Re: You Take Me In (7/?)
anonymous
September 24 2010, 00:09:01 UTC
Oh wow.. this request and this fill hits all of the right kinks. This is wonderful. The writing is excellent. Really looking forward to what's coming next.
Re: You Take Me In (7/?)
anonymous
September 24 2010, 09:00:40 UTC
This anon hasn't seen this fill before but really wants to read the beginning. Could anyone provide the links for it please? It sounds wonderfully delicious~
Re: You Take Me In (7/?)
anonymous
September 24 2010, 09:05:54 UTC
You don't really need to include the link when it's in the same thread; anyone with any common sense can figure out how to click "Parent" or make a reply then erase it if they're lazy. :'D
You Take Me In (8/?)
anonymous
September 29 2010, 18:51:38 UTC
The quite between them lasted far longer than England was comfortable with, but from the looks of it, America was just as uneasy, the failure to speak or even move very unusual for the younger nation. Finally England lifted his head up and crossed his legs casually
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I really really like that you take your time to get them there. I mean, it's not their average sex they're going for, so it's normal they talk about it, especially because it's these two, with their history. I like how England is keeping himself under tight control, probably not to snap and throw himself at America, but little things hint at him losing it bit by bit (like that little slip of talking out loud his thoughts, lol).
I also cherish your "America loves to bottom" headcanon; seems like such a physical and affectionate guy would like that, and even if he's a teen, with all the machoness he probably needs to show for his peace of mind and ego, I figure he's self-assured and confident enough to let another guy take him without a problem ^^
authoranon! you keep forgetting to post your updates in the Fills page! share the awesome!
Re: You Take Me In (8/?)
anonymous
October 1 2010, 17:27:55 UTC
Hey, I really want to read this story, but every time I see an update in the fill index you never post a link to the request and beginning! You only post the updated part -___- That makes it difficult for new readers to start reading. Could you give me a link to the whole thing, please?
You Take Me In (9/?)
anonymous
October 12 2010, 01:13:38 UTC
Another quite followed the exchange with England observing America as the other continued to grin back at him. Already, the younger man's smile was tightening at the edges, but he didn't let it fall, sat perfectly still as if any sudden movement would make this discussion even more uncomfortable than it was proving at present. It didn't stop the younger nation from mocking England's embarrassment.
“Careful, old man. You have enough wrinkles without that face-”
“Oh do shut up and stay on topic,” snapped England. The one positive thing about his irritation was that it allowed him to temporarily ignore how attractive America was. “It would have been nice to know that a while ago-”
“You never asked,” America chirped, self-congratulating grin still present and trying what little patience England had.
“-However,” he ground out. “There are a few other areas of interest. Ones that can be quite difficult to play with
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Calling him “father” or “big brother” is encouraged too ^^
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In case anyone wants the first few parts, here it is: http://hetalia-kink.livejournal.com/17337.html?thread=52604601#t52604601
If author!anon could put this and the request link in the fill list next time, I think it would be awesome! Super awesome job author!anon~
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It's lovely anon! Absolutely lovely, this is why I KNOW Al bottoms! He is the centre of his partner's universe ~<3
ILU Anon!
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And oh god, this looks like it's going to be hot. I really can't wait until you update!
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I also cherish your "America loves to bottom" headcanon; seems like such a physical and affectionate guy would like that, and even if he's a teen, with all the machoness he probably needs to show for his peace of mind and ego, I figure he's self-assured and confident enough to let another guy take him without a problem ^^
authoranon! you keep forgetting to post your updates in the Fills page! share the awesome!
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THIS.
This is my hc about America when it comes to bottoming, I'm so glad you included that little bit, authoranon!
And I'm loving how this is going, I can't wait for more.
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http://hetalia-kink.livejournal.com/17337.html?thread=52604601#t52604601
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“Careful, old man. You have enough wrinkles without that face-”
“Oh do shut up and stay on topic,” snapped England. The one positive thing about his irritation was that it allowed him to temporarily ignore how attractive America was. “It would have been nice to know that a while ago-”
“You never asked,” America chirped, self-congratulating grin still present and trying what little patience England had.
“-However,” he ground out. “There are a few other areas of interest. Ones that can be quite difficult to play with ( ... )
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