Fill will erotic hypnosis, BDSM play with a twist, and consensual alteration of mind states.
Consider this the spiritual sequel to “Deeper.” I wrote this at work for you guys. On Post-It Notes. Also it’s like my second Franada fic ever so. Yes.
Trance [1/?]
anonymous
January 15 2011, 03:41:02 UTC
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“What does it feel like to be burned?”
Matthew opens his eyes and slides them up along the curve of Francis’ back, pupils moving up-down-up with every dip and swell of his spine. Francis is curled over his knees in his “Socrates” pose. Canada doesn’t feel like sitting up to get a good look at his face.
Francis chuckles and lifts a slim cigarette to his lips, taking a long, slow drag. He holds it there for a second, and then opens his mouth so the smoke flows out like unfurling bolts of silk. “I guess that sounds odd, hm?”
“Francis, you’ve been burned before,” Matthew says, and he’s whining but he doesn’t care because it’s too goddamn late to have this conversation.
“Yes, but--but I’ve been trapped before,” Francis murmurs, and he turns his hand a little so that Matthew can see the orange glow. “I’ve never gotten to consider what it would feel like...having it slowly come towards you anticipating the sting and smolder--”
“Francis“Can we try it?” And now Francis turns to face him, all bright eyes and hopeful quirk of
( ... )
Re: Trance [1/?]
anonymous
January 15 2011, 04:50:36 UTC
Oh goodness, hypnosis is pretty much my number one kink, and "Deeper" was so fucking amazing I can't even begin to describe my love for it! As such, I will ABSOLUTELY be stalking this fill like a madwoman!! :D
(Also, your descrip in the fills section amused me. Makes me wonder what else England has an app for...)
Re: Trance [1/?]
anonymous
January 15 2011, 18:36:16 UTC
OMG, anon.
OMG.
The atmosphere in this was so great, the build of the tension and the way you describe their bodies as well as the words - Matthew bites his cheek and swallows his smile as sits up with open eyes and rubs the burning ashes into the glass tray. The embers scatter and glow, smoking the last of their life out, and then going gray this one especially stuck with me and I can't get it out of my head.
Also the hipbone thing - my ridiculous hipbone kink aside, it was just so well done!
“Deeper”: http://hetalia-kink.livejournal.com/10960.html?thread=20520912#t20520912
Fill will erotic hypnosis, BDSM play with a twist, and consensual alteration of mind states.
Consider this the spiritual sequel to “Deeper.” I wrote this at work for you guys. On Post-It Notes. Also it’s like my second Franada fic ever so. Yes.
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“What does it feel like to be burned?”
Matthew opens his eyes and slides them up along the curve of Francis’ back, pupils moving up-down-up with every dip and swell of his spine. Francis is curled over his knees in his “Socrates” pose. Canada doesn’t feel like sitting up to get a good look at his face.
Francis chuckles and lifts a slim cigarette to his lips, taking a long, slow drag. He holds it there for a second, and then opens his mouth so the smoke flows out like unfurling bolts of silk. “I guess that sounds odd, hm?”
“Francis, you’ve been burned before,” Matthew says, and he’s whining but he doesn’t care because it’s too goddamn late to have this conversation.
“Yes, but--but I’ve been trapped before,” Francis murmurs, and he turns his hand a little so that Matthew can see the orange glow. “I’ve never gotten to consider what it would feel like...having it slowly come towards you anticipating the sting and smolder--”
“Francis“Can we try it?” And now Francis turns to face him, all bright eyes and hopeful quirk of ( ... )
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(Also, your descrip in the fills section amused me. Makes me wonder what else England has an app for...)
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OMG.
The atmosphere in this was so great, the build of the tension and the way you describe their bodies as well as the words - Matthew bites his cheek and swallows his smile as sits up with open eyes and rubs the burning ashes into the glass tray. The embers scatter and glow, smoking the last of their life out, and then going gray this one especially stuck with me and I can't get it out of my head.
Also the hipbone thing - my ridiculous hipbone kink aside, it was just so well done!
F5 F5 F5
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