So here's the scenario. America has a major crush on Russia and wants to spend as much time with him without making himself look suspicious(though it's blatantly obvious to everyone). Russia, being the sadistic bastard that he is, wants to mess with America a bit and recruits China to join in on the fun, together they try to make America jealous.
Eventually America snaps and publicly claims Russia. smexy times ensues!
How Russia and China makes America jealous and how America claims Russia as his is entirely up to author!anon.
Bonus: Russia tells America it was all just a joke to make him jealous and America gets extremely embarrassed.
America listened to the rings on his phone's earpiece as his eyes brimmed with tears. He was stuck at the Oslo Airport along with the 44 other nations who attended the Nobel Peace Prize awarding ceremony and they had just announced that flights would be cancelled until the next day after the flights continued to be delayed since earlier that afternoon
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America continued to glare at his twin, not bothering to answer.
Apparently, Canada didn't need an answer. "Let me guess, he said he'll call you back soon, huh?"
How'd he know that? "So?" America snapped.
Canada looked pointedly at the crushed phone.
America's eyes widened. "Oh shit," he swore, looking at his phone and frantically trying to turn it on again, whilst Canada shook his head in resignation.
The phone was crushed--much like a crumpled piece of paper. Okay, don't panic--he can still get the sim card out, right? He tried to remove the crumpled plastic and metal, but to no avail. He probably crushed the sim card in there too
( ... )
1. I couldn't help it, I'm sorry. :( Forgive me while I stumble through this because my forte has always been the EU. To all those who plan to fill this, please do. Don't let my clumsy fill get in your way. 2. Eh, right. I made this as a continuation of Long September. Sorry about that. Don't worry; you guys missed nothing by not reading it. 3. As is customary, this does not have a title. Yet. *headdesk* Oh and it includes current events again because I can't remove them from my mind.
Current events as they are mentioned in the fill: 1. Nobel Peace Prize awarding ceremony for Liu Xiaobo in Oslo. 2. Freak snowfall in Europe. There was no snowstorm in Oslo that day; I made it up. 3. Moscow's victory in the 2018 World Cup bid. 4. Chinese Foreign Minister Dai Bingguo's visit to Pyongyang, which did not have any Russian delegates--I just made that up. 5. Wikileaks: A) Russian cables B) Putin's reaction C) Australia's response
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anonymous
December 14 2010, 10:16:15 UTC
This is insanly great.
Their accents! <3 oooh those accents and they sound so genuine too! Though its a bit confusing with the names not in English...the accents are fine its just the names.
I love this and its hilarious. America crying and being pissed off and insecure is awesome. I know Im horrible. I hope Russia feels bad about what hes done because it seems more like America is going to start crying while pissed off. That be sooo cute.
ShamelesslyEuropean!Anon comes back!
anonymous
December 14 2010, 12:18:01 UTC
I AM SO HAPPY, AUTHOR ANON ♥ ♥ ♥
I love every single line written in this fic, and it's only the first chapter. I really really hope it becomes looooooooooooooong, because I love the writing and I've never seen the three written before like this. You wrote them extremely well, stop doubting your ability. I love the characterization, sense of humour, the syntax foreign quirks, the foreign names and China's deviousness. It seems your China is the only China I'm in love with. Russia is also a delight; he's so playful and hilarious!
Another thing I love is America's reactions. He's so over-the-top, poor guy, he feels too much about everythingXD. Canada's pitying smile made me lol. And the mentions to recent real events? Still one of the best things about your writing! <3<3<3 that mention of England's emotional state after Long September made my heart clench. Damn you! I supported Germany, damnit! ;_;
I will never understand why a talented writer like you is so incapable with titlesXDXDXD
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anonymous
December 14 2010, 23:52:50 UTC
I like this start. That part where America wanted to swim across the sea and that where he unwittingly breaks the phone is my favourite. America is so adorable when impulsive. And I like so much interaction between Russia and China, I love to see them as friends. Oh, and Russia, you're sneaky bastard ^^
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anonymous
February 24 2011, 01:08:10 UTC
Discovered Long September yesterday; could not stop reading it since! I love the Engrish China and Russia has, it feels really natural. I know you said little to no heartbreak, but for some reason I have an image of America crying while chewing Russia (and China?) out when he found out that they were playing mind games with him for no other purpose than to wind him up (kind of in a 'oh, so you think my feelings are funny, huh! Like I'm just a joke to you you knew how I felt you knew you knew how anxious I was and you think it's funny how dare you how could you why would you is what you said even true- Well, you know what? Fuck you (both) I don't need you!' way), and the two friends kinda shocked/guilty because it was fun and games for them (well Russia likes him too, but enjoys the lulz). This would kind of be epic if Russia actually admitted (teasingly) that he likes America too. (US of A would be going 'is it even true that you like me, or is it just another joke to see me believing that you feel the same way
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China and Russia's Manry Engrish
anonymous
January 6 2011, 15:00:35 UTC
Omg the Engrish in this fic, I seriously love it <333 I dunno why, I just love it when people mess with the syntax and make it sound more like they're actual non-native speakers.
England set down the cup of tea in front of him before sitting down in the opposite chair. America never drinks tea--he knows that England knows this, but it was a sort of tradition for the old man to serve tea to whoever visits him, regardless of the visitor's preference
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"Hey, come on," America pleaded. "They won't be the only ones there! It won't be as fun without you! I mean, Scotland and Wales are coming over too! And I'm going to have all kinds of booze! You can even bring Christmas pudding if you want!"
Okay, so he may have practically signed a contract to kill himself and his brothers with food poisoning--but it's Christmas and they'd forgive him. Besides, it was a good way to cheer England up, even if it was at the cost of their lives.
England looked back at him. "Fine."
America flashed him his thousand watt smile. "Besides, I didn't invite everybody."
England gave a small smile. "At least now you've remembered not to send these invitations to the Middles East."
America raised a brow at him. "What? No. Of course I sent them invitations." Why wouldn't he? "I just didn't send one to China." And the other commies because they're douchebags.
"You what"What? Can't I spread a little Christmas cheer?" Christmas was all about forgiveness, so they should still attend the party, right? Besides,
( ... )
Notes and replies
anonymous
December 21 2010, 06:58:50 UTC
1. You read it right--Russia will have a solo act on America's Christmas Party, which I'll probably be able to post on January. That said, Merry Christmas, everybody! That's if I don't get to post stuff before Christmas. 2. And guys, America isn't stupid; he just has double standards is all. 3. The first part was set before they let Assange go, where the bail was still £200k. If you're wondering, they raised the bail to £240k.
Translations that Authoranon forgot because she was stupid: Russian: Kitai - China Severnaya Koryeya - North Korea
Chinese: Meiguo - America Eguo - Russia Chaoxian - North Korea Xiangkang - Hong Kong Wei - Hello (phone) Shenme - What Weishenme - hellowhat Why
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Re: Notes and replies
anonymous
December 21 2010, 15:06:42 UTC
Ah, I just found out about this like.. today. [I found the link posted in your other fill, so.. I had to read this one. Specially after asking for many many many sequels and for that fic to never end.. ahah]
Anyway, you broke my heart, again, with your England. ;__; Honestly. How can you not cry when writing this ;w;
Andand. Your America is so cute. XD Seriously, he's like.. So CUTE! And IC. And awesome. And he's kind of stupid, but in an awesome way!
I really hope China and Russia'll stop being douches, tho. (I didn't read the prompt so I don't really know what's gonna happen, I just started to read this since you are one of my favorite anonauthors of all times ♥)
AND HEY, HEY, maybe you can shove in some other couples! such as Denmark/Canada maybeeee
(it's more towards the end of the fill. the ChinAmeRus part)
So here's the scenario. America has a major crush on Russia and wants to spend as much time with him without making himself look suspicious(though it's blatantly obvious to everyone). Russia, being the sadistic bastard that he is, wants to mess with America a bit and recruits China to join in on the fun, together they try to make America jealous.
Eventually America snaps and publicly claims Russia. smexy times ensues!
How Russia and China makes America jealous and how America claims Russia as his is entirely up to author!anon.
Bonus: Russia tells America it was all just a joke to make him jealous and America gets extremely embarrassed.
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Apparently, Canada didn't need an answer. "Let me guess, he said he'll call you back soon, huh?"
How'd he know that? "So?" America snapped.
Canada looked pointedly at the crushed phone.
America's eyes widened. "Oh shit," he swore, looking at his phone and frantically trying to turn it on again, whilst Canada shook his head in resignation.
The phone was crushed--much like a crumpled piece of paper. Okay, don't panic--he can still get the sim card out, right? He tried to remove the crumpled plastic and metal, but to no avail. He probably crushed the sim card in there too ( ... )
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1. I couldn't help it, I'm sorry. :( Forgive me while I stumble through this because my forte has always been the EU. To all those who plan to fill this, please do. Don't let my clumsy fill get in your way.
2. Eh, right. I made this as a continuation of Long September. Sorry about that. Don't worry; you guys missed nothing by not reading it.
3. As is customary, this does not have a title. Yet. *headdesk* Oh and it includes current events again because I can't remove them from my mind.
Current events as they are mentioned in the fill:
1. Nobel Peace Prize awarding ceremony for Liu Xiaobo in Oslo.
2. Freak snowfall in Europe. There was no snowstorm in Oslo that day; I made it up.
3. Moscow's victory in the 2018 World Cup bid.
4. Chinese Foreign Minister Dai Bingguo's visit to Pyongyang, which did not have any Russian delegates--I just made that up.
5. Wikileaks: A) Russian cables B) Putin's reaction C) Australia's response
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Their accents! <3 oooh those accents and they sound so genuine too!
Though its a bit confusing with the names not in English...the accents are fine its just the names.
I love this and its hilarious. America crying and being pissed off and insecure is awesome. I know Im horrible. I hope Russia feels bad about what hes done because it seems more like America is going to start crying while pissed off. That be sooo cute.
I know I'm horrible.
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Great fill! You have gained a stalker now. .w.
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I love every single line written in this fic, and it's only the first chapter. I really really hope it becomes looooooooooooooong, because I love the writing and I've never seen the three written before like this. You wrote them extremely well, stop doubting your ability. I love the characterization, sense of humour, the syntax foreign quirks, the foreign names and China's deviousness. It seems your China is the only China I'm in love with. Russia is also a delight; he's so playful and hilarious!
Another thing I love is America's reactions. He's so over-the-top, poor guy, he feels too much about everythingXD. Canada's pitying smile made me lol. And the mentions to recent real events? Still one of the best things about your writing! <3<3<3
that mention of England's emotional state after Long September made my heart clench. Damn you! I supported Germany, damnit! ;_;
I will never understand why a talented writer like you is so incapable with titlesXDXDXD
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And I like so much interaction between Russia and China, I love to see them as friends.
Oh, and Russia, you're sneaky bastard ^^
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The only thing I don't get are the names. Is Kitai Russian for China? Or something? XD And Eguo?
Cute fill though. America needs to not crush his phones.
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Okay, so he may have practically signed a contract to kill himself and his brothers with food poisoning--but it's Christmas and they'd forgive him. Besides, it was a good way to cheer England up, even if it was at the cost of their lives.
England looked back at him. "Fine."
America flashed him his thousand watt smile. "Besides, I didn't invite everybody."
England gave a small smile. "At least now you've remembered not to send these invitations to the Middles East."
America raised a brow at him. "What? No. Of course I sent them invitations." Why wouldn't he? "I just didn't send one to China." And the other commies because they're douchebags.
"You what"What? Can't I spread a little Christmas cheer?" Christmas was all about forgiveness, so they should still attend the party, right? Besides, ( ... )
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1. You read it right--Russia will have a solo act on America's Christmas Party, which I'll probably be able to post on January. That said, Merry Christmas, everybody! That's if I don't get to post stuff before Christmas.
2. And guys, America isn't stupid; he just has double standards is all.
3. The first part was set before they let Assange go, where the bail was still £200k. If you're wondering, they raised the bail to £240k.
Translations that Authoranon forgot because she was stupid:
Russian:
Kitai - China
Severnaya Koryeya - North Korea
Chinese:
Meiguo - America
Eguo - Russia
Chaoxian - North Korea
Xiangkang - Hong Kong
Wei - Hello (phone)
Shenme - What
Weishenme - hellowhat Why ( ... )
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Anyway, you broke my heart, again, with your England. ;__; Honestly. How can you not cry when writing this ;w;
Andand. Your America is so cute. XD Seriously, he's like.. So CUTE! And IC. And awesome. And he's kind of stupid, but in an awesome way!
I really hope China and Russia'll stop being douches, tho. (I didn't read the prompt so I don't really know what's gonna happen, I just started to read this since you are one of my favorite anonauthors of all times ♥)
AND HEY, HEY, maybe you can shove in some other couples! such as Denmark/Canada maybeeee
Isaidnothing.
and I love you. ♥
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