Anything Goes Sequel: Sequel to Cherry Pie (Good Het Smut fill with America/fem!Canada)
Hi everyone, well here it is, the sequel to the ridiculously filthy Cherry Pie. I had visions of making this perhaps a tad less graphic and a little more cerebral but who am I kidding, this is totally my guilty pleasure.
This will ultimately feature Canada/fem!America but first we'll go through a smattering of plot followed by several nations/Canada. I didn't want to list them because I don't want to lock myself into anything in case I change my mind. Have to teach America a lesson, don't we? Also anyone who read the last story knows that my kinks are a mile long so be prepared for anything except scat and non con. Anyhoo, enjoy!“...almost ran that jerk over- he deserved it too- and that’s when I called you from the airport.” Canada sighed, wriggling the slipper off his
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Re: Multiple/Canada & Canada/Fem!America If U Seek Alfred 14b/?
anonymous
October 27 2010, 08:08:16 UTC
eeek I'm so happy you updated. muah muah muah! Barely anything happened and yet...wooo I need some air. Now THAT is what makes good smut. Making the audience wait and anticipate along with the character. The tension is the reason it's sexy, but I still feel antsy like "GET ON WITH IT EYEBROWS!" hehe.... I've always liked daddy kink, but wow Arthur you started on them young. That just makes it so much hotter.
I'm pleased to see that it's working on Alfred. But all hot porn aside...I wonder how the two of them will be able to forgive each other. You may or may not have that planned out but damn that's going to be...difficult.
Re: Multiple/Canada & Canada/Fem!America If U Seek Alfred 14b/? author!anon
anonymous
October 28 2010, 04:53:30 UTC
I dunno what, but something about the thought of England conditioning Canada in a certain way from the time he was younger excites me. Heh, that could probably be it's own fic.
As far as the mess between America and Canada there are two different things I'm toying with that may or may not lead to a third fic *shoots self* Though I don't know yet if I want to keep things strictly America/Canada or throw in a third to that later (I love Am/Can but I also love ACE...). Just have to see which seems to work out best in the end because yeah, this is not something that will be resolved neatly or nicely and it'll probably get nastier before healing.
Totally not the anon you're replying to, but!
anonymous
October 28 2010, 06:45:27 UTC
Oh god, please let that be it's own fic. *A* ... I would have felt bad about imagining that before this meme, dammit. OTL
God, I was wondering about that mess, too; maybe a third person really would smooth things out between the boys, but I'm thinking it would have to be either France or England, and I got the impression that France is not interested in this 'verse ...
I so adore ACE, though, and I kind of would like to see what kind of dynamic they'd work out between the three of them. I have the feeling that England could teach America a lot, but good god, how the sparks would fly! Not that that's a bad thing, but it leaves me wondering if Canada would end up stuck in the middle or just end up happily reaping the benefits. XD
... God, the world needs more pervert!England. Dirty, kinky, owns-more-riding-crops-than-a-damn-stable pervert!England, to be specific. <3
Re: Multiple/Canada & Canada/Fem!America If U Seek Alfred 15a/?
anonymous
October 29 2010, 03:47:05 UTC
I must’ve felt particularly inspired because once I started writing this time I just couldn’t stop. I’ll apologize in advance for drawing this out so much. Maybe I’m having too much fun...England let his gaze slowly move up and down the body of his former colony, moving from the soft shoulder length hair half hiding Canada’s face to the hollow of his throat and down to his chest. England recalled the woman’s shape that the other sometimes wore, and he’d noted when he first saw it that while the nipples were dusky pink and delightfully large the small hard nubs standing out now from the faint chill of the room were no less enticing. Canada’s body was far stronger than most of them would’ve guessed, his pectorals defined, the muscles of his chest hard. Unlike the rest, he didn’t linger terribly long on the large uncut erection. While he enjoyed the feel of the heavy cock in his hand, the prominent vein running delightfully along the underside, he much preferred to focus his attention on Canada’s other prominent “assets”. Mmm, and right
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Re: Multiple/Canada & Canada/Fem!America If U Seek Alfred 15b/?
anonymous
October 29 2010, 03:48:30 UTC
And even after he’d slept with Austria and had gone to England repentant and not terribly sure there was anything left that he hadn’t experienced, England had proved to his defiant territory that yes, daddy always did it masterfully. “I told you, Matthew, that daddy knows best, didn’t I?” That was what England had said to him as he lay limp half off the bed, the room spinning, his ass so wonderfully sore and leaking come and just thinking about that night Canada whimpered. He’d never trusted America to be that rough and perhaps he should’ve but fuck America was so much longer than England and on some level he’d always made his brother nervous with his rush to the damn finish be it manifest destiny or ramming his dick into virgin territory in one swift motion. America had held him against his will and forced compliance out of him in a fucking Blitzkrieg where England had spent decades breaking him down and conditioning him to respond just so, so fucking eagerly to his every subtle cue- there was no comparison.
Re: Multiple/Canada & Canada/Fem!America If U Seek Alfred 16a/?
anonymous
October 29 2010, 03:49:51 UTC
And America seemed to sense it too as he watched his brother wantonly stroking himself in front of everyone in the fucking room where he could barely coax any dirty talk out of him without a roll of his eyes. He looked at the others, wondering if Austria excepted they all knew, they fucking knew that when he and his brother fucked it was with a sometimes heated but more often passive acquiescence and never with this much goddamn desire. Why, Mattie? Why didn’t I ever even know you had all this in you? I know you wanted me and I know I wanted you so badly but you’d push at me or tell me to slow the hell down or something. God I didn’t even think you had this in you anymore. That one night at Woodstock was fucking incredible and then you just got all weird and pulled back. Until you turned into a fucking girl I didn’t even think you liked it when we fucked anymore. Hell, he’d thought that he’d had Canada’s submission all along without even trying but looking at his brother chanting out a near religious, “daddydaddydaddy,” he wondered
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Re: Multiple/Canada & Canada/Fem!America If U Seek Alfred 16b/?
anonymous
October 29 2010, 03:51:07 UTC
America went tense as a board as Russia next to him whispered in a lilting tease that only he could hear, “I didn’t know your brother liked the taste of blood, Alfred. Maybe I’ll let you watch him bleed even more when it’s my turn, yes?” America’s head turned and he jerked violently with a hiss, mad as fuck that the chains did little more than pull taut and loosed a few piddling bits of drywall over top whatever the hell they were fastened to on the other side. “Back off, Ivan so help me I’ll-” Out of the corner of his eyes he swore he saw Canada wink at him and he clamped his mouth shut, his body rigid. You little asshole. I will not give you what you fucking want. Goddammit I will not make this that easy for you! His eyes were furious but he forced his arms back down, forced himself to ignore fucking Russia’s commentary on “his turn”, forced himself to ignore Prussia loudly whispering to Germany how good a little cocksucker he must be and dammit why the fuck couldn’t Canada have just talked to him?!
Re: Multiple/Canada & Canada/Fem!America If U Seek Alfred17a/?
anonymous
October 29 2010, 03:52:34 UTC
Canada turned back and continued to focus solely on England, only barely hearing the clank of the chains in the background. The clear precome continued to pool in the stretched foreskin, causing it to start to balloon out just slightly and Canada moaned, the barest rush of endorphins from the injury, the throbbing sting turning him on even more. His nipples were still hard even though his body was hot as hell and not cold, and he let his fingers trail from his lips back to over his cheek to tuck another errant bit of hair behind his ear leaving a wicked red trail just tempting England to get up and lick it off. His eyes were bright and he finally released the foreskin, slowly drawing it back letting the copious sticky fluid spill into his hand, some drizzling through his fingers onto the floor between his spread legs
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Re: Multiple/Canada & Canada/Fem!America If U Seek Alfred17b/?
anonymous
October 29 2010, 03:55:13 UTC
His thighs stained and dirtied beautifully, Canada brought his left hand up again, licking his own salty essence up greedily, making sure to wet his fingers until they were practically dripping with slick saliva. He sat up supporting himself with one arm, the muscles of his stomach tense and trembling even so but God he wanted so badly to watch England watching him as those wet fingers stole down between his spread legs. His middle finger circle the tight opening and he held his lower lip between his teeth until it turned white. He could see England hand rubbing at the bulge in his pants and it made his mouth so fucking dry just thinking about his cock, sliding between his lips, sliding into his ass and- Dammit, you’re going to draw it out like you always do, aren’t you? Oh God maybe Ludwig should’ve only given you twenty minutes ‘cause I don’t think I can take it today… Not with Al watching… I don’t know why that makes a different but just knowing he’s there, even if I don’t look at him it just makes me so-“Matthew,” England warned
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Re: Multiple/Canada & Canada/Fem!America If U Seek Alfred17b/?
anonymous
October 29 2010, 06:52:35 UTC
I don't know how I'm possibly supposed to give you an intelligent critique. It's not just the content. You're style flows so effortlessly. And I can't believe it but I feel bad for Al. I was so angry with him, but maybe Mattie's a little at fault too for pushing Al away. It's weird to feel the desire to cry when reading hot smut. It's an emotional rollercoaster that's sexy all the way hehe Thanks for updating.
Re: Multiple/Canada & Canada/Fem!America If U Seek Alfred17b/?
anonymous
October 30 2010, 03:31:20 UTC
Thanks for commenting and reading. (You and everyone else ^^) I'm glad this part worked for being emotional in all directions, everything seemed to come together well this time. I'll probably continue along a similar vein so the relationships with everyone are more fleshed out and explained so more smut and a little more emotional stuff too so at the risk of sounding crass, keep the tissues handy for multiple uses, haha.
And yeah, although America is good at making himself look bad, Canada definitely has contributed a lot more to this problem than we've seen, and I actually think this is leaning more and more towards an ACE ending but we'll see.
Re: Multiple/Canada & Canada/Fem!America If U Seek Alfred17b/?
anonymous
October 29 2010, 17:37:48 UTC
Embarrassed? That was freakin HOT. I wish the porn fics where more like this one, in this fic, I can actually believe that guys are having sex with guys, they think, behave and speak like guys. And England is making me SO.DAMNED.HOT, wow, I didn't know I shared the pipe thing (plus, daddy kinks are always tremendously arousing *fap fap*) I hope we get some blowjob action. I love it
Let me tell you that I'm looking forward to Russia's part the most, after this. For many reasons, among those, the fact that he has something to say all the time, the fact that he will in part do it to piss America off and not just for Matt's sake, and the fact that he has a huge dick, maybe the only one that can make Al feel not-so-high-above-you (being the teen that he is, he places a lot of importance on that, after allXD). I also like that he will probably be rough, because rough sex is awesome, and you demonstrated how well you write it in the prequel. But please, let there be no rapetruck Russia; not even "let himself get carried away slightly
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Anything Goes Sequel: Sequel to Cherry Pie (Good Het Smut fill with America/fem!Canada)
Hi everyone, well here it is, the sequel to the ridiculously filthy Cherry Pie. I had visions of making this perhaps a tad less graphic and a little more cerebral but who am I kidding, this is totally my guilty pleasure.
This will ultimately feature Canada/fem!America but first we'll go through a smattering of plot followed by several nations/Canada. I didn't want to list them because I don't want to lock myself into anything in case I change my mind. Have to teach America a lesson, don't we? Also anyone who read the last story knows that my kinks are a mile long so be prepared for anything except scat and non con. Anyhoo, enjoy!“...almost ran that jerk over- he deserved it too- and that’s when I called you from the airport.” Canada sighed, wriggling the slipper off his ( ... )
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I'm pleased to see that it's working on Alfred. But all hot porn aside...I wonder how the two of them will be able to forgive each other. You may or may not have that planned out but damn that's going to be...difficult.
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As far as the mess between America and Canada there are two different things I'm toying with that may or may not lead to a third fic *shoots self* Though I don't know yet if I want to keep things strictly America/Canada or throw in a third to that later (I love Am/Can but I also love ACE...). Just have to see which seems to work out best in the end because yeah, this is not something that will be resolved neatly or nicely and it'll probably get nastier before healing.
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God, I was wondering about that mess, too; maybe a third person really would smooth things out between the boys, but I'm thinking it would have to be either France or England, and I got the impression that France is not interested in this 'verse ...
I so adore ACE, though, and I kind of would like to see what kind of dynamic they'd work out between the three of them. I have the feeling that England could teach America a lot, but good god, how the sparks would fly! Not that that's a bad thing, but it leaves me wondering if Canada would end up stuck in the middle or just end up happily reaping the benefits. XD
... God, the world needs more pervert!England. Dirty, kinky, owns-more-riding-crops-than-a-damn-stable pervert!England, to be specific. <3
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“Back off, Ivan so help me I’ll-” Out of the corner of his eyes he swore he saw Canada wink at him and he clamped his mouth shut, his body rigid. You little asshole. I will not give you what you fucking want. Goddammit I will not make this that easy for you! His eyes were furious but he forced his arms back down, forced himself to ignore fucking Russia’s commentary on “his turn”, forced himself to ignore Prussia loudly whispering to Germany how good a little cocksucker he must be and dammit why the fuck couldn’t Canada have just talked to him?!
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Excuse me, I'll come back and give you some useful comments after I'm done in my bunk...
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Thanks for updating.
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And yeah, although America is good at making himself look bad, Canada definitely has contributed a lot more to this problem than we've seen, and I actually think this is leaning more and more towards an ACE ending but we'll see.
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I hope we get some blowjob action. I love it
Let me tell you that I'm looking forward to Russia's part the most, after this. For many reasons, among those, the fact that he has something to say all the time, the fact that he will in part do it to piss America off and not just for Matt's sake, and the fact that he has a huge dick, maybe the only one that can make Al feel not-so-high-above-you (being the teen that he is, he places a lot of importance on that, after allXD). I also like that he will probably be rough, because rough sex is awesome, and you demonstrated how well you write it in the prequel. But please, let there be no rapetruck Russia; not even "let himself get carried away slightly ( ... )
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