Re: Do You Have a Flag? [Part 2a]
anonymous
July 9 2011, 12:32:53 UTC
Okay, so maybe, in retrospect, he’d been known to be a bit of an idiot. Obtuse? Oblivious? Rude? Something else out of the English Dictionary? Admittedly, this was pretty impressively idiotic. Alfred freely admitted that fact, but really, this was too much. Anybody could have made that mistake, he just didn’t see why he wasn’t getting at least a little niceness. After Japan had packed a punch years ago, he’d had some sympathy at least. Really, this was such a small matter. Rude? Well maybe, but not that rude! The point was that it was no justification for England’s quirked (and impressively quirked, at that) eyebrow, and the indifferent line of his mouth
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Re: Do You Have a Flag? [Part 2b]
anonymous
July 9 2011, 12:34:09 UTC
Arthur sighed, made a mental note that were he still in charge, he would certainly ban America from the internet. “Pip supplied the splint I used on your arm
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Re: Do You Have a Flag? [Part 3a]
anonymous
July 9 2011, 23:44:07 UTC
“Will you drop the matter, Alfred?” England snapped irritably, yanking on the door of his house, and letting it swing open as the American trailed after him into the house, (“Shut the ruddy door; I didn’t raise you in a barn.”) obviously distressed. England tossed a heap of files to a chiffonier, and continued on his way, trying to evade America’s skittery footfalls
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Re: Do You Have a Flag? [Part 3b]
anonymous
July 9 2011, 23:45:18 UTC
With careful, and unwavering precision, America undid England’s tie from his arm, drew the splint away, and tossed both tie and splint to the side. Arthur watched the stick clatter and bounce across the floorboards, distracting himself with remembering what trees, what stain, what grain, and America pulled England’s crumpled jacket away from his arm, coolly tossing it after the tie. Arthur haplessly stuttered a nonsensical phrase, before clearing his throat. “Everything has its place Alfred, including my clothes
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Re: Do You Have a Flag? [Part 3b]
anonymous
July 13 2011, 12:52:42 UTC
The style of writing is...amusing. I'm trying to get used to the 'run off the mill' conversational sentences. And Alfred is damn full of himself eh
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Re: Do You Have a Flag? [Part 4b]
anonymous
July 13 2011, 01:37:18 UTC
“I know! I thought he trusted me-m-miii…meh? Huh? Other woman? What?!” America crashed to his feet, tried to step back, and instead tripped into the back of the couch, and promptly was sent head over heels down the back of the couch to finally splutter on the other side of it, on the floor, in an untidy heap. “Oof?” He looked up at the blurry shape of England who was standing over him, arms crossed across his chest. Alfred blinked, and gently pushed his glasses back into position
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Re: Do You Have a Flag? [Part 5b]
anonymous
July 13 2011, 08:34:11 UTC
A very long day, but regardless of the state of the brothers’ relationships with one another, it wasn’t long before Wales, Ireland, and Scotland were bundled at the front of Arthur’s house, and stomping in, bearing gifts of alcohol. It came as only partially surprising when Ruairi stepped on England. England lashed out, kicking at Ireland. “Fuckin’ tw’t!” He roared, before flopping back into a puddle of nation
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Re: Do You Have a Flag? [Part 5c]
anonymous
July 13 2011, 19:06:33 UTC
I really liked this update! And yes, I do know there's more below. I wanted to say that I'm happy to see an semi-normal relationship between the UK brothers. It's nice and refreshing.
One thing, if I may? I think the phonetic accents can be a bit confusing sometimes. I hope I haven't offend you.
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Is the title an Ediie Izzard reference? Because if it is, well, awesome.
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please continue!
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One thing, if I may? I think the phonetic accents can be a bit confusing sometimes. I hope I haven't offend you.
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