Vash VS The Yandere States Of America
anonymous
September 6 2010, 04:01:31 UTC
When I first started this chapter, China was in it, but then somehow, Switzerland took over. I thought he was supposed to be neutral? Guess not. I ended up cutting out the first part of this chapter, then going in a completely new direction.
Vash Zwingli VS The Yandere States Of America It all started with an innocent invitation to a shooting range; right after a shouting match between China and America at his house (because nations just had to have their arguments on his front lawn). Switzerland would and should have turned it down, but when America offered to pay…well, it’s not like going to the shooting range with America would be completely unbearable, would it? After checking that the nation did indeed have a permit to carry weapons in Switzerland-he wasn’t sure how the boy managed that without him knowing, but Switzerland decided it wasn’t worth the trouble to ask-they left for Vash’s favorite range. With Liechtenstein in tow, naturally, since Switzerland wouldn’t leave without her. Vash spoke, slightly louder than usual, “I’m
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anonymous
September 6 2010, 04:37:59 UTC
*is other authoranon* I haven't been to a shooting range either but that scene was just sweet and wonderful. I love how it's suddenly on with the states even though California's got a bit of doubt going on. I don't know why but the idea of everyone dropping everything, including grudges with each other, just to protect America warms my heart. Can't wait to see more, anon!
Re: Vash VS The Yandere States Of America
anonymous
September 7 2010, 01:04:52 UTC
*is OP* You wrote the fill :'D I iz so happy ♥
Perfect first "date" for these two. Shooting range screams SwitzerlandxAmerica like no other setting xD I think you did a great job writing Vash in all his neutral/big bro glory. OP's never been to a range, so np if it was inaccurate haha)
You made Cali a lesbian? AWESOME! :D God, word travels fast state-side. Love how Cali's all "this wasn't an overreaction." You're traveling across the country because your Dad is a little late coming home. Totally not overreacting there. [/sarcasm]
As I mentioned before, I'm so unbearably happy, both you and other author!anon just made my week. Now I can grudge my way through another school year with my weekly dose of yandereness 8D
Vash VS The Yandere States Of America 2/?
anonymous
September 9 2010, 03:44:08 UTC
“A gun range…are they trying to intimidate each other? What kind of first date is that?”
Several states gave Massachusetts an icy stare, particularly Montana, Kentucky, and Alaska, though they weren’t by any means the only ones. On the other hand, California and New York got a good laugh out of it.
A short, thin man with dark hair, a serious face, and a crisp suit hushed the rowdy states. Technically, he was a federal territory and not truly one of them, but the states treated him with respect because he was the personification of the District of Columbia, or Washington D.C. He wasn’t as strong or robust as the others, and he was prone to illness, but he was the guy with the information. D.C. rapped his knuckles on the chalkboard to make sure he captured everyone’s attention. “I think it would be in Alfred’s best interest if we kept an eye on Mr. Switzerland, but I don’t think we have enough information to act yet. Therefore, I recommend-“ He swiftly placed his hand over his mouth to cover a cough. A few of the states looked concerned
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Re: Vash VS The Yandere States Of America 2/?
anonymous
September 9 2010, 17:18:59 UTC
That's right Gun range= perfect for romance. The northern states and California just don't get it. Uh-oh, America's staying over night... the states are going to be completely freaking out. Anyways, this is awesome, please continue!
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anonymous
September 11 2010, 16:54:51 UTC
Well, they might have a gps tracker on Al, they might have access to one of the satellites that fly over the world, or just an old fashioned phone tree. It's probably the last one since their information seems to be incomplete/slightly faulty.
Vash Zwingli VS The Yandere States Of America
It all started with an innocent invitation to a shooting range; right after a shouting match between China and America at his house (because nations just had to have their arguments on his front lawn). Switzerland would and should have turned it down, but when America offered to pay…well, it’s not like going to the shooting range with America would be completely unbearable, would it? After checking that the nation did indeed have a permit to carry weapons in Switzerland-he wasn’t sure how the boy managed that without him knowing, but Switzerland decided it wasn’t worth the trouble to ask-they left for Vash’s favorite range. With Liechtenstein in tow, naturally, since Switzerland wouldn’t leave without her.
Vash spoke, slightly louder than usual, “I’m ( ... )
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Perfect first "date" for these two. Shooting range screams SwitzerlandxAmerica like no other setting xD I think you did a great job writing Vash in all his neutral/big bro glory.
OP's never been to a range, so np if it was inaccurate haha)
You made Cali a lesbian? AWESOME! :D God, word travels fast state-side. Love how Cali's all "this wasn't an overreaction." You're traveling across the country because your Dad is a little late coming home. Totally not overreacting there. [/sarcasm]
As I mentioned before, I'm so unbearably happy, both you and other author!anon just made my week. Now I can grudge my way through another school year with my weekly dose of yandereness 8D
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Several states gave Massachusetts an icy stare, particularly Montana, Kentucky, and Alaska, though they weren’t by any means the only ones. On the other hand, California and New York got a good laugh out of it.
A short, thin man with dark hair, a serious face, and a crisp suit hushed the rowdy states. Technically, he was a federal territory and not truly one of them, but the states treated him with respect because he was the personification of the District of Columbia, or Washington D.C. He wasn’t as strong or robust as the others, and he was prone to illness, but he was the guy with the information.
D.C. rapped his knuckles on the chalkboard to make sure he captured everyone’s attention. “I think it would be in Alfred’s best interest if we kept an eye on Mr. Switzerland, but I don’t think we have enough information to act yet. Therefore, I recommend-“ He swiftly placed his hand over his mouth to cover a cough. A few of the states looked concerned ( ... )
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Uh-oh, America's staying over night... the states are going to be completely freaking out. Anyways, this is awesome, please continue!
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Tsundere!Vash and Trying-to-drop-a-hint!Liechtenstein are ^_^b
As is America totally not getting out of Switzerland for the night *eyebrow wiggle*
And OP lol'd at the states' reactions to the whole gun range thing *Is a NY/NJ anon :D*
*patiently presses F5 button over and over and over...*
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Thanks for the feedback! I'm glad you like it.
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