This fill is kind of an epilogue to my first fill for this prompt, 'Yes, sir', but they can easily be read seperate. Please note that 'Yes, sir' is an older fill, and done when I was pretty new to smut.. Therefore, this is kind of an apology for making such back then and a try on making something that's (hopefully!) better and more enjoyable
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For you, sir (5/9)
anonymous
April 29 2010, 21:44:28 UTC
Arthur turned his head as he let go of Alfred and breathed in heavily. “When I say move, you move!” he spat, but didn’t really sound angry, more flustered. Alfred was reminded - Arthur didn’t normally do this kind of stuff. As he’d fucked him earlier, he had been taking his virginity being with a man. As he threw a look down at him, his secure attitude seemed slightly broken.
“Sorry, sir,” Alfred slipped down Arthur’s body until his head was hovering above his. He pressed a gentle kiss to his forehead, his nose, his lips. Arthur’s arms slipped around his neck, and he could feel how he loosened up again with ease.
“Mhmm, just don’t let it happen again,” he mumbled against his lips, making Alfred smile.
“Of course not, sir.” He raised a brow as he looked into the other’s green eyes. “Allow me to apologize properly by going down under, sir.” Arthur giggled and gave Alfred’s head a push down.
“That kind of apology will be accepted. Go ahead, lad.”
Re: For you, sir (5/9)
anonymous
April 29 2010, 22:04:25 UTC
... Awesome; this is definitely the good kind of powerplay that Arthur is indulging in (and teasing Alfred with). I also really enjoyed the way who was in charge of the situation passed back and forth between the two, despite Arthur calling Alfred "boy" and "lad" and despite Alfred thinking of Arthur as "sir" and calling him the same.
I really like this bit; it's a strangely entertaining exchange, for so few words:
“How egoistical.”
“Mind your manners.”
“Sorry - how egoistical, sir.”
Arthur wasn’t muscular like himself; he was a lean, fragile man, and the fact that he seemed so breakable appealed to Alfred. He was the strong one. He could push Arthur to the floor and rape him if that was what he wanted. But still he was not the one in control - his body, mind, his every little action belonged to the gentleman sitting in front of him, smirking at him as if he could read his thoughts. ;areifauew[4r *A*
Re: For you, sir (5/9)
anonymous
April 30 2010, 00:40:48 UTC
YOU'RE BACK!! HOOOMAGAWD!!
My mind feels so dirty from this most scandalous fill. And I loved Arthur's bratty little princess act. I can't wait to see how this one turns outI bet a bunch of maids are fighting to get a peek through the keyhole.
ReCaptcha: racetrack that ...yea, I'd racetrack that like a stableboy...
Re: For you, sir (5/9)
anonymous
April 30 2010, 10:56:14 UTC
YOU FUCKER I LOVE YOU.
LIKE SERIOUS. I MEAN, I WAS JUST READING THE OLD ONE AND FUCK A SEQUAL AND GOD DAMN IT I LOVE YOU THIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIS HARD. EVEN MOAR.
Re: For you, sir (5/9)
anonymous
May 6 2010, 14:58:41 UTC
please for more of that delicious Arthur demanding Alfred to thank him for letting Alfred fuck him when he's just a stableboy? My god that was so hot. This "lord and stableboy/peasant" stuff is suchhhhh a turn on for me anon. I'm SO GLAD to see that you are continuing this story. I loved the first one, which I didn't think was bad at all, and it's easy to see you've become an even better smut writer now, so i'm positively ecstatic!
Request: http://hetalia-kink.livejournal.com/3274.html?thread=2921674#t2921674
Yes, sir: http://hetalia-kink.livejournal.com/10456.html?thread=21162712#t21162712
This fill is kind of an epilogue to my first fill for this prompt, 'Yes, sir', but they can easily be read seperate. Please note that 'Yes, sir' is an older fill, and done when I was pretty new to smut.. Therefore, this is kind of an apology for making such back then and a try on making something that's (hopefully!) better and more enjoyable ( ... )
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“Sorry, sir,” Alfred slipped down Arthur’s body until his head was hovering above his. He pressed a gentle kiss to his forehead, his nose, his lips. Arthur’s arms slipped around his neck, and he could feel how he loosened up again with ease.
“Mhmm, just don’t let it happen again,” he mumbled against his lips, making Alfred smile.
“Of course not, sir.” He raised a brow as he looked into the other’s green eyes. “Allow me to apologize properly by going down under, sir.” Arthur giggled and gave Alfred’s head a push down.
“That kind of apology will be accepted. Go ahead, lad.”
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I really like this bit; it's a strangely entertaining exchange, for so few words:
“How egoistical.”
“Mind your manners.”
“Sorry - how egoistical, sir.”
Arthur wasn’t muscular like himself; he was a lean, fragile man, and the fact that he seemed so breakable appealed to Alfred. He was the strong one. He could push Arthur to the floor and rape him if that was what he wanted. But still he was not the one in control - his body, mind, his every little action belonged to the gentleman sitting in front of him, smirking at him as if he could read his thoughts. ;areifauew[4r *A*
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My mind feels so dirty from this most scandalous fill. And I loved Arthur's bratty little princess act. I can't wait to see how this one turns outI bet a bunch of maids are fighting to get a peek through the keyhole.
ReCaptcha: racetrack that
...yea, I'd racetrack that like a stableboy...
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LIKE SERIOUS. I MEAN, I WAS JUST READING THE OLD ONE AND FUCK A SEQUAL AND GOD DAMN IT I LOVE YOU THIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIS HARD. EVEN MOAR.
I'M NOT OP BUT NOW I SERIOUSLY WISH I WAS.
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