America(from our world) somehow switches place with the America from the alternate world (one where UK won the war, perhaps, and is still ruling America as a colony-this is up to the writer anon. Change it as you see fit! ). Whether or not they eventually switch back is up to you. One shots, glimpses of the situation on either side of the switch are also very much welcomed.
Bonus: Bondage. Use of sex toys. anon is going to hell Bonus 2: Suit!pornWriternon apologizes if this has already been filled; I found it in the unfilled index at the usxuk comm. Writernon would also like to forewarn any potential readers that this
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kansas is the 34th state (1/?)
anonymous
January 5 2011, 18:26:25 UTC
"Hey, Toto." Alfred smiles into the mirror and Toto, which is what he calls his reflection-as in, I don't think we're in Kansas anymore, not the pop band that had some success in the 1980s-smiles at him out of it. At first, Alfred would address Toto with, "Good morning," or, "Good afternoon," depending on the time of day. But after they took away his watch, he lost track not only of what day he was on but where he was in any given day. So now he sticks with non-specific greetings like "hey," "hello," and, "howdy, handsome!"
He doesn't make the Wizard of Oz references anymore, either. He thought they were playing a prank on him, elaborate and subtle in all the changes from how he knew things to be, from how they themselves were. So he'd said one of the most famous lines from one of his most beloved movies. They'd all looked blankly at him and then Matthew had asked, hesitantly, "What's Kansas?" Naturally, Alfred had replied that Kansas was his 34th State, born January 29, 1861
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Re: kansas is the 34th state (1/?)
anonymous
January 5 2011, 19:00:23 UTC
;dsk;slkf why would you stop thereeeeee! Moreeee ;w;!
Man, that slap. I could actally hear it when I read this and I was like OHSHITWHATJUSTHAPPENED. o__o;
A-anyway, be sure to continue soon, eh? <3
and are you, by any chance, the anonauthor that's writing that Liet/America fill? With Liet working for America and that.. Well, not sure if you are, so I'm just gonna embarrass myself by asking haha. Anyway, love the fill so far. So you btter continue! ;D
Re: kansas is the 34th state (1/?)
anonymous
January 5 2011, 19:34:04 UTC
Writernon thanks you for reading and for the encouraging comments. ♥ Work is slow at the moment so I'm hoping to post more today. An aspiration rather than a promise. ;) The slap--yeah, Arthur just kind of went and did that on his own (my notes just had him staring Alfred down and walking out). Happy to hear that worked for you!
This is the only fill I'm writing at the moment and it's been a little while since I've been here, so the Liet/America anon is not me. No need to be embarrassed, though!
Re: kansas is the 34th state (1/?)
anonymous
January 5 2011, 19:35:19 UTC
Ah, writernon did not mean to be a tease! It seemed like a good place to stop for the introduction...? Anyhow, I'm working on the next part now and will do my best to keep you interested. Thank you for reading! ♥
kansas is the 34th state (2/?)
anonymous
January 5 2011, 21:06:13 UTC
Alfred believes in parallel universes, of course. There is some intriguing scientific theory supporting their existence, beyond the science fiction speculation. He has to admit that his particular situation does seem to be more of the science fiction kind (though who can really say how denser gravity might affect what you have for breakfast or whether you successfully pull off a rebellion and become your own independent country). Either way and in spite of everything else, Alfred can't help being thrilled to personally witness and verify the existence of parallel universes.
It's either that, or Alfred is going crazy. And Alfred is not crazy. He has no way to prove it, but he trusts himself on this one. Where he's from, Kansas is the 34th State and "Somewhere Over the Rainbow" won an Oscar for Best Song in 1940. These things Alfred holds dear and true. He recites such things regularly lest they be forgotten; lest he forget himself. Sometimes he goes through the States and their capital cities, other times he does various categories
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kansas is the 34th state (3/?)
anonymous
January 5 2011, 22:30:29 UTC
Even though he's expecting it, has been waiting for it, the knock on the door startles Alfred and he realizes he's been asleep. He doesn't remember falling, but he must have. He rolls himself off the bed, finger-combing his hair back from his face and rubbing at some sleep in the corner of his eye with the pad of his thumb. By the time the bolt slides on the other side and the door opens, Alfred is standing in front of it, smiling.
Arthur doesn't smile in return.
http://pm400.sakuraweb.com/aphe/100727-1.jpgA lit cigarette dangles from one corner of his unsmiling mouth, smoke drifting upwards in a careless curl. His hair is tousled, tie draped undone around his neck, his dress shirt fully unbuttoned and pushed back on one side by the hand casually thrust into his pocket, his other hand somewhere behind him. The waistband of his trousers rides low, the jut of his hipbone exposed. He has come from a tryst. Or so he would like to Alfred to think
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kansas is the 34th state (4/5)
anonymous
January 5 2011, 22:57:36 UTC
When Arthur's words come, they are soundless. They feel like the blunt edge of bared teeth, digging flat and hard into the yielding flesh of Alfred's earlobe
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kansas is the 34th state (5/5)
anonymous
January 5 2011, 23:59:27 UTC
Another tug, another pull, and Arthur steps back to survey his work. Even with his eyes closed, Alfred knows Arthur is looking at him. He's burning inside but he doesn't look back, he doesn't breathe
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Re: kansas is the 34th state (5/5)
anonymous
January 6 2011, 02:08:27 UTC
omg. sequel SEQUEL SEQUEL please don't leave it hanging there anon. I really wish I knew what happens to poor our-world Alfred? Or other-world Alfred...? I love that our Alfred isn't giving up without a major fight.
Re: kansas is the 34th state (5/5)
anonymous
January 6 2011, 04:03:06 UTC
Writernon promises nothing...but I did spend the commute home thinking about other-world Alfred in our world...
Our-world Alfred is made of strong stuff. When I first read the prompt, I squirmed with joy at the thought of Alfred as a sex slave--but once I started, knowing that it was *our* Alfred, somehow things took a different turn. Hence the cockblocking!writernon lack of full on sexy tiems. I'm really happy you liked what I did. Thank you so much for reading! ♥
Re: kansas is the 34th state (5/5)
anonymous
January 6 2011, 04:04:24 UTC
Ohhh god this was hot. The main dig for me is how Alfred is simultaneously defiant of his new situation and getting a genuine thrill out of it. Or that his subversive compliance is in itself a form of resistance; by finding pleasure in the punishment, he's armored himself against being broken by punishment. Arthur must think he's breaking Alfred's will by forcing him, but you get the feeling that Alfred is in some ways a step ahead in this game, that he knows Arthur's desires perhaps better than Arthur does... mmm... it's all so delicious and perverse and gaaaahhh.
Now I really have to wonder what the hell normal!Arthur thinks of the alternate!Alfred who's presumably popped up on the other side, ready to serve. And what the nature of normal!Alfred and normal!Arthur's relationship was. Is normal!Alfred attracted to normal!Arthur as he seems attracted to alternate!Arthur, or is normal!Arthur not sadistic enough, hahaha...
Re: kansas is the 34th state (5/5)
anonymous
January 6 2011, 04:53:46 UTC
Oh man, I've been sitting here practically gnawing my hand off because there are so many things I want to say in response...but they'd all be spoilers if I actually do write the follow-up story, about other-world Alfred in our world. Let me just say, our brings work in similar ways. (And I will happily tell you more, if you want to hear what I'm thinking! If not, no worries.)
As for this story itself: that was the thing for me, too--the way Alfred resists and yields at the same time. I'm not at all opposed to purely submissive!Alfred and have joyfully written him elsewhere, but the Alfred here is not quite like that. I'm really, really pleased you found it hot because I was afraid I might be disappointing but not letting them have outrageous sex together.
Thanks very much for reading (and sorry for the rambling)!
http://hetalia-kink.livejournal.com/17337.html?thread=53380537#t53380537
Inspired by Part 7 'AU where England is under America's rule, and his sex slave.' request + THIS image as seme!England ->http://pm400.sakuraweb.com/aphe/100727-1.jpg
America(from our world) somehow switches place with the America from the alternate world (one where UK won the war, perhaps, and is still ruling America as a colony-this is up to the writer anon. Change it as you see fit! ). Whether or not they eventually switch back is up to you. One shots, glimpses of the situation on either side of the switch are also very much welcomed.
Bonus: Bondage. Use of sex toys. anon is going to hell
Bonus 2: Suit!pornWriternon apologizes if this has already been filled; I found it in the unfilled index at the usxuk comm. Writernon would also like to forewarn any potential readers that this ( ... )
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He doesn't make the Wizard of Oz references anymore, either. He thought they were playing a prank on him, elaborate and subtle in all the changes from how he knew things to be, from how they themselves were. So he'd said one of the most famous lines from one of his most beloved movies. They'd all looked blankly at him and then Matthew had asked, hesitantly, "What's Kansas?" Naturally, Alfred had replied that Kansas was his 34th State, born January 29, 1861 ( ... )
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Man, that slap. I could actally hear it when I read this and I was like OHSHITWHATJUSTHAPPENED. o__o;
A-anyway, be sure to continue soon, eh? <3
and are you, by any chance, the anonauthor that's writing that Liet/America fill? With Liet working for America and that.. Well, not sure if you are, so I'm just gonna embarrass myself by asking haha. Anyway, love the fill so far. So you btter continue! ;D
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This is the only fill I'm writing at the moment and it's been a little while since I've been here, so the Liet/America anon is not me. No need to be embarrassed, though!
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It's either that, or Alfred is going crazy. And Alfred is not crazy. He has no way to prove it, but he trusts himself on this one. Where he's from, Kansas is the 34th State and "Somewhere Over the Rainbow" won an Oscar for Best Song in 1940. These things Alfred holds dear and true. He recites such things regularly lest they be forgotten; lest he forget himself. Sometimes he goes through the States and their capital cities, other times he does various categories ( ... )
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Arthur doesn't smile in return.
http://pm400.sakuraweb.com/aphe/100727-1.jpgA lit cigarette dangles from one corner of his unsmiling mouth, smoke drifting upwards in a careless curl. His hair is tousled, tie draped undone around his neck, his dress shirt fully unbuttoned and pushed back on one side by the hand casually thrust into his pocket, his other hand somewhere behind him. The waistband of his trousers rides low, the jut of his hipbone exposed. He has come from a tryst. Or so he would like to Alfred to think ( ... )
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please don't leave it hanging there anon.
I really wish I knew what happens to poor our-world Alfred? Or other-world Alfred...? I love that our Alfred isn't giving up without a major fight.
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Our-world Alfred is made of strong stuff. When I first read the prompt, I squirmed with joy at the thought of Alfred as a sex slave--but once I started, knowing that it was *our* Alfred, somehow things took a different turn. Hence the cockblocking!writernon lack of full on sexy tiems. I'm really happy you liked what I did. Thank you so much for reading! ♥
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Now I really have to wonder what the hell normal!Arthur thinks of the alternate!Alfred who's presumably popped up on the other side, ready to serve. And what the nature of normal!Alfred and normal!Arthur's relationship was. Is normal!Alfred attracted to normal!Arthur as he seems attracted to alternate!Arthur, or is normal!Arthur not sadistic enough, hahaha...
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As for this story itself: that was the thing for me, too--the way Alfred resists and yields at the same time. I'm not at all opposed to purely submissive!Alfred and have joyfully written him elsewhere, but the Alfred here is not quite like that. I'm really, really pleased you found it hot because I was afraid I might be disappointing but not letting them have outrageous sex together.
Thanks very much for reading (and sorry for the rambling)!
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-- Make that, our brains work in similar ways. Except, apparently, that mine sends more misfires to my fingers than yours does.
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I'd love to hear more! &hearts I do hope you end up writing a sequel - I'm completely intrigued by your writing style and characterization.
...any chance you'd link to other of your fics? (It's ok if you don't want to link, no pressure.)
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