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[Part 15] Go Get Your Gun - mafia AU placeholder anonymous February 17 2011, 04:29:45 UTC
Request & previous fills (parts 1-4): http://hetalia-kink.livejournal.com/17942.html?thread=59298070#t59298070

What anon had in mind is that America become the mafia boss by accident, like he wants to play hero and…(fill in the blank) suddenly he become the most powerful mafia boss. And it would be funny if he doesn’t really act like one

America’s significant other(Canada/America, Russia/America..etc) is just an ordinary person with ordinary job; Russia as florist, Canada works in a bookstore…ok anon is not creative here.

One line that anon really want with these is when America’s lover found out America’s identify, he goes “Shit I just fuck the most powerful mafia boss senseless last night”

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Go Get Your Gun (5a/?) anonymous February 17 2011, 04:42:06 UTC
I am so, so sorry this took so long. Also thank you to you people who have been commenting, I love you aaaaaaall. (Sorry for not commenting back more, too. orz [is an awkward turtle that never knows what to say]) I also apologise for my fail sense of humour. And uh. The fact Russia and America barely got to talk. Next chapter, I promise! orz

One new message! Arthur's email chimed cheerily.

Arthur, on the other hand, took one look at its sender and felt his lips twitch violently downward.

It wasn't that he disliked his boss, exactly. He actually liked Erzsébet a good deal, since he'd joined her little newspaper and found something of a good friend and confidante in her as well. So no, it wasn't that he disliked her.

She just had the tendency to be overly interested in his love life (or lack thereof), and even more irritatingly, had the tendency to send emails like this.

You like those spelling-grammar fiddly things, right? Here're some of the less urgent articles I want you to look over. Thanks!

♥ Your wonderful boss, ErzsébetFor ( ... )

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Go Get Your Gun (5b/?) anonymous February 17 2011, 04:43:08 UTC
Ah, Gilbert. Those had been good times. Good, crazy times he'd spent a little off his head, and though he couldn't truthfully say he even really liked Gilbert, there were times the German - pardon, Prussian - could be decent company. "He wasn't that bad, compared to the... other two. Rather good in bed, actually. Well, he did have a tendency to scratch and bite like a cat in heat, but ( ... )

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Go Get Your Gun (5c/?) anonymous February 17 2011, 04:48:21 UTC
"Like I keep sayin', ya never heard o' somethin' like sunflower mania. Know why? That's 'cause tulips're better."

"There you go being silly again! You are being silly, yes? Of course you are. Tulips are all flash and very useless. You agree, yes? You can't say they're better than sunflowers, yes? You can't even eat them, yes?"

"Why don't ya go ahead an' try eatin' a tulip t' see?"

"Maybe you should eat it instead, if you love them so much?"

If Sadik didn't know better, he'd have said there was honest curiosity in the damned Russian's eyes. As it was, they'd been fighting over the same topic for the better part of six or so years now, and Braginski still hadn't had the sense to give in and admit he was right.

He knew better. "Eat thisHis fist was two inches from Braginski - who was already moving to grab it straight on - when the bells on the door chimed the arrival of a customer. The sound brought Sadik's punch to a halt; they'd both learned to restrain themselves around customers after the incident with the Zwingli girl. They ( ... )

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Go Get Your Gun (5d/?) anonymous February 17 2011, 04:57:49 UTC
Oh, it was on. Braginski was going to regret that, as soon as this Alfred left after making the obviously correct choice of 'tulips'.

"Ohhh," Alfred said, his eyes widening with comprehension. "Is that what he was going on about?" The kid turned to him next, incredulity clearly visible. "Dude, why didn't you just say so?"

Which made him pause and mentally replay the words he'd spoken. Even doing so though, he couldn't figure where'd things'd gotten lost in translation, metaphorically speaking and all. "...Wasn't that what I said? Coulda sworn it was."

"Nnnnno."

Sadik coughed into the awkward silence that had settled. "So ya still haven't answered the question," he said after a bit, even backing off a little so the kid wouldn't be too overwhelmed by his great and manly presence. "Alfred, was it? Sadik Adnan. Pleasure. And ya already seem t'know Braginski there."

"Yup! That's my name. Alfred F. Jones, don't wear it out. Question? The flowers, right. Sunflowers, I guess. They're pretty delicious!"

--F. Jones. By Allah, no wonder ( ... )

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Re: Go Get Your Gun (5d/?) anonymous February 17 2011, 09:12:49 UTC
*Sputters in unholy glee*

THIS! This was brilliant! The phone conversation between Matthew and Arthur had me grinning like a loon. The fact that Matthew considers dating Gilbert on the same level of crazy as an imaginary mint bunny (and at 13, Arthur you absolute nutter) is priceless.

(He never could figure out why so many irritating people had his number, including a certain thrice-damned trio of former university mates. Changing numbers hadn't helped the first or second time, either. They somehow, always, managed to get their paws on it anyway.)
Oh Arthur, you love it. now go have hot sex with all three

"Kid," Sadik said with a hearty clap on the back. "Ya haven't been welcomed 'til ya been asked and yer choice's been made. So choose wisely." And because he was such a friendly guy, he was even gonna lower his sunglasses and ask nicely. "Are ya on the great and glorious Team Tulips? Or... Team Sunflowers?" The ominous pause between Team Tulips and Team Sunflowers had me laughing so hard ( ... )

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Re: Go Get Your Gun (5d/?) anonymous February 18 2011, 04:40:14 UTC
Thank you so much for your comment! It seriously made my day. :D :D :D BUT YES, hahaha, Arthur is a special, special boy. man. whatever. ("Is too! Just because you cannot see him doesn't mean Flying Mint Bunny is not real!" And then later, Matthew whispered to his mom, "Mooom, do I have to play with Arthur again? He's weird. >:")

I have headcanon for this 'verse that he has fucked all of them at one point or another. Usually at least slightly inebriated. (If you ask him, that's the only way to get through sex with the blasted frog.) Nowadays he is being a stodgy old man-- I MEAN, a gentleman who does not lay about, thank you very much. (Yeah, sure Arthur. suuuuuure.)

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Re: Go Get Your Gun (5d/?) anonymous February 18 2011, 10:53:44 UTC
I share your head cannon when it comes to promiscuous Arthur. And I loved that he is comfortable enough with his sexuality to use previous exploits as vindictive argument points against poor unfortunate Matthew.

Maybe he is just laying low so Erzsébet will get off his back?
She is a total creeper well meaning but slightly nosy boss. :D

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Re: Go Get Your Gun (5d/?) anonymous February 19 2011, 10:53:55 UTC
I like to think that for Arthur, sex in general is a perfectly valid topic! It's when one starts straying onto the topic of kinks, that he starts getting flustered because he thinks his might be considered depraved.

Hahaha yes. It probably doesn't help she shares all the gossip with Feliks. I am possibly having way too much fun figuring out how everyone is connected, even if they might never show up. [should do a relationship chart some time]

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Re: Go Get Your Gun (5d/?) anonymous February 17 2011, 11:23:05 UTC
Very awesome. I love how Alfred is so nice ans sweet but everyone expects someone the opposite. Thank you so much!

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Re: Go Get Your Gun (5d/?) anonymous February 18 2011, 04:44:24 UTC
...oh yeah, I keep forgetting to post I'm the authornon. (oops)

Thank you so much for readinggggg ♥ Haha, he is very different from what everyone expects! It's like, an outsider took out arsehole Guasconi in cold blood!? What must this dude be like!? and then they actually meet Alfred, and. lol.

Though yeah, he'll be having some not so sweet moments soon eventually as well, which I hope won't be too disappointing/OOC. orz

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Happy!OP anonymous February 17 2011, 23:25:28 UTC
Love your long update <3
Finally Arthur! Editor...uh, column adviser Arthur! *A* The job fits him well! Can imagine him being picky on every single word, getting grumpy but still getting his job done <3
And Arthur's crazy past!! WITH GILBERT OMG LMAO
Love the conversation between Matthew and Arthur!
Alfred, Ivan would totally fall for you because you choose team sunflower <3

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Re: Happy!OP anonymous February 18 2011, 05:00:34 UTC
Authornon here is sorry it's taking so long! I went to see today how long I was taking between updates since I first started the fill, and the time between updates has only been getting longer and longer. orz (yeah, uh, let's just hope next fill doesn't end up coming like. two months later or something. orz)

No nonsense column adviser Arthur under a female nickname, in fact! xD (IT AMUSED ME and I admit, that's what's driving most of the smaller decisions in this fill. >>; ) I AM GLAD I HAVEN'T PUT YOU OFF SO FAR since I've basically been going wheeeeeeee with all the characters. And uh. hoping I am writing them properly. [rolls]

Sunflowers are awesome, Alfred agrees! They can make a sunflower paradise together! T^Td

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Re: Go Get Your Gun (5d/?) anonymous February 20 2011, 14:37:09 UTC
Yes! Updates! I seriously love this fill and squealed when I saw the update on the fills page.

My favorite part was definitely the interaction with Ivan, Sadik, and Alfred. I mean the argument about whether tulips or sunflowers were better was actually kinda silly and it made me grin like an idiot. Alfred's reason for choosing sunflower was so adorkable.

And-and, this part here:Sadik's grin was a little too manic still when he replied. "Just fine, kid." In one movement, he whipped back on his sunglasses and shifted so he could whisper into Alfred's ear. "An' when ya go to war, I might join ya even." o//o idk why I just found it so hot.

DEfintely can't wait till the next update! Please don't abandon this author-anon.

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