Lepidopterology [Soviet Union/America/Russia] 1/?
anonymous
October 23 2010, 05:26:46 UTC
I am a slow writer, so this won't be updating often; sorry. I don't write much fanfic so I appreciate concrit. Original request: http://hetalia-kink.livejournal.com/16221.html?thread=44800093#t44800093It takes Russia too long to answer the door. America can barely feel his fingers by the time it finally swings inward. Russia is wearing his army uniform, medals painstakingly polished and lined up. America feels his eyebrows inch up - but really, he shouldn’t be surprised
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anonymous
October 24 2010, 04:08:21 UTC
O-oh I know where this is going please do continue please update slow if you wish JUST DONT STOP IN THE MIDDLE ;a; this will be AWESOME the fact theres a plot!!!
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anonymous
November 11 2010, 02:29:05 UTC
Whoo! I meant to post this a few days ago, but classes have been crazy. OP!anon, I wanted to ask you if you had a preference for the type of dp? I have an idea of how the sex scene is going to go, but I could extend it if you had something specific in mind.Russia’s kitchen looks just as sad and empty as his living room. There is plenty of vodka, of course, but America only sees boxes and cans on his shelves. Even the air feels stale. They sit at Russia’s huge kitchen table, just far apart enough to be uncomfortable. Russia doesn’t bother to take out glasses (and after all, what is the point in using glassware, in washing and cleaning it, if no one else will use it?). Instead they pass the bottle back and forth. The vodka is good quality, but America only notices the burn as it scalds his throat. Russia lifts the bottle like it’s a shot glass. As the liquid gets lower his gaze seems to get farther and farther away, and America finds himself snatching the vodka out of his hands as if to rouse him. There’s not much left, so America downs
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Lepidopterology [Soviet Union/America/Russia] 3/?
anonymous
November 15 2010, 20:05:19 UTC
Oh anons, you're making me blush. I had a good writing night yesterday and managed to finish off part 4, so here is part 3 for you!The floorboards creak as they make their way down the hall. Soviet Union made him go first, as though he’s afraid America will try to escape. Admittedly, it’s not the most inviting hallway America has ever traveled. He’s been here before and he knows the way well enough, but if he didn’t it would be hard to tell the doors apart in the dim lighting. Russia is probably trying to save on energy costs
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anonymous
November 16 2010, 05:40:28 UTC
...Is this on the fills list?? If so I cant believe I missed the updates!
Oooh your writing style...I LOVE IT. No really and then the part where Russia was like 'its like a dream' and spreading his arms all happy about it and America's thoughts on him. <3
Also I am NOT OP and hope you get an answer soon buuut may I cast a vote for dping America in the same place...somewhere where a gag reflex is not a problem but a lot of lub is most likely needed? ;)
Hope to hear ops opinions on this subject! Although Im sure no one would mind extending the sex scene your writings awesome
Lepidopterology [Soviet Union/America/Russia] 4/?
anonymous
December 9 2010, 16:57:43 UTC
Somehow they make it down the stairs. Russia seems to slowly gain strength, and he is walking on his own by the time they reach the living room. Soviet Union turns on the television, and immediately a soft stream of Russian issues forth. America is out of practice, and the sound is too low for him to follow the narrative anyway, but it’s almost certainly a news channel from the way Soviet Union’s eyes narrow. America has no idea what they’re saying about this, and frankly he doesn’t much care. What will happen will happen, and they are powerless to stop it. He’s here because he knows Russia can’t handle this alone
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anonymous
December 9 2010, 17:12:02 UTC
Hmm. This section seemed longer in Word. Anyway, sorry about the wait guys! I'm busy getting ready for finals.
I probably should have done these notes after the last section - I think Soviet Union works as a name, but Russian Federation is a little bulky, so please know that the "Russia" here is democratic Russia. The brief flashback from last section refers to the allied invasion of Russia after the Revolution; you can read more here. I thought it was interesting.
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anonymous
December 10 2010, 07:40:40 UTC
...ouch whatever is about to happen itll probably hurt for Alfred. still hopping for some backside DP because those two are big and...drools Are they gonna have some epic hate sex with Alfred there in the middle because they can't stand to have hate sex with eachother or somethin? ooh gun kink!<3
Im in love. Poor uncertain America. I vote for SU living in Russia's basement..why? Well I hate character deaths and werent they good friends back in the day or was that a different Russia who was America's friend during the civil war?
Original request: http://hetalia-kink.livejournal.com/16221.html?thread=44800093#t44800093It takes Russia too long to answer the door. America can barely feel his fingers by the time it finally swings inward. Russia is wearing his army uniform, medals painstakingly polished and lined up. America feels his eyebrows inch up - but really, he shouldn’t be surprised ( ... )
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Lepidopterology (USSR and Russia dp America)
My mouth choked up in mid-song as I stopped breathing, eyes widening.. and instantly zoomed over to this fill.
I will be stalking you 'til the ends of time, anon.
'TIL THE ENDS OF TIME!
-loves on you unconditionally and waits for next update-
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take your time! im just so happy your filling this!
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MOAR MOAR MOAR
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I'll get the hang of it eventually, anons. :|
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Oooh your writing style...I LOVE IT. No really and then the part where Russia was like 'its like a dream' and spreading his arms all happy about it and America's thoughts on him. <3
Also I am NOT OP and hope you get an answer soon buuut may I cast a vote for dping America in the same place...somewhere where a gag reflex is not a problem but a lot of lub is most likely needed? ;)
Hope to hear ops opinions on this subject! Although Im sure no one would mind extending the sex scene your writings awesome
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I probably should have done these notes after the last section - I think Soviet Union works as a name, but Russian Federation is a little bulky, so please know that the "Russia" here is democratic Russia. The brief flashback from last section refers to the allied invasion of Russia after the Revolution; you can read more here. I thought it was interesting.
Still hoping to hear back from OP!
*runs away to study forever*
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Hopefully, since you're getting ready for finals, you will more time to write, right Author!Anon? And I hope you hear back from the OP soon!
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Are they gonna have some epic hate sex with Alfred there in the middle because they can't stand to have hate sex with eachother or somethin? ooh gun kink!<3
Im in love. Poor uncertain America. I vote for SU living in Russia's basement..why? Well I hate character deaths and werent they good friends back in the day or was that a different Russia who was America's friend during the civil war?
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