AU Gakuen Fic; Matthew/Alfred Incest Taboo
anonymous
March 26 2010, 12:35:49 UTC
Matthew and Alfred Williams-Jones are twin brothers attending Gakuen Academy. Al is the school`s golden boy, while quieter Matt tends to be ignored when not on the ice with the hockey team. Neither has ever managed to have a serious relationship, until one night in their room, Matthew figures something out... Cue start of Incestuous Relationship
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Re: They Said to Stop [2c/?]
anonymous
June 27 2010, 23:13:46 UTC
Author!anon, I have read my (un)fair share of fabulous seme!Matthew fics, but this clearly redefines the standard! *Faints* Arthur is so obviously crushing, but the twins are too committed to each other for that to work out. ^-^ I hope that those bonuses are hit on, because they all just sound so smexy! Wahha, does love! Praise the author!anon!
They Said to Stop [3a/?]
anonymous
November 2 2010, 16:00:27 UTC
Matthew isn’t known for taking decisive action - he prefers the more subtle forms of expression, the type that once led to him gluing all Alfred’s plastic green army men to the floor. It ends in the same amount of trouble, but it draws less attention
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They Said to Stop [3b/?]
anonymous
November 2 2010, 16:03:17 UTC
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Alfred’s a good kid, but he always finds trouble. That’s what the teachers say, shaking their heads with a mixture of amusement and regret. Always has to play the hero, no matter how many times he is punished for it.
The rumours began in the first class after lunch - that in the cafeteria, Alfred defended a girl from the terrifying Ivan Braginsky. But the story morphs and soon the whispers talk about how it was really a gang from the high school a district over and that Alfred is sporting a black eye.
Matthew worries all through history and then all through the detention period, camped out in front of Alfred’s locker. He watches the shuffle of feet curve around him until finally the halls are silent and Alfred trudges up the stairs from the first floor, grinning sheepishly as he waggles a hand hello
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Re: They Said to Stop [3b/?]
anonymous
November 2 2010, 17:07:35 UTC
I'm glad you're finishing this! I read the first 2 chapters when you originally posted them and its good to see a continuation.
I really loved this chapter, especially part b with Francis and the twins stressing over their relationship. Alfred's 'Pass me a sandwhich, love.' is such a beautiful line :)
Not OP but:
anonymous
November 2 2010, 18:27:44 UTC
Oh..my..gosh...You returned!! *Squeals*
*Cough* Anyway, yeah, to see an update to this is so much happiness. I thought for sure that this became another dead fic and I was so sad about that because the first 2 chapters was so awesome. But-but you returned! So yeah, you're awesome.
I really do love this story. One minute it makes me squeal in giddyness for all the fluff and sweetness and the next, it makes my stomach clentch at the hints of angst and the inevtable blow up when people find out about just how close Alfred and Matthew are. This is especially true with the way the passage of time is in this fic. It does get a bit confusing but the effect it creates certainly has a bigger impact.
"Neither of them sees Francis staring at them from the door of the neighbouring classroom." <--So this line, just made my heart stop for a second. It'll be interesting to see how Francis plays a role in all of this (if he does). I also assume that this occurs before the football practice in chapter 1 when Francis made that comment about
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OP loves you to pieces!
anonymous
November 4 2010, 10:10:30 UTC
WAH! You came back!! Oh, anon, you don't know how much I adore you and this fill. It is utterly beautiful and hot and heart-wrenching and yet warm fuzzy scattering at the same time. I shivered at the bit about Francis seeing them, I really did. And oh, Alfred, how can we blame Matt for wanting to shove you against a wall and kiss you senseless when you do such incredibly sweet things?
Thank [i]you[/i] author anon. I too, have struggled with writing and have had things languish as I struggle to bring them to the next point. I honestly, truly do love this story though, and I shall look forward to the next installment. ~~~<3
Re: They Said to Stop [3b/?]
anonymous
November 14 2010, 07:45:53 UTC
This is, like, the freaking second coming. O.O!!!! KAAAAAAAA! I love the backstory on how Alfred and Matthew's romantic relationship formed! I wondered--I mean, the circumstances had to be just right, and just KAAAAAAA! OMG, they're found out by Francis? *dies happy* Dig me up when the next section is posted! <3 Love this, anon!
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Alfred’s a good kid, but he always finds trouble. That’s what the teachers say, shaking their heads with a mixture of amusement and regret. Always has to play the hero, no matter how many times he is punished for it.
The rumours began in the first class after lunch - that in the cafeteria, Alfred defended a girl from the terrifying Ivan Braginsky. But the story morphs and soon the whispers talk about how it was really a gang from the high school a district over and that Alfred is sporting a black eye.
Matthew worries all through history and then all through the detention period, camped out in front of Alfred’s locker. He watches the shuffle of feet curve around him until finally the halls are silent and Alfred trudges up the stairs from the first floor, grinning sheepishly as he waggles a hand hello ( ... )
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I really loved this chapter, especially part b with Francis and the twins stressing over their relationship. Alfred's 'Pass me a sandwhich, love.' is such a beautiful line :)
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*Cough* Anyway, yeah, to see an update to this is so much happiness. I thought for sure that this became another dead fic and I was so sad about that because the first 2 chapters was so awesome. But-but you returned! So yeah, you're awesome.
I really do love this story. One minute it makes me squeal in giddyness for all the fluff and sweetness and the next, it makes my stomach clentch at the hints of angst and the inevtable blow up when people find out about just how close Alfred and Matthew are.
This is especially true with the way the passage of time is in this fic. It does get a bit confusing but the effect it creates certainly has a bigger impact.
"Neither of them sees Francis staring at them from the door of the neighbouring classroom." <--So this line, just made my heart stop for a second. It'll be interesting to see how Francis plays a role in all of this (if he does). I also assume that this occurs before the football practice in chapter 1 when Francis made that comment about ( ... )
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You updated! :D :D :D Oh god, I am so glad you decided to continue, because this is just amazing!
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I just discovered this fill and it's so fun!
Matt and Alfred just go together so well and so cutely :)
Haha, this makes me feel like I'm in grade school again, wow.
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*HUGS FOREVER*
And oh, Mattie, with your "I wanna but, no, bad!" ;A; GOOD THING YOUR BROTHER IS STUBBORN. :|
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Thank [i]you[/i] author anon. I too, have struggled with writing and have had things languish as I struggle to bring them to the next point. I honestly, truly do love this story though, and I shall look forward to the next installment. ~~~<3
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captcha: respect allegiance. I pledge allegiance to this fic... >8D
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