Re: Whatever it Takes 6/?
anonymous
October 24 2010, 14:48:06 UTC
UNFmassivehotness The power play being exercised here is making this anon very very happy...I also like the way you write America, it's refreshing and a change of pace from the usual. and fuck, the moment America realises how much power he holds over history and how drunk he gets on the feeling...<3<3<3
Re: Whatever it Takes 6/?
anonymous
October 27 2010, 02:37:43 UTC
... So this is what it means to find reading something to be "a guilty pleasure"! I feel a little sadistic or something to enjoy this situation so much, but it's seriously strangely hot. And disturbing. ... I think the second just makes it hotter, actually. :'D
Re: Whatever it Takes 7a/?
anonymous
November 2 2010, 23:43:53 UTC
"Alfred he's killing innocent people!" Arthur shouted. The American stared evenly back at him. "Gods, do you even know what he's doing? Or do you not care?" The pain in his chest increased. Damn Ludwig. Damn Gilbert. Damn Alfred. Damn them all. "Or do you only see a way to increase your precious profits, is that it? God above, is this a game to you?"
Arthur gasped as something fell in flames, hacking with the taste of burned brick in his mouth. He wanted a drink but knew water would do nothing to ease the dryness in his mouth nor the soreness of his throat. "Be careful of him, Arthur," Matthew had said before setting off for Africa. "He's not the same - not since the Depression."
"I care that you use my brother like cannon fodder!" Alfred spat back. "And now you want to use my troops as more fodder for your stupid wars." Alfred paused for breath. "I won't let you drag us into a repeat of this again," he finished quietly and grimly
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Re: Whatever it Takes 8?
anonymous
November 18 2010, 10:57:38 UTC
History tells that in December of 1942 the United States formally joined the Allied Powers in fighting the Nazi War machine. History says that it was the result of a surge of wanting to give aid and help the battered Europeans that would lead America to join the war effort. History gives credit to the American President Roosevelt and the English Prime Minister Churchill.
History forgets about the deal Alfred F Jones and Arthur Kirkland struck one stormy night in the District of Columbia.
Arthur Kirkland and Alfred F Jones, however, never forget. It's hard to forget when Alfred nailed a copy of the contract, signed in blood, to Arthur's wall. It's hard to forget when Alfred locked a slim collar around Arthur's neck just as he sends troops to the aid of a battered British Empire. Arthur can't be allowed to forget his oath, Alfred reasoned, so he used Arthur ruthlessly, trying to forget the suffering his men and women endured while fighting for Arthur
( ... )
Sorry I haven't commented for a while, I've been suffering from major internet issues. Still this is brilliant! I love what you've been doing with the prompt. It's the little details like the contract signed in blood that make it. I must say I'm rather excited to find out where you're going with this. I'd love to see how America reacts to the diverging policies of the US and the UK (he'd be so jealous of the Anglo-French military deal).
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I love how Dark Merica is, and England! Oh ENGLAND! Poor baby.
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The power play being exercised here is making this anon very very happy...I also like the way you write America, it's refreshing and a change of pace from the usual. and fuck, the moment America realises how much power he holds over history and how drunk he gets on the feeling...<3<3<3
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I can't wait to see what Arthur is going to say
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Arthur gasped as something fell in flames, hacking with the taste of burned brick in his mouth. He wanted a drink but knew water would do nothing to ease the dryness in his mouth nor the soreness of his throat. "Be careful of him, Arthur," Matthew had said before setting off for Africa. "He's not the same - not since the Depression."
"I care that you use my brother like cannon fodder!" Alfred spat back. "And now you want to use my troops as more fodder for your stupid wars." Alfred paused for breath. "I won't let you drag us into a repeat of this again," he finished quietly and grimly ( ... )
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Oh god, so it begins! The scenario setting is perfect, dear author!anon, tension and anger and desperation are so real in this.
Please update soon! *checks every day for this fill*
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This is AGONISING. Is such a fantastic way. THE TENSION! Oh *ARTHUR*!!
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i'm jumping on my seat with how excited i am!! xD
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The dialogue between them is deliciously cruel and desperate. Please, please update soon!!
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I am incoherent here. Just. Alfred semi-menacing Arthur. Arthur's desperation and resignment. Guh. ...Please don't leave us hanging for too long? <3
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History says that it was the result of a surge of wanting to give aid and help the battered Europeans that would lead America to join the war effort.
History gives credit to the American President Roosevelt and the English Prime Minister Churchill.
History forgets about the deal Alfred F Jones and Arthur Kirkland struck one stormy night in the District of Columbia.
Arthur Kirkland and Alfred F Jones, however, never forget. It's hard to forget when Alfred nailed a copy of the contract, signed in blood, to Arthur's wall. It's hard to forget when Alfred locked a slim collar around Arthur's neck just as he sends troops to the aid of a battered British Empire. Arthur can't be allowed to forget his oath, Alfred reasoned, so he used Arthur ruthlessly, trying to forget the suffering his men and women endured while fighting for Arthur ( ... )
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Is... Is it bad that I wish you'd written out the process of collar-fastening?
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