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USUK Equality [1] anonymous September 2 2010, 20:09:43 UTC
Request: http://hetalia-kink.livejournal.com/12046.html?thread=29790990

1783 Treaty of Paris

"France, do you know where England is?" America asked, craning his neck to try and see his ex-brother.

"I do not. Stop craning your head as if you are a child trying to see a show." France scolded slightly, brushing some non-existent dirt off his sleeve. "Why are you so interested in your former oppressor, hmm?" France asked nonchalantly, even when he had a shrewd guess why. America stopped trying to crane his head, his cheeks colouring slightly.

"I just thought that since the war's over now...." He trailed off, not entirely sure how to finish that sentence. France resigned himself to telling America some harsh truths.

"Ameriqué, I dislike Angleterre greatly but I understand that at the moment, he feels betrayed. He stopped fighting, not because he didn't want you as a brother, but because he didn't want to hurt you anymore. However this Treaty and ( ... )

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USUK Equality [2] anonymous September 2 2010, 20:13:50 UTC
World War IIAmerica grinned at England who was talking to his boss at the moment. Roosevelt was watching his country bounce excitedly around ( ... )

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USUK Equality [3] anonymous September 2 2010, 20:20:11 UTC
Later Churchill managed to get America alone after the others retired to bed ( ... )

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Re: USUK Equality [3] anonymous September 2 2010, 21:07:44 UTC
This prompt is off to a wonderful start, anon! I really hope that you will continue it. I feel sad for them both, being unable to just talk to each other, and Churchill unknowingly making things harder.

Special relationship makes me giggle everytime I see it since I've gotten into Hetalia.

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Re: USUK Equality [3] anonymous September 2 2010, 23:03:10 UTC
This fic is literally pegging everything in my USUK head-canon. Good job anon! I can't wait for more.

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Re: USUK Equality [3] anonymous September 3 2010, 02:58:19 UTC
Lovely fill, anon! I really like this. May I give you an advice? If you plan to de-anon and re post this, you may want to check some missing commas.

I hope I didn't cross any lines.

Thank you for this lovely story

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OP! anonymous September 3 2010, 12:13:06 UTC
OMG I had lost all hope, and then you appear like a shining angel to deliver this beauty! I love it, anon, everything about it, especially the fact that you decided to start so far back...poor America, he went from less to more than England, without the middle ground. I really like where this is going! I'm also glad you included their bosses' intervention very early on...even if poor Churchill just made things worse unintentionallyXD (on that note, I love the dialogue and plot so far, but check out the way nations refer to their bosses and others'; I felt it was right that America calls England's boss Prime Minister, but then he switched to Churchill...and that sounded odd. I wouldn't mind in any other fic where they weren't going to have a big part, but in this... ^^U)

Excellent fill, I'm so happy ^^

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