Fill, part 1/3
anonymous
January 14 2011, 03:48:19 UTC
(highlight to read warnings for specific kinks): rope bondage, breathplay, blindfold, and...heightplay? IDK, America dangles England off a banister, whatever you want to call that.America's house in Texas is open-plan, two upstairs rooms separated from the lower story only by banisters, so that at dawn the whole house floods with light from the huge windows downstairs and if he opens the door fresh, sweet air steals into every corner. England likes drinking his tea here in the mornings, out on the back porch in the rocking chairs before the day turns scorching hot and he retreats into the shade. America brought him here for something else, though, for those thick wood banisters and the high ceilings above them
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Fill, part 2/3
anonymous
January 14 2011, 03:49:01 UTC
He stands up, tracing his lips over England's cheekbone, peering into his eyes just to make sure he's okay. Oh, he's fine. He's better than fine. America is briefly tempted to push England down, have him suck America off with his pink, swollen lips, but he really wants to try this, so he spins England around instead, pressing him up against the banister
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Fill, part 3/3
anonymous
January 14 2011, 03:49:40 UTC
America pulls England up, lifting him to stand against the banister instead of sitting on it - England is shaking, cold sweat broken out along his hairline, and as soon as America pulls off the blindfold he sees England's eyes, blown-huge with panic, panic he doesn't know how to face down, because he's too far under. Guilt explodes in America's stomach, cold and clawing: he did this; he was stupid enough to blindfold England when they were trying something new; he didn't realize, caught up in his own arousal, how England's shivers of pleasure gave way to fear
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Re: Fill, part 3/3
anonymous
January 14 2011, 06:22:42 UTC
Totally not the OP, but I totally don't care. :D This was such an interesting fill to read, and I'm not even that big a fan of USUK! It was also surprisingly refreshing to read, since I haven't really read anything like that in a BDSM fic before. So points for originality, anon!
Re: Fill, part 3/3
anonymous
January 14 2011, 07:48:45 UTC
Having never read BSDM before, I'm surprised how much I enjoyed this. I also liked how England was liking what was going on until the breathplay and that as soon as America heard the keys, he stopped. The bit afterwards I loved where they talked about what happened and they had all the sweet relationship stuff.
Re: Fill, part 3/3
anonymous
January 14 2011, 07:51:20 UTC
I loved the prompt the moment I saw it and sincerely wished someone would write it. And this is the absolutely best fill that I could imagine. It's short but satisfying, has a very good pace, original ideas and is just perfect.<`i>
Thank you for writing this (and thanks to the OP too)
Re: Fill, part 3/3
anonymous
January 14 2011, 13:32:40 UTC
"Shhh, sweetheart." America strokes his cheek, his shoulder. "Fall for me."
<3<3<3<3<3<3<3
Seriously, lovely all through. I like how focused America is on making England happy - not just getting him off, but gettting him into the right headspace, paying attention to his reactions, making sure he's not panicking as things get more intense.
And then delibreately driving him to the edge of panic, with the almost-dropping-him and the breathplay - even if it didn't work I could see what he was going for, and it was so intense, both a physical and mental 'edge' that America had to pull him away from after he safeworded. It's sweet how obvious it is that England trusts him.
Re: Fill, part 3/3
anonymous
January 20 2011, 01:34:25 UTC
Omg, this is fucking amazing. (And hot!) Seriously, I've largely stopped following the kink meme as it doesn't really produce much that I want to read anymore, but I'm so glad I read this - fantastic BDSM fic, and both of them are so IC! This is EXACTLY how I imagine a BDSM relationship would be for them.
author!anon just won this anon's heart :'D
anonymous
January 20 2011, 11:51:48 UTC
THIS IS FABULOUS.
Seriously brilliant work, it's creative AND so well written, it captures their personalities and the mood perfectly. (oops I kinda sound like anon above but lol reiteration of the awesomeness 8Db)
I love how loving they are, and the relationship dynamic is beautiful because even with America being the sort of more dominant one during the actual BDSM play (omg I think I fail at terminology, please excuse ;A;) he says this of England: "You're strong as hell. S'why I love you."
One of the, if not the best portrayals of a BDSM relationship I've seen (and I believe I've seen quite alot ahem ;D). Not only was the first half utterly smokin', the second half was so tender and it really gave a deeper level of meaning to their relationship.
THIS DESERVES TO BE BOOKMARKED AND RE-READ FOREVER AND BEYOND ♥ :'D
I'd also like to add that I was stupidly excited to see America call England sweetheart in the beginning. That's my preferred pet name for him to use. :>
So my request: England and America have a healthy BDSM relationship, they like to roleplay, England likes America to utilize his super strength, etc.
One day one of them goes too far and the other has to use the safe word.
What happens next is up to you, but no shaming or goading the other into continuing with the same act anyway.
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Also I probably shouldn't have to say this, but seriously guys, don't try it at home.
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Safekeys. Who'da thunk it.
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Thank you for writing this (and thanks to the OP too)
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"Shhh, sweetheart." America strokes his cheek, his shoulder. "Fall for me."
<3<3<3<3<3<3<3
Seriously, lovely all through. I like how focused America is on making England happy - not just getting him off, but gettting him into the right headspace, paying attention to his reactions, making sure he's not panicking as things get more intense.
And then delibreately driving him to the edge of panic, with the almost-dropping-him and the breathplay - even if it didn't work I could see what he was going for, and it was so intense, both a physical and mental 'edge' that America had to pull him away from after he safeworded. It's sweet how obvious it is that England trusts him.
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Seriously brilliant work, it's creative AND so well written, it captures their personalities and the mood perfectly. (oops I kinda sound like anon above but lol reiteration of the awesomeness 8Db)
I love how loving they are, and the relationship dynamic is beautiful because even with America being the sort of more dominant one during the actual BDSM play (omg I think I fail at terminology, please excuse ;A;) he says this of England: "You're strong as hell. S'why I love you."
One of the, if not the best portrayals of a BDSM relationship I've seen (and I believe I've seen quite alot ahem ;D). Not only was the first half utterly smokin', the second half was so tender and it really gave a deeper level of meaning to their relationship.
THIS DESERVES TO BE BOOKMARKED AND RE-READ FOREVER AND BEYOND ♥ :'D
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