America as a mafia boss.
anonymous
November 17 2010, 17:11:20 UTC
There are a lot of Russia/America where Russia is a mafia boss, just wonder what it would look like if America is the mafia boss/underworld or gang leader
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Go Get Your Gun (3a/?)
anonymous
November 30 2010, 04:35:54 UTC
sob I wanted to post this chapter quickly so I could apologise for the typos my phone's autocorrect caused last chapter, and yet it still took so long. I AM SORRY. But yes, in the previous chapter, it should be "getting themselves offed" instead of "getting themselves offer," and "a sharp memory" instead of "a Sharp memory." Now I know to do a final closer reading after I transfer the fic from my phone.
Anyway! The Im Yongmin mentioned in this chapter is North Korea! Also I am hoping that I got all the honorifics correct (and modes of address in general) since I... sort of got impatient to post instead of checking with a native speaker? >>; So if there are any errors, please point them out! Thank you. ♥ Ivan found there tended to be two types of people who walked into his Eden of sunflowers - the desperate, and those who shared his wish to spread happiness in the world. It was probable he wouldn't have even gotten those desperate few, were it not for the fact his elder sister had insisted he write on his window the names and prices
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Go Get Your Gun (3b/?)
anonymous
November 30 2010, 04:36:55 UTC
What a funny question. Well, even though he was not some secret agent, nor a ninja, flowers for someone's death, yes, he could do that. Moving back to his shop, he began putting together a bouquet, barely even thinking about it as he went. "I am not. And I think these flowers are suitable, yes? What name would you like on the card
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Re: Go Get Your Gun (3c/?)
anonymous
December 28 2010, 11:48:09 UTC
Authornon here, and it's not, I promise! Things just got hectic at work what with winter break coming up, and I just. also kept rewriting the chapter because it was too boring. I'm hoping to use this week off to get the next chapter out. /o/
I doubt I'm abandoning it any time soon. (I have like. parts of it written up to after the big reveal and all; I just wish my brain would give me inspiration for this thing in ORDER. orz)
Go Get Your Gun (4a/?)
anonymous
December 29 2010, 11:06:20 UTC
Notes~
Apologies for how long this chapter took. (Though uh, to be honest, the speed I was updating at before was an anomaly for me, ahaha.) It took so long mostly because I kept rewriting it because it was boring as fuck. It's still pretty boring, in the sense that little actually happens, but eh. At this point, I just wanted to get it out. But I am not abandoning this! I just... wish I had jumped straight to the reveal instead of mucking through all this build up, because I am not kidding, I have that part like. 80% written. :| It's everything in between that is empty as shite.
Stuff relevant to this chapter: Jean is not a typo for Joan of Arc/Jeanne d'Arc. Jean is in fact Seychelles, and is also mostly me taking advantage of the fact Jean is a relatively androgynous name to refer to this dude, to whom the island of Seychelles is named after anyway. T^Td Miguel is Cuba, and uh, was a name used for him in someone else's fic that ended up sticking in my head. (I- I hope whomever it was doesn't mind. orz) I... do not have last names
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Go Get Your Gun (4c/?)
anonymous
December 29 2010, 11:09:37 UTC
Sky blue eyes blinked once, twice, before widening. "Oh yeah! Mocha frappe, as big a cup as you have." Suddenly, Alfred hunched over, and the shifty look Matthew caught out of the corner of his eye as he turned to make the drink didn't bode well at all. Alfred's voice dropped in volume to a near hush under the noise of the coffee machine. "...Say, are you... a local?"
Ooookay, maybe it wasn't that he was overreacting to the entire situation. Maybe his doppelganger was just crazy. "Yes?"
"So you'd know what places have apartments to rent, right?"
"I guess, but only because I just moved here. Just because I live here doesn't necessarily mean I
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OP missed the last update and was thrilled to see another new update! It's like 2 christmas in a single week <3 Hooray to both Ivan and Matthew finally appeared! OP loves how Ivan has a store full of sunflowers and yet has the place to sell other kinds of flowers! Also congrats to Matthew, you win Alfred once! :DDDD Absolutely love how both of them are "attacked" and kind of forcefully set up a date by a sunny and energetic American mafia boss <3 Alfred good job for getting two nice guys (thumbs up)
LOVINO DRAGGING ALFRED TO SHOP FOR CLOTH!!!!!! That part is too cute <3 I love the stylish and annoyed Italian here, and will Alfred really wearing suits next time?;D
I am just so sorry it took so long! T^T;;; (slow writer + easily distracted = bad combo!?) I AM GLAD YOU LIKE IT SO FAR THOUGH. ♥ Poor Matthew and Ivan both got steamrolled by Alfred, haha. Ivan is sort of sad he has to sell other flowers. Sunflowers are the greatest of the flowers! Everyone should acknowledge the wonderfulness of sunflowers!
and will Alfred really wearing suits next time?;D Hahahaha, weeeell. I am so sorry Lovino, but I find your pain and suffering amusing.
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Anyway! The Im Yongmin mentioned in this chapter is North Korea! Also I am hoping that I got all the honorifics correct (and modes of address in general) since I... sort of got impatient to post instead of checking with a native speaker? >>; So if there are any errors, please point them out! Thank you. ♥
Ivan found there tended to be two types of people who walked into his Eden of sunflowers - the desperate, and those who shared his wish to spread happiness in the world. It was probable he wouldn't have even gotten those desperate few, were it not for the fact his elder sister had insisted he write on his window the names and prices ( ... )
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alfred seems to have everything so...together, like he has no doubts about anything going wrong. it's great. you're great.
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I doubt I'm abandoning it any time soon. (I have like. parts of it written up to after the big reveal and all; I just wish my brain would give me inspiration for this thing in ORDER. orz)
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Apologies for how long this chapter took. (Though uh, to be honest, the speed I was updating at before was an anomaly for me, ahaha.) It took so long mostly because I kept rewriting it because it was boring as fuck. It's still pretty boring, in the sense that little actually happens, but eh. At this point, I just wanted to get it out. But I am not abandoning this! I just... wish I had jumped straight to the reveal instead of mucking through all this build up, because I am not kidding, I have that part like. 80% written. :| It's everything in between that is empty as shite.
Stuff relevant to this chapter: Jean is not a typo for Joan of Arc/Jeanne d'Arc. Jean is in fact Seychelles, and is also mostly me taking advantage of the fact Jean is a relatively androgynous name to refer to this dude, to whom the island of Seychelles is named after anyway. T^Td Miguel is Cuba, and uh, was a name used for him in someone else's fic that ended up sticking in my head. (I- I hope whomever it was doesn't mind. orz) I... do not have last names ( ... )
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Ooookay, maybe it wasn't that he was overreacting to the entire situation. Maybe his doppelganger was just crazy. "Yes?"
"So you'd know what places have apartments to rent, right?"
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Hooray to both Ivan and Matthew finally appeared! OP loves how Ivan has a store full of sunflowers and yet has the place to sell other kinds of flowers! Also congrats to Matthew, you win Alfred once! :DDDD
Absolutely love how both of them are "attacked" and kind of forcefully set up a date by a sunny and energetic American mafia boss <3 Alfred good job for getting two nice guys (thumbs up)
LOVINO DRAGGING ALFRED TO SHOP FOR CLOTH!!!!!!
That part is too cute <3 I love the stylish and annoyed Italian here, and will Alfred really wearing suits next time?;D
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and will Alfred really wearing suits next time?;D
Hahahaha, weeeell. I am so sorry Lovino, but I find your pain and suffering amusing.
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Thanks everyone. ♥
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