AU Gakuen Fic; Matthew/Alfred Incest Taboo
anonymous
March 26 2010, 12:35:49 UTC
Matthew and Alfred Williams-Jones are twin brothers attending Gakuen Academy. Al is the school`s golden boy, while quieter Matt tends to be ignored when not on the ice with the hockey team. Neither has ever managed to have a serious relationship, until one night in their room, Matthew figures something out... Cue start of Incestuous Relationship
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They Said to Stop [1a/?]
anonymous
March 29 2010, 19:56:31 UTC
They Said To Stop
It's probably love, love is definitely right. But why does it hurt, and why do tears await us?
Unaware of how I am, they tell me not to start, They tell me you will not come to me. Unaware of my heart, they tell me not to love, They tell me that I cannot have you.Alfred once complained Matthew’s gaze was too intense; Matthew nearly forgot until he catches himself staring, and even now it’s too late for Francis has already called him out. So Matthew leans against the bleachers and shoots a coy smile back at Francis, shrugging his shoulders carelessly as he runs a hand through his hair
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Re: They Said to Stop [1b/?]
anonymous
March 29 2010, 20:02:53 UTC
-------Despite being twins, they’ve never kept to the same circle of friends. Perhaps its because their personalities are so different. Alfred likes attention, thrives on people noticing him and isn’t afraid to put himself out there. He’d quickly joined a half-dozen clubs their first year of high school, finally narrowing his commitments down to the football and baseball teams. Matthew reckons - rightly so - that everyone in their school knows the name “Alfred Jones
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Re: They Said to Stop [1b/?]
anonymous
March 29 2010, 22:20:23 UTC
Anon, I really like how this is shaping up! And I love Alfred. He's so perfect here. Especially that part with the college girl - I can totally see him doing that!
Re: They Said to Stop [1b/?]
anonymous
March 29 2010, 22:21:33 UTC
I didn't realize how much I could enjoy a single beginning chapter of a fic, but now I know! I adore this so far, it's incredibly well written and has a beautiful flow to it that makes me want to read for ages.
Re: They Said to Stop [1b/?]
anonymous
March 29 2010, 22:47:16 UTC
Hey, Matt, you lucky bastard, I also wanna get back home to a sight of Alfred sprawled naked on a bed...*fans self*
Great beginning! I like that it's Matt's secludedness which prompts him to notice his attraction and focus on it on his brother before Alfred does. And you made them get along and
Oh, anon, I think this is excellent! They all seem right on character (in character?) to me; Al friendly and active, Francis flirty and lazy, Matthew quiet but no where as innocent as he might seem, and Arthur being, well so very Arthur-like I flail trying to find the words to fit it.
I love the brief glimpse of the future/present, and how Matt waits for Al's invitation, which is both eager and nervous. And I can't wait to follow along with your story to see how they get there! (And what will happen from there!)
They Said to Stop [2a/?]
anonymous
April 12 2010, 01:13:08 UTC
Alfred’s favourite booth isn’t tucked in a corner of the restaurant. It’s right in the middle, amongst all the chaos of the local McDonalds. He practically has to drag his brother there, using guilt tactics to remind Matthew this is the only time they’ll see each other after classes this week, and every week after
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They Said to Stop [2b/?]
anonymous
April 12 2010, 01:15:24 UTC
-------Alfred can’t remember a time when he wasn’t the most outspoken kid in class. People have always been drawn to him, mimicking his actions and unconsciously assuming his manner of speech. Perhaps that’s why they’d railed against him so hard, that year Kiku became his best friend
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Re: They Said to Stop [2c/?]
anonymous
April 12 2010, 02:21:58 UTC
Oh my law there are no WORDS to describe how awesome this is.
I hate this couple, with a passion, but something begged me to click on this and I did and i'm SO HAPPY. You're writing style is gorgeous, and the formatting is absol-blinking-lutely perfect. You've made me LOVE this couple. Thank you so much! Please update soon (and dont' forget to post in the fills section because I want this SO BAD)
Re: They Said to Stop [2c/?]
anonymous
April 13 2010, 12:24:27 UTC
OP is in love, and god, Alfred is PERFECT. You don`t have a thing to worry about so far as characterization goes author-anon, because it`s fantastic!!
Not that I think you have much else to worry about either. I`m loving the story! I think the time skips so far have been pretty clear; really, I`m enjoying the format a lot.
In fact, the only bad thing is that every chapter leaves me longing for the next one because it`s so good! <3<3<3
Re: They Said to Stop [2c/?]
anonymous
May 20 2010, 20:28:20 UTC
There's not much fangirling I can do on an iPhone ;; BUT WJSOAJSJSKDN JFC I LOVE THIS FIC ALREADY--EVERYTHING IS PERFECT. STARS IN MY EYES ANON--PLEASE UPDATE ASAP. HAVE MY INTERNET
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It's probably love, love is definitely right.
But why does it hurt, and why do tears await us?
Unaware of how I am, they tell me not to start,
They tell me you will not come to me.
Unaware of my heart, they tell me not to love,
They tell me that I cannot have you.Alfred once complained Matthew’s gaze was too intense; Matthew nearly forgot until he catches himself staring, and even now it’s too late for Francis has already called him out. So Matthew leans against the bleachers and shoots a coy smile back at Francis, shrugging his shoulders carelessly as he runs a hand through his hair ( ... )
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Bookmarked! ♪
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Great beginning! I like that it's Matt's secludedness which prompts him to notice his attraction and focus on it on his brother before Alfred does. And you made them get along and
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I love the brief glimpse of the future/present, and how Matt waits for Al's invitation, which is both eager and nervous. And I can't wait to follow along with your story to see how they get there! (And what will happen from there!)
Thank you so much!
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I hate this couple, with a passion, but something begged me to click on this and I did and i'm SO HAPPY. You're writing style is gorgeous, and the formatting is absol-blinking-lutely perfect. You've made me LOVE this couple. Thank you so much! Please update soon (and dont' forget to post in the fills section because I want this SO BAD)
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recaptcha: provide smelting lololol
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Not that I think you have much else to worry about either. I`m loving the story! I think the time skips so far have been pretty clear; really, I`m enjoying the format a lot.
In fact, the only bad thing is that every chapter leaves me longing for the next one because it`s so good! <3<3<3
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