: Sing Sung Songs [7/?]
anonymous
February 26 2010, 07:55:05 UTC
OP again. Totally didn't reread the first parts like ten times today because I like this story so much. Nope.
Seconding the person above that I can actually see this as plausible canon. It's all sorts of twisted on both sides, but oh man poor America. Poor Canada, having to bear that burden and have such an awful purpose for visiting. And England's accusing America and perpetuating the poor kid's guilt! My heart hurts for all of them, but that especially drove his depravity home. I think this is the first time a fanfic has made me so intensely angry.
GOD I LOVE YOU, ANON. Stalking this thread forever.
Re: Sing Sung Songs [7/?]
anonymous
February 26 2010, 08:01:28 UTC
I am adoring this fill as if there is no tomorrow. I love that England isn't hurting America on purpose, only trying keep him close and get America to understand who he belongs to. Everything is so beautiful and also heart wrenching in this fill, you are definitely hitting this one out of the park. Keep up the fantastic work!
I've seen a lot of consensual shota between America and England, but I crave horrible psychological trauma. I want America to be confused and afraid, I want England to feel endless guilt but still try to rationalize his actions, I want America to feel irrational guilt. Basically I want gut-wrenching agony on both parts and to have the urge to punch England in the dick.
If it's not too much to ask, I also have a few specifications:
1) America grows up to be how he is in canon (cocky, exuberant, has a hero complex, fairly good relationship with England, etc). Whether he chooses to suppress the abuse or simply have the most fucked up outlook on his relationship with England ever is up to you. Perhaps he convinces himself it's not abuse because he's a nation?
2) Canada knew about it. Sometimes it's good to go unnoticed in a household with a child molester, eh?
3) France finds out. Chaos ensues. If you involve Finland or Holland in this I'll love you forever.
4) Bonus if England breaks down at any point.
5) ( ... )
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Sing Sung SongsIn a field of flowers, Canada follows his brother America ( ... )
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Aside from that, I love how you've characterized little!Canada here. I can't wait for France to find out and kick England's ass!
reCaptcha: volcano trustees (Captcha thinks Iceland should help Finland if he gets involved later)
<<< What Canada quickly learns (from France’s hand at his chin, scratching at his beard, that adult look- concern, one second and two over his features- “There’s no helping him.” Knowing the word France had wanted to say was ‘depraved’; but only figures this out when he’s older and England is crying in his room in that red redcoat “I’ve lost him!” ( ... )
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You've got a beautiful writing style. And taking it from Canada's perspective, seeing it through his eyes and remembering all the things France had said... guh. The third part put a lump in my throat because holy God everything England is saying and America's desperation to prove his love dfjsakl;trhewagwear
As America had blurred that line he brought back what they’d been fighting about- “There’s only one kind of love in this world!”
I literally felt my heart drop. Bravo, author!anon ♥ I can't wait for more!
captcha: allege Briton's. HAHAHA LJ KNOWS WHAT YOU'RE UP TO, ENGLAND.
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I eagerly await the next part!
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I even feel sorry for England, dammit, because it's so painfully obvious that he really does love America, even as he's hurting him.
The scary thing is, I can see all this having happened in Hetalia canon. So easily I'll find it hard not to use as backstory.
Please continue soon.
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Seconding the person above that I can actually see this as plausible canon. It's all sorts of twisted on both sides, but oh man poor America. Poor Canada, having to bear that burden and have such an awful purpose for visiting. And England's accusing America and perpetuating the poor kid's guilt! My heart hurts for all of them, but that especially drove his depravity home. I think this is the first time a fanfic has made me so intensely angry.
GOD I LOVE YOU, ANON. Stalking this thread forever.
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Despite the sad-facing, I'm glad I stumbled on this fill just now; I never saw it on the fills list.
... Way to ruin the moment, ReCaptcha: "Mr. guzzler"
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