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[Part 12] Tried and True anonymous September 12 2010, 09:38:35 UTC
A flood is causing England to have to pee often. Russia decides that this is a good opportunity for some fun.

Request: http://hetalia-kink.livejournal.com/15068.html?thread=43145948#t43145948

Part 1-16: http://hetalia-kink.livejournal.com/15068.html?thread=44475100#t44475100

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Tried and True [17/?] anonymous September 12 2010, 09:40:42 UTC
England swallowed thickly. His throat felt painfully dry, but he didn't dare ask for a sip of water in his current state. He wasn't sure how much time had passed on Russia's little stopwatch, but the fullness in his bladder was rapidly approaching a critical level.

Sitting still was out of the question, and had been for some time now. Strangely, England found he was wasn't as bothered about letting Russia see him fidget as he had been earlier. Nothing like letting a man hold your dick while you pissed to rid yourself of any modesty, he mused. It was still embarrassing to feel those violet eyes locked on him while he squeezed his hands between his legs and bounced slightly on the couch, but the embarrassment was mixed with an odd, guilty thrill now, the weird satisfaction of being able to turn Russia on by squirming like a child. It was...oh bugger it, it was naughty, and the thought made England's heart race ( ... )

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Tried and True [18/?] anonymous September 12 2010, 09:43:31 UTC
“And please try not to hold yourself with your hands so much,” Russia added as an after thought. “I want to see the very moment you lose control ( ... )

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Tried and True [19/?] anonymous September 12 2010, 09:46:07 UTC
It was hard to tell when he was finally empty. Eventually it just hit him that he was no longer pissing, but Russia was still grinding into him. England could feel himself growing hard too, and Russia's attentions were far from unwelcome now...finally he felt the larger man shudder against him as he came. England bit his lip, unable to tend to his own erection with his hands still bound behind his back, but Russia resumed the grinding almost as soon as his own orgasm had ended, rubbing himself slower and harder against England. It didn't take much more before England came too, hips jerking helplessly as he further soiled his already soaked pants ( ... )

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Re: Tried and True [19/?] anonymous September 12 2010, 16:10:25 UTC
This is so good I don't even know how to say it. I was going to say that each scene is better than the last but I just love them all.

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Re: Tried and True [19/?] anonymous September 12 2010, 19:36:20 UTC
O-oh crap I found this enjoyable, hot, and IC...fuuuu- your to good of a writer ;A;

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Re: Tried and True [19/?] anonymous September 12 2010, 22:42:14 UTC
The more I read of this fill, the more I find myself starting to adopt this kink o_o St-Stop converting me with your awesome writing, authornon! (Except that don't really, because this fill is amazing~)

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Re: Tried and True [19/?] anonymous September 13 2010, 03:30:45 UTC
Awesomeawesomeawesome 8D *drools and stutters incoherently*

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Re: Tried and True [19/?] anonymous September 14 2010, 20:48:25 UTC
OMG I'm embarrassed beyond words at how incredibly aroused that got me. Seriously. I used to think this kink was disgusting, but writers like you brought me to the dark side ^^U
I found Russia's frantic grinding and speaking in Russian as hot as England wetting himself, too. and I lol'd at the way Russia immediately brightened with the suggestion of handcuffsXD

And we get a bath, yay! but is that all the watersports we'll get? *pout*

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Author!Anon anonymous September 14 2010, 21:29:42 UTC
but is that all the watersports we'll get? *pout*

Not to worry, the games will continue once they get cleaned up and catch their breath. :)

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Re: Tried and True [19/?] anonymous September 14 2010, 22:26:29 UTC
God, I love this fill so much. <3 I'm so happy to hear there's going to be a lot more; I love my pairing, and this is such an amazing fic for these two that I'll even rec it to people who never said a word about watersports. :D

I'm too tired to even comment properly. :'D Never change, anon

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Re: Tried and True [19/?] anonymous September 17 2010, 22:37:23 UTC
I thought you had stopped updating, so my heart skipped a beat when I saw that there were new chapters... I love this fill so much, anon! <3

You write this kink perfectly, and the little details are always so fitting! Also, I thought it was fucking hot when Russia started muttering in his own language. I bet Iggy would like it too if he paid more attention (hint-hint, lul 8D). I mean, it's just another facet of relinquishing control, isn't it? All you know is that the words turn you on, but you have no idea what they mean. I'll stop talking and take a cold shower now, thanks.

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Re: Tried and True [19/?] anonymous November 16 2010, 04:59:30 UTC
Oh, I hope this fill hasn't been abandoned, it's just too good for that!

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Re: Tried and True [19/?] anonymous November 26 2010, 20:43:37 UTC
Hi, I just read the whole of this and it's really good.

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Re: Tried and True [19/?] anonymous November 29 2010, 08:40:38 UTC
DAMN YOU TALENTED WRITERS

STOP GIVING ME MORE KINKS D:<

But this is amazing. Please update soon ouo

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Re: Tried and True [19/?] anonymous November 30 2010, 22:09:53 UTC
Oh god, I've never liked this kink till now. please continue, I'm blushing at how hot and arousing this is >.> I want more. ... thank god this is all anon! Aha

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