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Russia/America/Canada - Substitutes - 1a/?? anonymous July 4 2011, 00:44:49 UTC
Request:
http://hetalia-kink.livejournal.com/3274.html?thread=3418314#t3418314
Insane!Russia sees the brothers as Toris and Raivis, and proceeds to deal very harsh punishments on them for "rebelling" against him.
Bonus points if he forces them to call themselves by the Baltics' names, maybe throw in some threats to kill both of them if they don't.

WARNINGS: LOTS of violence, torture.
Future parts will contain: non-con, forced incest, violence, torture, etc.
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“Mattie!” The voice broke through the pulsing fog that had engulfed his mind. Distressed and hoarse, it called to Canada. “Wake up! Come on, little bro, you have to wake up.”

“'m older than you.” Canada retorted instinctively. Than he shook his head, trying to clear the cobwebs that wrapped his brain. When America didn't respond as he usually did (some variation of “No you're not.” or “But I was a country first!”), but instead let out a single choked sound, a blend of relief and ( ... )

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Substitutes - 1b/?? anonymous July 4 2011, 00:47:33 UTC
Canada's breath stuck in his throat, as he shrank away from Russia as much as the chains would let him. “Please, we're not-” Canada's desperate protest was cut off as Russia held a hand over his mouth ( ... )

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Substitutes - 1c/?? anonymous July 4 2011, 00:56:15 UTC
“I. Will. Kill. You.” America growled, meeting Russia's eyes with an icy glare before the quietly sobbing Canada drew his attention. “Matt?! I'm right here Matt. I won't let him touch you again. I'll- I'll protect you.” The false bravado in his voice had Russia tilting his head in curiosity, even as his use of Canada's name drew a frown ( ... )

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Re: Substitutes - 1c/?? anonymous July 4 2011, 05:07:33 UTC
0_0



More? please tell me the twins get free

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Re: Substitutes - 1c/?? anonymous July 4 2011, 05:11:36 UTC
Ohmygod..

MATTIE! ALFRED!

Don't worry! I'll be the hero, and I'll save both of you! ;__; Ohgodohgodohgod..

They must get free!

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Re: Substitutes - 1c/?? anonymous July 4 2011, 08:49:17 UTC
Time for France and England to kill a bitch. :D

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Re: Substitutes - 1c/?? anonymous July 4 2011, 22:43:42 UTC
Oh boy howdy this is hot so far, although I prefer America torture over Canada.

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Re: Substitutes - 1c/?? anonymous July 5 2011, 06:34:14 UTC
Don't worry I like my favorite twin tortured too (America in my case ^^;)

I do hope to see more. And I don't think Canada was to much of a wimp! He sacrificed himself to save his brother afterall.

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Re: Substitutes - 1c/?? anonymous July 6 2011, 19:04:01 UTC
I was expecting Russia to see Canada as Latvia, but upon getting to the end of the chapter, it makes since that he's seen as Liet. I'm shaking. More!

I'm also mean to characters I like. >_>;;

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Re: Substitutes - 1c/?? anonymous July 8 2011, 05:37:21 UTC
Eeeee poor Canada ;~; And yet...this type of fic is exactly what I've wanted for awhile. I should feel bad, but I really don't.

But, in response to your concerns, I seriously don't think you made Canada that wimpy at all. I was actually really impressed with how you'd characterized him! Alot of the fandom gives him a very weak nature in these fanfiction, but you didn't at all.

I really hope you continue to update this! It is really good so far!

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Russia/America/Canada - Substitutes - 2a/?? anonymous January 2 2012, 12:55:54 UTC
This took way longer than I expected it too. Sorry about that.
WARNINGS: Non-con, forced incest, violence, and torture.
Those who wanted America-torture should be happy about this part.“Stop it!” America's voice was hoarse from shouting. “Stop it, Russia! You're killing him! Please!” America sagged in his chains, his throat catching as he watched Canada gasping for air with shallow, uneven breaths, his body twitching with each carefully applied stroke of the lash. “Please, please, please. . . no more. No more, please, Russia. Please ( ... )

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Substitutes - 2b/?? anonymous January 2 2012, 12:57:42 UTC
“No, little Latvi. This-” Russia squeezed America's shoulder with one hand, smiling as America fought the urge to cry out in pain; and waving towards Canada with the other. “-is what happens to liars and people who think to make me look a fool. Now we must teach you not to run off like you did ( ... )

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Substitutes - 2c/?? anonymous January 2 2012, 12:58:51 UTC
Canada lifted his arm as if to reach out and touch America, but his strength failed quickly, and he had barely raised it off the ground before the weight of the shackles pulled it back down. “I. . . I know,” he breathed out, eyes shining in a way that seemed to say I know how strong you are, but I will never stand by and let -anyone- hurt you if I can help it.“No. . .” America pulled away, squeezing his eyes shut with his hands over them, trying desperately to block out the guilt and self-loathing that formed in his gut at the look in Canada's eyes. “No. . . please. I can't do this,” he sobbed. “I can't- I just . .” Moving his hands, he looked up to Russia with teary eyes. “Please, Russia. Please don't make me hurt him. Just leave him be. Please ( ... )

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Substitutes - 2d/?? anonymous January 2 2012, 13:00:51 UTC
He couldn't bear to think, to allow himself even a moment to realize what he was doing. He heard the words, thick with hungry lust, telling him to stroke himself. He felt his arms move, felt the way his cock began to rise as he squeezed it and moved his hand up and down. But he wasn't there, not really. He was in the words that rang like bells in his head long after the footsteps had ceased ( ... )

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Re: Substitutes - 2d/?? anonymous January 2 2012, 23:35:57 UTC
.... I am so filled with emotions I just cannot.. Cannot even coherent sentence.

So.. so enraged. I just.. Goddammit, somebody set them free.

Fuck..

Oh Aflred. Oh Mattie.

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Re: Substitutes - 2d/?? anonymous January 3 2012, 03:12:07 UTC
Oh my god.

This is so good, yet so painful. (Does that even make sense? Hopefully it does.)

I really cannot wait for the next part.

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