Fem!France (named Marianne, please) is the resident slut at school. She happily sleeps around with all the boys and then tells juicy details and teases everybody. She loves to entice and seduce, to turn people on, the thrill of the hunt. She’s also proudly bisexual and a shameless flirt.
One day, a group of students (or just one) insult her and call her ‘worthless whore’, in front of the whole school, and give her a verbal lashing that hurts her deeply.
The other two (not genderbent) members of the Bad Touch Trio are out for blood and revenge, since no one insults their precious friend.
Hated [part 1/??]
anonymous
February 21 2011, 06:10:35 UTC
The bottom edge of the steering wheel bumps against her lower back as Alfred grunts and thrusts away, and she has to arch a little more to avoid it digging into her spine. Alfred groans at the new angle, beautiful blue eyes screwed up as tightly as when she first claimed his virginity as a freshman, and Marianne laughs breathlessly as they continue fucking in his brand new sports car. He finally comes, shouting “OH SWEET LIBERTY!” much too enthusiastically, and she rides him hard for another minute before she reaches her own climax, sighing and shuddering in pleasure. His forehead damp with sweat, Alfred leans forward and nuzzles at her bared breasts, mumbling happily
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Hated [part 2/??]
anonymous
February 21 2011, 06:11:50 UTC
Before English class had finished, half the school already heard some form of rumor about her and Alfred, and in the girl’s restroom, Marianne regales Sey and Monica with the sordid details of her early morning tryst until they look ready to die of embarrassment
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Re: Hated [part 3/??]
anonymous
February 21 2011, 10:41:30 UTC
Cursing under her breath in French, Monica struggles to free herself, but her cheeks are red and she is panting shamelessly as long, manicured fingers caress her inner thighs with experienced motions.
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She uncrosses her legs, and Arthur’s eyes follow that movement like a hawk. “You want me to be bad, so that you can exert your authority, your dominance.”
“Wh-what are you talking about, you broad?” Arthur growls, but his throat is dry, and his voice cracks twice because it’s true, so true.
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“Take those off and lie back on the desk. And none of your stupid French this time.”
Oh my FUCK. *dead* Guh, I love your descriptions, anon. (I love all of them, but those three quoted parts are my favourites. *nosebleed*) I'm probably totally missing the point here, but somehow, even without detailed sex scenes, this is one of the hottest things I've read on the meme in a long time. Doesn't hurt that I have a huge kink for sex-god(dess) France, and you write her amazingly. ♥ I do also love the way you've set up the character dynamics in
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Re: Hated [part 3/??]
anonymous
February 22 2011, 03:39:41 UTC
Thank you so much, anon! I was afraid I might have rambled on the descriptions, but I'm glad to see that they have an appreciable effect. Unfortunately the detailed sex scenes I write are too ludicrous for the type of serious plot I'm considering, so we won't see too much more in the way of sexiness. But I hope you enjoy the rest of the fic, anyway.
This is absolutely perfect, author anon! Everything I wanted, and then some. Your fem!France is so ridiculously hot, and this OP is so very happy about that :D
I like the interaction you've set with everyone here. I loved that the first one we see is Alfred, there's something sinfully hot about popular high school boy Alfred that always gets me, especially if it's with an older female *happy sigh~* The new sports car, the death glares of the other girls, the way he moves and grunts, his cry as he comes, his puppy cheerful atittude...delicious bonuses
Then the BTT! So little of them, but so good. I like that Gilbert snorts at her ways and Antonio is the sensitive one, and the thorough satisfaction with each other and their friendship, and their hot loose friend. Yay for some Antonio/Marianne thrown in!
Then the girls! Unf, I can't believe nobody has yet written Monaco/fem!France because HOLYSHITHAWT. I like the girls atittudes, Monaco's disapproval yet inability to resist, and Sey's awe making her unable to see Marianne's faults;
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Thank you so much OP, I'm so glad you're still around to read this fic. I included all of the relationship drama from canon/history that I was partial to, hoping at least one of them clicks with you, and I'm very encouraged to know you approve of pretty much everything! That's fantastic, I am a big fan of France/world myself...
The reason I was so concerned about this fill that I've graduated high school years and years ago, and I'm pretty sure things might have changed a little, lol. I'm sure some But I'm also pretty sure there will always be mean girls.
Well, I have a fairly serious bad-friends-trio-centered plot in mind, lots of teen angst, eventual threesome, etc, but if you have anything else you really want to see, I will do my best to include it if I can. (Also if you have good human names for everyone without names, I'd love suggestions.)
I'm really excited about this, and so far don't worry because everything seems perfect ;)
Actually, fairly serious bad-friends-trio-centered plot in mind, lots of teen angst, eventual threesome, etc sounds reeeeeeeeeeeeeeeal good ^^ but I wouldn't mind seeing America/Russia on the sidelines like this ;)
Names for unnamed nations? I only require that Ukraine is Yekaterina "Katyusha" or "Katya" for nick, if she appears. Others, I love all ^^
Re: Hated [part 3/??]
anonymous
February 22 2011, 04:05:38 UTC
Well, thank you, anon, I'm glad you like that scene, it was fun to write.
My intention was not to reveal if Marianne loves anybody, only that she is really truly loved by Antonio and Gilbert. But you're free to make any other assumptions by the time the fill is finished. (If it's finished.) We'll see!
Hated [part 4/??]
anonymous
February 26 2011, 06:34:11 UTC
Gilbert and Antonio had been waiting for her after the meeting, and with a tired smile, she thanks them. Marianne feels worn out today, too drained to walk back home, and it had nothing to do with Alfred’s well-endowed self or Arthur’s roughness. The other two seem to understand without needing to be told, and she appreciates not having to explain herself
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Hated [part 5/??]
anonymous
February 26 2011, 06:37:14 UTC
The three of them troop into her room, grabbing towels to dry themselves off, Marianne already bragging about her latest conquests while Antonio and Gilbert grin and nod and try their best to not think up creative ways to castrate their rivals. She changes out of her wet clothes in front of them, offering the most tantalizing flashes of skin as she shimmies into a t-shirt and pajama pants, and even though they know she is just being herself, the boys watch appreciatively, until the heat from their bodies is nearly enough to dry their clothes
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Fem!France (named Marianne, please) is the resident slut at school. She happily sleeps around with all the boys and then tells juicy details and teases everybody. She loves to entice and seduce, to turn people on, the thrill of the hunt. She’s also proudly bisexual and a shameless flirt.
One day, a group of students (or just one) insult her and call her ‘worthless whore’, in front of the whole school, and give her a verbal lashing that hurts her deeply.
The other two (not genderbent) members of the Bad Touch Trio are out for blood and revenge, since no one insults their precious friend.
[I hope this is what you were expecting, OP!]
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She uncrosses her legs, and Arthur’s eyes follow that movement like a hawk. “You want me to be bad, so that you can exert your authority, your dominance.”
“Wh-what are you talking about, you broad?” Arthur growls, but his throat is dry, and his voice cracks twice because it’s true, so true.
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“Take those off and lie back on the desk. And none of your stupid French this time.”
Oh my FUCK. *dead* Guh, I love your descriptions, anon. (I love all of them, but those three quoted parts are my favourites. *nosebleed*) I'm probably totally missing the point here, but somehow, even without detailed sex scenes, this is one of the hottest things I've read on the meme in a long time. Doesn't hurt that I have a huge kink for sex-god(dess) France, and you write her amazingly. ♥ I do also love the way you've set up the character dynamics in ( ... )
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I like the interaction you've set with everyone here. I loved that the first one we see is Alfred, there's something sinfully hot about popular high school boy Alfred that always gets me, especially if it's with an older female *happy sigh~* The new sports car, the death glares of the other girls, the way he moves and grunts, his cry as he comes, his puppy cheerful atittude...delicious bonuses
Then the BTT! So little of them, but so good. I like that Gilbert snorts at her ways and Antonio is the sensitive one, and the thorough satisfaction with each other and their friendship, and their hot loose friend. Yay for some Antonio/Marianne thrown in!
Then the girls! Unf, I can't believe nobody has yet written Monaco/fem!France because HOLYSHITHAWT. I like the girls atittudes, Monaco's disapproval yet inability to resist, and Sey's awe making her unable to see Marianne's faults; ( ... )
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The reason I was so concerned about this fill that I've graduated high school years and years ago, and I'm pretty sure things might have changed a little, lol. I'm sure some But I'm also pretty sure there will always be mean girls.
Well, I have a fairly serious bad-friends-trio-centered plot in mind, lots of teen angst, eventual threesome, etc, but if you have anything else you really want to see, I will do my best to include it if I can. (Also if you have good human names for everyone without names, I'd love suggestions.)
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Actually, fairly serious bad-friends-trio-centered plot in mind, lots of teen angst, eventual threesome, etc sounds reeeeeeeeeeeeeeeal good ^^ but I wouldn't mind seeing America/Russia on the sidelines like this ;)
Names for unnamed nations? I only require that Ukraine is Yekaterina "Katyusha" or "Katya" for nick, if she appears. Others, I love all ^^
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I hope we see more of it! I'll keep track of this author!anon!
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I'm curious about Marianne's feelings. Does/will she love somebody?
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My intention was not to reveal if Marianne loves anybody, only that she is really truly loved by Antonio and Gilbert. But you're free to make any other assumptions by the time the fill is finished. (If it's finished.) We'll see!
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